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First in the Sundown Pack series

Elise is the daughter of the Beta of her pack, and the promised mate of the next Alpha. Mical is an Omega pack member. One moonlit night, deep in the forest, while in the grip of moonlust, they meet and spend the night together in a frenzy of passion.

Every rule their society lives by tells them their attraction to each other is wrong. The consequences of their mating are far-reaching and could forever change the Sundown Pack.

47 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 1, 2004

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Kit Tunstall

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Kit lives in Idaho with her husband and two sons. She enjoys writing several genres and subgenres. When she started publishing, dinosaurs roamed the earth, and authors had one pen name with their publisher. That was the name you wrote everything under, no matter how dissimilar. Thanks to advances in publishing, it's now easy to have more than one pen name, and many readers have come to expect a certain type of book experience from each author. The "brand," if you will.
Kit's catalog makes it difficult to tell what brand you're getting, so she has "co-authored" each type with a pen name, so you'll know what kind of book to expect.
* Paranormal Romances (including shifters): Kit Fawkes and Kit Tunstall
* Contemporary romance with some steam, but not erotic: Lilly LaRue and Kit Tunstall
* Contemporary romances that are erotic: Kit Kyndall and Kit Tunstall
* Edgier works (including fertile erotic romances, bad boys, and stepbrothers): Kristianna Sawyer and Kit Tunstall
* Science fiction romance: Aurelia Skye and Kit Tunstall.
* Horror and post-apocalyptic: T.K. Reilley and Kit Tunstall.
* Darker erotic romance: R.E. Saxton
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1,824 reviews1,526 followers
July 9, 2012
Story: FAIRLY GOOD
Intimacy Level: SPICY
Enjoyment: FAIRLY GOOD
Length: 926 Kindle

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This was an ok read for me. It wasn't bad and it wasn't great. However, I thought the forbidden love and romance between Elise and Mical sweet and cute. Elise is the daughter of an Alpha leader and promise to another at birth. Elise doesn't want to marry Jared, her soon to be husband and the next Alpha. Mical is an omega, which is considered low on the chain of their pack. Mical has always liked/loved Elise from a far knowing that their relationship will never work. However, a chance meeting that resulted in physical contact has left things complicated between both Elise and Mical.

Again, as I said, the forbidden love aspect of the story was sweet and I actually enjoyed it, other than that, there really isn't much else to the story line. In the end once the forbidden relationship came to light, I remembered thinking, is that it? I mean, there was anger but nothing that made you get excited because I'm expecting Jared to defend and at least try to get back Elise. Like, really Jared, take back your man hood. But it all worked out in the end.

If you are looking for spicy intimacy, along with a cute and sweet budding romance with paranormal thrown in, then I would say go for it. If you are looking for much action and intensity, then you might be left a little disappointed.


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July 15, 2012
I didn't like the way this story was told. I realize that all shifter worlds are different but usually an Omega is revered, not made the lowest of the pack. Elise had a "so what" attitude in the beginning, believing she could love whomever she wanted to - and while that's certainly romantic, it's not the world she lived in and she knew it. I found that to be hard to digest. Mical understood the ramifications as soon as he knew her identity and was smart enough to know nothing good could come of this. And while I know he probably meant well in the beginning, I found his behavior demeaning to HIMSELF. Not going to finish this one.
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July 11, 2012
free on Amazon, 48 pages

First in the Sundown Pack series

Elise is the daughter of the Beta of her pack, and the promised mate of the next Alpha. Mical is an Omega pack member. One moonlit night, deep in the forest, while in the grip of moonlust, they meet and spend the night together in a frenzy of passion.

Every rule their society lives by tells them their attraction to each other is wrong. The consequences of their mating are far-reaching and could forever change the Sundown Pack.
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July 14, 2012
Just okay story about shifters (wolves) who share a forbidden love. Too short to develop much in the way of characters or to learn about this colony of shifters.

A free Kindle read.
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1,490 reviews31 followers
July 11, 2012
Pretty good book about forbidden love. Hope to find out more. Pretty good short novel.
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