i'm not a huge fan of martin's but since ive read the other 2 books in the series, i wanted to continue on.
i didn't like the preview to this book in the devil's necklace. and i pictured Danielle as a conniving harlot. so it was weird to have her actually be so different. i love when someone thinks they've been betrayed and they really haven't, though. so i was interested in reading this.
i really didn't like how they portrayed Rafael's fiancé in the preview. They’re making shy people out to be stupid. about her trembling hand, about how Raphael completely dwarfed her.
He walks away without responding to her.
This book is a cross between Again the Magic by lisa kleypas, and Almost Heaven by Judith mcnaught.
I didn’t like their first meeting, and that after 5 years, and their first meeting, he would question if she was telling the truth. I thought that would happen way later in the book.
You’re engaged and you went to a whore house? WTH! &im sick of hearing of cord and ethan’s past. We get it, they were hound dogs, now lets drop it.
Him and his friends all go to whore houses, and yet he talks of artie with disdain because he goes too, drinks, and gambles. You do all of the above, also.
This is happening wayyyy too soon! Why would the author write it this way? im thoroughly disappointed.
You’re a grown man. Of an impressive height and build. You confront a man who lied to you. And you slap his face with your gloves? punch his lights out!
Just like that, oliver tells rafe why he did it.
I understand the duel, but I cant believe he shot him and he wont be able to walk again. &”he felt no remorse.”
Im just not getting that sense of tragedy and lost time between the characters like I did in Almost Heaven. So, no, I don’t think the duel was right at all.
&he thinks his father would agree. Idk if he was trying to make himself feel good, but crippling someone is extreme.
“business always came first. At times it seemed to consume him.”
“Richard seemed so concerned w/her background.”
“Duke, meet Richard Clemmons.”
“my daughter is completely intimidated by you, and particularly frightened of sharing a bed with you.” Eww! You’re talking about your daughter. Did you guys discuss that together?
Great. His children are hellions. Of course it would work out this way. suddenly, Richard is actually a bad man. Which just sets things up perfectly.
Calling a gun a “piece” is so modern.
Even more convenient-richard has a mistress and plans to cheat on Danielle.
&stupid rafe would have cheated on mary rose. And admits it like there’s nothing in the world wrong with it.
“I was afraid you might not come.” She wouldn’t have, if he had really given her a choice.’ You could have simply not gone.
We don’t care about caroline. Why does she have her narrative in here?! I get they’re friends and that’s great, but shes a servant and they make her sound just like a lady.
Im surprised she gave in so easily. I get breaking your engagement to Richard off, but you don’t have to marry rafe.
And if you know he needs children-and you do. Every noble guy does-then you need to tell him you cant have them.
He hasn’t come to terms with the fact that she’s innocent in a good way. it happened suddenly. He hated her. Then suddenly felt bed. And is back to teasing her like nothing was wrong.
I HATE “at least being married to you will not be dull.” That’s so overdone.
You’ve called him Rafael from the start, even though you hated him. and yet on your wedding day, you call him Your Grace.
Caro was going to steal the necklace! Oh geez. You freakin gave her the necklace? Wth is wrong with you? When an author writes this crap, do they seriously think we agree?
‘before he’d met Danielle, he had slept with very few women. On his 18th bday, his best friend, cord Easton, had gifted him with a night at madame fontaneau’s house of pleasure. A few months l8r, he had taken a mistress, then later kept company with a countess whose husband suffered a failing memory.’
‘he had slept with countless women. From opera singers to the most sought-after courtesans, rafe knew the power of seduction.’
WE DON’T CARE.
‘undressed her with expert skill. She wondered how many times he had accomplished the task.’
I don’t understand in books where the guy betrayed the girls trust or hurt her deeply, he, instead of being humble and apologetic, decides to be demanding and persistent. You betrayed her. You didn’t believe her. You should be winning back her trust and feelings, not demanding things of her and acting like a jackass.
