3.5 - 4 stars
I felt like with this book in particular when it was good, it was really good, and what I was looking for especially in a Diana Palmer book, but there were things in this book that wasn’t so good and when that happened it kind of turned me off and I had to skim through it because I just couldn’t take it and just plowed through just to get through it. I wanted to get to the good stuff and less of what I felt was very unnecessary and dragged out stuff.
My big problem, and sometimes this happens in some Diana Palmer books, was the fact that there was so much focus taken off the main couple Amanda and Joshua and their romance. There needed to be more of their romance on display and played out on the pages than there actually was because that was the part I enjoyed the most. Their romance. That should have been the crux of the story, and it wasn’t. In fact there were on the pages less than I was expecting, and I really wasn’t digging it especially when the stuff that came in was really unnecessary.
For instance, the whole drama with the newspaper. I honestly care for it. Yes, it was part of the complications between Amanda and Joshua and yes, it caused problems for her, but that was essential to the story especially with all the details going in on how a newspaper was run and all the politics there and then two married co-workers were having an affair and there was actually their point of view in there, which I just didn’t need. I wanted the story to be shifted back to Amanda and Joshua. And there were other things too like the gambling problem with Brad, which would have been okay if it was just mentioned or kind clues going on that something wasn’t right, but to have his point of view in their especially when he was with Barbara just was totally unnecessary. What was the point honestly? I didn’t get it unless Barbara came to play a more intricate roll in the story, but she didn’t. So, I didn’t need that either.
The only side plot that I actually enjoyed was the romance between Nelson and Mirri then I felt like I was back in a romance novel finally. They had a very interesting relationship. It was engrossing and I was compelled to keep on reading. In fact they had a really sweet and beautiful romance that was full of passion too. I loved seeing the development there as well as just the intimacy that came into that relationship. And they actually dated, which was nice too. It didn’t affect anything in the grand scheme of the plot, but it was worth it because I got to see them fall in love, which was what I was looking forward. In fact this could have been a separate story all on its own, and I would have enjoyed it very much. That was one of things about this story that was a really good thing and done very well.
With the romance with Amanda and Joshua was good too. I really liked them together as they fought their way to get closer and be together. I did like them together. I liked the sensual scenes that they had together especially the more intimate scenes between them, and not the just love making scenes either, though those were pretty good too, because they were very sweet and tender. There were simple little gestures that really warmed my heart like them holding each other or her kissing forehead. Little stuff like that. I wish there were more moments like that in the story. They just had that connection from really early on and that really translated onto the page. Plus there were some of those really steamy scenes that Diana Palmer is known for. They were about their suppressed passion as well as their suppressed love for each other. It was always there throughout the book, and when they finally came together it was released and so beautifully. That was the strength of this book was their romance.
What disappointed me the most concerning the romance between Joshua and Amanda that despite having the typical Diana Palmer theme that I love and adore, this one had a little different execution for me. Not in a bad way necessarily, but not what I was expecting. I was expecting a lot more angst between them especially because of the setup and I thought they would have more of an uphill battle than they did. Don’t get me wrong they had struggles to get to the happily ever after, but it wasn’t that typical Diana Palmer angst that I adore. It was gut wrenching. I didn’t tear up. My heart didn’t break. I didn’t want to punch Joshua in the face at any time. There wasn’t a lot of groveling or making up for being a jerk. It was just they were together than they were apart and something broke them apart again. It was very surface level separation instead of that gut wrenching one that would consume me like older Diana Palmer books that I have read in the past. Plus I just wanted more exploration of their romance than actually was. I could have dealt with a lot more of them and less of all the nonsense that was going on especially the cheating couple, which I could probably rant on for paragraphs and paragraphs more, but the point being that I wanted to see Amanda and Joshua together in the book than they actually were in fact I felt like the moments they did spend together were few and far between, but then again there were the moments that worthwhile while reading so perhaps I shouldn’t complain.
Overall I expected a little more angst, a little more romance, and a lot less of the other stuff that I felt was totally unnecessary. I think that this story could have done with a shorter format so it could have been streamlined where the entire focus of the story was the romance of Amanda and Joshua. It could have been easily done and a separate book in the shorter format could have been done of Nelson and Mirri’s romance too. Then I think I would have enjoyed it a whole lot more because the romance would be the focus not everything else that I didn’t need. There were way too many points of view that I didn’t need and it kept jumping back and forth, which made it even more distracting and hard to focus on the romance at hand. I just wanted more exploration into the romance than any of the other stuff. So, it was disappointing in that way, but when the romance was the focus that was when the book really shine and when I was into it the most. No skimming for me there. That was what I enjoyed the most of the entire book were the two romances in the story.