I started reading the book this morning, and was done with it in less than four hours. I'm a college student with a busy schedule, but I didn't want to put the book down.
Now, the book is not without flaws (no creative work, written or otherwise, is), and I will outline what I felt could have used a little more polish, but in my opinion, it wasn't enough to detract from the story line, or from the rating. As a reader, I try my best to ignore the writer inside, and the reader in me enjoyed the book for what it was, and that's what the reader feels matters when it comes to the star rating.
What I enjoyed the most were the characters. They felt, for the most part, real, which is more than can be said for a lot of characters in other novels in this genre. Their personalities had weight to them, and most of them were unique and had their own flavor.
What I felt needed work, or could have been changed a little, was the way the poetry was handled. Considering the author was technically the one who wrote all the poetry, I found it a bit hard to take when most of the characters in the novel praised it.. :P
I felt that the reason Will was in foster care could have been different. Yes, car wrecks do happen, and that's terrible, but in YA novels they almost all happen in the same way and at the same age, and author's should be more original about it when going for a tragic history kind of thing, I think.
I didn't find the killer unbelievable, but I felt like there should have been a bit more build up to it. Things just sort of fell into place toward the end, and I found myself flipping back about a hundred or so pages to reread a section that was relevant to Will's death to see if it even added up.
See, readers know from the get go that Will is going to be murdered, so when the time pops up where it's going to happen, it's pretty obvious to the reader, and because of that, I feel like more care should have been given to that particular scene regarding how much time had passed. Later in the novel police conjecture that the killer would have spent quite a bit of time with the body, but looking back at the relevant scene, it doesn't seem like quite that much time had passed after all.
Also, I would have liked it if Will weren't connected to all the other kids who had been killed. I would have preferred it actually if it had come as more of a surprise in general. I think I just wish it hadn't been a journey of "okay, when is it going to happen" and had been more of a surprise or a shock.
It did bring tears to my eyes though, which I feel is a job well done on the author's part.