Im confused about the whole Robert accused of murder thing, but I skim and scan when they talk about him, so that’s most likely why. But I find it highly convenient that he’s become an earl.
You all of a sudden throw out an “a’tall” over 200 pgs in the book.
Omg. Im sick of caro moaning about Robert.
“I wish I could be a fly on the wall.” How modern!
You wish she had confided in you and trusted you about the necklace. But you didn’t trust her 5years ago. He really is stupid.
“into high gear.”
I cant believe his mother is that nosy and desperate for grandchildren that she would bring it up to Danielle.
She completely skipped over the stargazing thing.
Omg. Even more like Almost Heaven-they turn the ballroom into a conservatory/garden.
I hate when characters keep on saying the same thing-I should tell him about being barren, but never does.
We had to wait til he found out if she was innocent 5 yrs ago. And now we had to wait about the necklace. She should have ben honest there, too.
Things are so familiar, I feel like ive read this book before. because the author has ripped off other books. He makes her promise not to lie to him, but of course, she wont tell him about being barren.
Very convenient that caro is actually a gently bred woman. So she can end up with an earl.
I get Rafael is supposedly a caring person(which was surprising) but calling caro sweeting is taking it too far. You call your wife that. And you’ve never really bonded with caro before.
How can you keep repeating, chapter after chapter, how worried you are about rafe finding out you’re barren. FREAKIN SPIT IT OUT ALREADY. Wouldn’t you have rather told him before you started caring for him, rather than when you did? If he rejected you then, it wouldn’t hurt so much.
Everyone in this book is handsome. Rafe is handsome. Cord is handsome. Ethan is handsome. Artie is handsome. Robert is handsome. Even the doctor is handsome!
“helluva.” Really?
“he had promised himself he would take his ease with another woman, that it no longer mattered that he cleave only to her, since there would be no children from their union.” You *******! You said you’d never cheat on her. And now you find out you cant have kids, so you plan to get with someone else.
“I am no longer ill, Rafael…except with wanting you.” How corny and stupid.
How can a woman that’s supposed to be full of fire and fight, be so timid and stupid? get a backbone! She’s worrying why rafe is mad. And why he keeps staying away. &thinks he’s mad about how she acted in bed.
She skips things we want to hear, like the stargazing. And yet goes into agonizing detail every time Danielle gets dressed. She gets a message to meet rafe in the state room or w/e, and has to show the note to caro and go change. Find the right dress, put the necklace on. FAST FORWARD, I BEG YOU.
Of course rafe suddenly decides it doesn’t matter that they cant have kids.
And of course the carriage accident was on purpose.
I cant believe she actually thought rafe or his mom would try to kill her just because she cant have kids. Do I laugh? Do I throw the book across the room?
“iron this out.”
“I have no will where you are concerned, when the sight of your sweet body so heats my blood.” Gag.
“zeroed in.” wow, that doesn’t sound modern.
I hated how the ending was so rushed. This book was more about Robert and caro than the main characters. I wanted to hear more about their first meeting, and how exactly rafe was affected after he thought she betrayed him. they didn’t really talk about the past like they should have. & I got so sick of caro &Robert I wanted to scream. Im sure it was supposed to be romantic when hes professing his undying love and getting down on bended knee, but it was syrupy and corny to me. I wasn’t feeling it at all. And I was sick of caro &danielle’s little chats. I heaved a sigh every time caro entered the room and rolled my eyes when they always talked of Robert. BORING. And highly repetitive.
Of course she gets taken when she goes to the carriage. And her waking up after being shot was highly miraculous. &totally stupid. that happened way too close to the end, too.
I KNEW she would end up adopting those kids and then being able to have a baby. How freakin unrealistic. Idk why authors put problems in the way, then they’re going to be solved so easily. and so unrealistically.
The ending could have been a lot better. Kat Martin is an okay writer, but shes not funny.