*Major Spoilers Ahead*
Diving In, by Kate Cann marks the beginning of a trilogy revolved around a sixteen year old girl named Colette and her beginning challenges of a romance that blossomed at her local swimming pool. She was raised by a headstrong mother that could, by some perspectives, be described as a “man hater” due to her strong feminism beliefs. When Colette’s mother was introduced, I initially believed that the upcoming message of this trilogy would be the importance of feminism, or at least the importance of the respect all women should recieve. However, in my opinion, it took longer than needed to instill that sense of “natural right” to the main character Colette.
When Colette meets Art, the boy she developed a crush on during her after school swimming sessions, it seems to be love at first sight. She turns her back on the words her mother's embedded within her mind and chose to pursue this boy, despite never meeting him. Personally, I don't mind a “love at first sight” plot at all! After all, the reason I chose this book was because I love romance novels and was excited to read about the contrast between pursuing romance with a boy and upholding strong feminism beliefs. Right off the bat, while reading the beginning sections, I understood why Colette was reluctant to follow in her mother's footsteps especially since her mothers beliefs were close to being “man-hating”. However, I believe the problem began to coil when Colette and Art began to talk and spark interest within one another. Besides Art being described as good looking, nothing really rang as interesting for him. I didn't think of it too much because it was only the beginning, but it lacked the sense of excitement that usually makes up romance novels. Simply put, his personality was flat and nothing too special came about meeting him. But this was no reason to say the book itself was written poorly, the biggest problem for me was the personalities of the main characters.
Further into the book, I waited for the development of personality and feminism within Colette. Instead, the readers were given the spontaneous relationship of Colette and Art. Their relationship development was near nonexistent and did not uphold the basic foundation to a relationship. Especially seeing that this was a described as the first novel to a love trilogy, I often questioned how this novel could continue on for two more books when there is such rushed development. The relationship itself wasn't intriguing, they often went to bars and Art’s house (where we are introduced to Art’s unideal family life), where Art can now be seen as pushy for physical affection. Art was raised in a huge mansion, where his rich father and stepmother live in as well. His contempt towards his family was extremely visible to the point where Art continued to show his rash side with Colette even when his family wasn't around. A red flag swung right before my eyes despite it being completely invisible to Colette, who brushed it off because of her strong attraction to Art.
Throughout the book, multiple signs of an unhealthy relationship flashed before my eyes. The most prominent being when Art invites Colette to his camping lodge, where he then gets angry at her for not sleeping with him. Colette gets angry in return, which brought me some hope towards the message that had slowly declined from my thoughts throughout the book. I thought, “this is the perfect moment to just end it with him.” and thus, the relationship between Colette and Art was over (Finally!). My favorite part of the book remains the moment when Colette witnesses a girl being harassed by drunk men at the park and she steps up to protect her, with Colette getting injured in the process. This moment held so much emotion because it proved that no matter how much Colette wanted to veer away from her mother’s mindset, the importance that lies within it overpowers her desire to not follow it. I enjoyed the scene so much because as it showed a more powerful side to Collette, it showed a vulnerable side to her mother -- who was always depicted as a headstrong women with strong beliefs. The duality between a human and a mother made this chapter so strong.
What disappointed me the most was the ending. After having a discussion with her mother, Colette decides to rekindle her short lived romance with Art and give him another chance. The strength that Colette gained gives me hope that she knows how to handle a relationship, I just wish it weren't with Art. I felt as if the ending didn't bring much justice to the purpose behind this trilogy, which was to know that you are just as in control of a relationship that your significant other is. I can't imagine the next two books, especially since the ending of the first book seemed so conclusive. Overall, this book was well written, the plot however, never put me to the edge of my seat and often made me frustrated with the choices made by the main character. But, I understand that each reader has their own opinions and may have differing opinions to mine!