Rough around the edges (read: poorly edited), this short story was only 81 pages on my iPad, including title pages, & yet boasted at least ten characters that seemed to come & go like zombies in the night... (Er... *shrug*) Ultimately, this short story had way too many characters, & I felt the ending was rather abrupt. It also seemed to be lacking a purpose, & details within the story often contradicted other details (eg., the zombie is described early on as completely lacking a sense of smell, yet later is able to distinguish the smoke from a campfire, from the smoke from cigarettes). However, despite all this, I found myself quite drawn to the main character - Dave the Zombie - and came to care what happened to him. It is the author's clever characterisation of the zombie - a creature that is, essentially, lacking in character - that saves this story for me: 3 stars.