In the late 90s and early aughts, Tate transitioned away from the surreal, associative, and half-narrative, half-lyrical poems that he had first made a name for himself with and into his late-career style. This book, and the one before it (Memoir of the Hawk) epitomize that later style: the line breaks seem hardly to matter anymore—these are prose poems, fully, practically flash fiction—and every piece has characters and (more often than not) dialogue. They're still strange and still funny, still decidedly Jim Tate poems, but he's found a new comfort zone to slip into. Emphasis on "comfort zone"—you could well accuse him of being same-y, and some of the pieces here are a little overlong, but when he hits he hits. The little poetic windows into his mundane, absurdist worlds are best read slowly, and just two or three at a time. Return to the City of White Donkeys is like if Russell Edson wrote with the form and length of, say, Kenneth Koch.
For my money, his earlier style is better, but he rarely misses.
BEING PRESENT AT MORE THAN ONE PLACE AT A TIME
I took a step and looked around. No one
was looking, so I took another step. I glanced
at the ground, looked up at the sky. Everything
seemed to be in order, so I took another step,
this one almost a hop. A woman walks up to me
and says, "That was cute." "Thanks," I say,
"watch this," and I leap high into the air.
"That's overdoing things," she says. I hang
my head, ashamed of myself. I stand there for
half an hour, not moving, barely breathing.
A cop comes up and says, "You're loitering."
"I'm not loitering," I say "I'm repositioning
myself. I'm adjusting to the currents."
"My mistake," he says. "You had the appearance
of a loiterer. "It's the fog," I said.
When he was gone, I took a step and looked
around. I could see a vast, golden city on
the horizon. No, it's only the fog, I thought,
and jumped backward, surprising myself.