**Spoilers**
I had mixed feelings about this book.
It made me uncomfortable to say the least.
Mella was stranded on a foreign planet, the Nexan world, due to her horrible monster of a husband wanting to murder
her and inherit her money.
Due to the circumstances, Mella is hungry, dirty, alone and without a cent to her name.
This causes her to make the biggest mistake of her life, to rob someone for money for a safe passage Home to Earth.
Dain is her chosen victim and the story goes Down Hill from there.
She is caught, imprisoned, humiliated, and then auctioned off as a sex slave.
Dain bids on her and takes her home as a sex slave.
I find it Horrible that a person would be forced to be a sex slave for stealing.
That is a case of the punishment definitely NOT fitting the crime.
Mella doesn't trust Dain and with good reason.
Her husband has several law men in his pocket
and she doesn't know if Dian is a part of it or not.
She is alone, barely survived her husband's attack on her,
why should she trust anyone,
especially someone in law enforcement, and especially Dain who has done nothing to warrant that Trust ???
I was interested in Dain's character in the Beginning of the story but soon came to Resent him.
I will list three reasons why I did NOT like Dain and did Not want Mella to stay with him by the end of the book.
I felt at the end, that Mella should have returned to Earth...
1.)
He whipped her for trying to escape and he had the nerve to pull the
"it hurts me more than you" crap..
Please stop with the Dramatics, he whipped her and it hurt her way more:
“After your first escape attempt, I could have caned you until my arm wouldn't rise. I could have whipped you all night, as long as I didn't break the skin.”
He was furious.
“Mella.” He cupped her cheek in one hand. “You will receive ten strikes with a cane.”
Dain is supposed to be this Honor Bound law man, but as soon as he gets her alone he is having his way with her. He doesn't even try to help her out in any way nor does he try, just talking with her in the beginning to question her circumstances.
It was more like, No, We must establish our master / sexual slave relationship first !
2.)
When she tries her second attempt to escape, because, who wants to be a slave?
He returns her back to the Indenture Hall to be resold,
not caring that she would be in an even worse situation and having to start all over again with being a slave:
"I'm returning you to the Indenture
Hall. Perhaps your new master will prove more to your liking.”_Dain Chapter 18
Seriously? Dain is such jerk!
3.)
Mella is FORCED to participate in the Starlight Rite.
Because Dain felt bad for beating her, She was given the option to:
“You have two choices. You can be the avatar of Artema tonight—touched by everyone, but taken by only one. Or you can be a guest and
join the regular rites, and every man here will touch and take you. Choose.”
Dain knew that she did not ask to attend the Rite because she wanted to participate, he knew that was only and excuse to escape and yet he forced her to participate:
"And neither did the realization that she’d conned him into coming to this Party just so she could escape. His mouth tasted bitter as he used the comunit to call the Indenture Hall." _Chapter 15
I can Not believe he referred to the Starlight Rite as a "Party".
I thought Parties were Voluntary, however, the author basically stated that the Starlight Rite was Mandatory and even went as far as to say if a person didn't participate, they would be cursed by the goddess and gods:
"Cernun—it was his LastDay—removed the man’s ability to procreate for an entire year."
“I've also heard of a woman who lost the capacity to enjoy shulin.”
- Gee, what a way to Manipulate people...
So, Mella chose Goddess, was then tied up, accosted and fondled by numerous men for hours against her will.
The whole time Dain watched from the bar and he was aroused:
"Dain held his hands out, he'd already been hard all evening from watching Mella being pleasured.
He'd wanted her then; he still wanted her"
"Sitting at the drink table, Dain watched the little thief be roused and then satisfied, again and again. With the lighting focused on the stage,
he could see her every expression. Satisfaction, yes, but
humiliation and anger also."
Those are the reasons why I do NOT like Dain.
It takes him forever to get a frickin CLUE when
All of the Signs were right in front of him about who Mella was..
He should have put it together sooner:
"Much of the fear had disappeared from her eyes over the past few days. Not all, though. His mouth tightened as he remembered the terror that flashed across her face at times. No woman should be afraid,
not even a thieving one. Although he had to admit, a woman stranded on an unfamiliar planet might have more reason to fear than most."
He was looking for a Earth woman who was "supposedly" killed.
- An Earth Woman tries to rob him for money.
And, this was AFTER he stated that his planet did not get many people from Earth.
Duh Dain, just... frickin Duh !
Dain was just.. too slow and too stupid for someone having twenty years in law enforcement.
The Reader kept being Told that Dain had so much Honor but
I didn't see it at all in his inner dialogue, deeds and actions.
I also didn't get the full meaning of the Starlight Rite, when it was explained,
it was a bit vague in certain parts.
I mean, was it only for unmated people?
"Bred? The clanae and Blackwell had used that word also. Surely she misunderstood. “You…breed…for certain things?”
"The clanae leaned forward, resting his forearms on the table. “The Zarain kinline breeds for leaders and warriors. For courage, strength, intelligence, and the ability to command. We select our mates according to those criteria. Only under moonless nights during Starlight Rites are our requirements
relaxed.”
I sent an email to the author and she replied about the Starlight Rite, her response:
"Because the population was so small and because the clans were trying to focus on breeding in certain traits
(which tends to lead to inbreeding),
the Rites are for every single fertile person, mated or not. However,
the planet is no longer isolated. With the influx of new people,
the Rites will undoubtedly change and couples' attendance would be voluntary."_ Cherise Sinclair Feb 2016
I really had an issue with this story.
The book description sounded ok but it fell a bit short.
Dain was upset that Mella tried to escape, who wouldn't?
He seemed to want her to care for him but he did not act caring towards her.
I mean he bid on her at the slave auction when he did not have to but..
no one forced him to bid.
And, at the end of the story he asked Mella to "marry" him,
But what does that mean to Him ???
Marriage is an earth term and he is not from Earth..
And, would he force her to participate in the Starlight Rite AGAIN the next time even if they are married ?
Dain's behavior throughout the novel was disappointing and something just did not sit right with me about this story line.
I'm just glad that this book did not have a sequel.
I will try other books by this author to see if her style is for me.