A lot of mixed feelings on this one.
I was looking forward to this a lot -- similar to how I was vibrating for the release of She Who Became the Sun. I loved the premise, the packaging, and the lovely illustrations. I didn't grow up with the RoTK, but I as someone who reads a lot about China, and watches a good deal of c-drama, I had certain expectations about the mix of things that a reimagining of the classic could be. By the end of the book -- which I read over a couple of days, so even my huffing and puffing about unescapable 1st person POV of a YA book didn't slow me down much -- I was in knots because the book was yanking my chain in too many directions at once. Despite having a strategist for a protagonist, a Nirvana in Fire it isn't.
The storys starts off pretty strongly, establishing the setting and the warring factions well, and the protagonist's character is sketched boldly and regonizably, a tribute to the archetype: cunning, sarcasting, arrogant, physically frail and running on the fumes of neuroses and delusions of grandeur. Aptly called Peacock by some, Zephyr carries the first half of the book in line with the expectations of the trope: desperate last-minute plans, ambitious stakes, moral compromises. My grumbling, at this state, was mostly about what I feel is dumbing down the scheming for the target audience: too much signalling ahead (seriously, NOTHING was subtle about the hundred thousand arrows plan), too much regurgitation of information and proclamations. But it was fine enough to read -- to be honest, this was probably an okay compromise in terms of accessibility to the audience who doesn't spend too much of their life inhaling multi-episode historical dramas full of convoluted plots. I'm fine, this is fine. It's fine. Shoehorned romances are also fine. FINE, whatever, I could put up with them as the YA trappings.
Come midway point though, I felt like the narrative train jumped off its railed and decided to start being a hovercraft instead, shooting lasers and tumbling headfast into strange directions. Pew pew!
With SPOILERS from here on.
I felt the god realm intermission, and the whole subplot of '"oh no I've been a god all along but i have developed feeligns for this mortal war, gotta go thanksbyeee" was DEEPLy unnecessary. Like, I do object to sticking Zephyr into Lotus's body for the second half of the story as well, but if the author really wanted to replay Mei Changsu's dramedy of mistaken identities in reverse -- more on that later -- then she didn't need the god subplot to frame it. Literally any other one-off magical mcguffin would have been fine, and less bewildering and undermining of the agency/urgency that drives the heroine, and ultimately, the narrative momentum. Gah. Now it feels like she has all the puzzle pieces for being superpowered beyond salvation, and the only thing that stops her form ascending into the next plane is uh. Lack of competence, actually.
So yes. Long story short, not a fan of this god identity subplot at all. It would have been much more interesting if Zephyr was who she was for the first half of the book, with the limitations and aspirations of a mortal. And without a sparkl fairy god floating above her shoulder, hinting at plot elements to shoehorn them into the 1st person narrative.
Now, the body swapping. LONG SIGH. You know why it worked for Mei Changsu, and doesn't really work here? Because MCS was limited by his own unfeigned frailty, and plagued by the knowledge that he couldn't join the fight on his terms as a warrior, and had to contend with court intrigure -- and because he didn't have to dumb himself down: neither in conduct, nor in consequence. Sticking Zephyr, who was known for her role as a strategist, into shoes of literally the mightest and most unthinking warrior of the army, and then fumble one thing after another: barely remembering to impersonate, forgetting how to scheme, doing a bad job of utilizing assets of her new body... That doesn't give her much credibility as a strategist, you know. BUT! Kick out the godhood, and there is so much you can do with this bodyswap: let Zephyr wake up to that change, scheme to make the most of it without knowing how she got there, let her utilize her brain to further her agenda with new variables! There were flashes of that story in that second half -- but only flashes, unfortunately. And when I'm given a hint of what I was looking for but ultimately don't get, I tend to be more disappointed than if I simply didn't care for the book.
The way it's working out, I end up wishing the book was told from the pespective of the mortal frenemies instead: Crow the adversary, who brings an interesting backstory in addition to the shoehorned het, Cicada, Ku the sister who is unforgiving of the separation with her sister, OG Qilin. And yet.
Thanks to #Netgalley for an advanced copy of #StriketheZither. Happy to see more books that talk to the Chinese culture and narratives, examining it from a modern lense, but I didn't like this attempt as much as I would have hoped to.