Brutal and Brittle
I first ran into Thom Jones at Portland Community College, of course not in person, but his short story “I Want to Live!” was assigned for analysis in a creative writing class. I immediately wanted to know more, read more and find out if his greatness prevailed in the rest of his work. So I must admit that I picked up his book with a favorable bias in my pocket. In Cold Snap, Jones’ second collection of short stories, there is a strong voice telling tales where there are often no winners. It is a real gut shot delivered on the page. These stories explore, no, they witness tragic moments and deal with loss and illness in way that could only be summed up as brutal. Yet, even though the collection has some horrific imagery, situations, and predicaments, Jones is able to point out the beauty in it all.
Jones is an excellent story teller, his diction and syntax fluctuate between a doctor telling you how long you have to live and a drunk guy at the bar slapping you on the back and telling you a wild one. Enough already with what I think about him, let’s let him speak for himself. Jones invites us to get a little closer around the fire with his choice in narrative tones, drawing us in with an authentic, personable, conversation-like canter to his sentences. This invitation can be seen in almost all of his opening lines. The opener for “Cold Snap” is a great example: “Son of a bitch, there’s a cold snap and I do this number where I leave all the faucets running…” Syntactically his sentences stay true to human speech patterns, and this gives his stories an edge of realness, a sensual and imagined closeness. This doctor—patient relationship, a culture of trust between reader and narrator, is how Jones breaks the bad news to us. It is the only way we get through what he is about to tell us.
And what Jones is about to tell us, is suddenly beautiful, suddenly terrifying and inescapably permanent. He handles his dramatic moments, those pivot points where nothing will ever be the same, with grace as he allows them to just be what they are. Brutal. Eye-opening. Jones presents these impactful elements with a casual, unobstructed demeanor. At the mid-point in the story “Cold Snap” we are privy to a flash back about the sister to the POV character, “I remember hearing the gun pop and how she came into my room (I was home from college for the summer) and said, “Richard, I just shot myself, how come I’m not dead?” And there it is, just laid out there like it is perfectly normal. No lace or frilly language inflicting meaning on it, just the cold facts. Jones does dig deeper into the experiences once they are presented. Just not as he is presenting them. The following line shows us the other side of such a tragedy, “Her voice was calm instead of the usual fingernails-on-the-chalkboard voice, the when-she-was-crazy (which was almost always) voice, and I realized later that she was instantly cured, the very moment the bullet zipped through her brain.” Jones cares about his readers; he takes them to the depths of hell, but brings plenty of water and flashlights. Just when a moment is getting too intense, he pulls back and offers the reader a rest stop of alternative meanings and outcomes from said events.
Jones maintains his gentleness as he works with a troubled relationship between a father and a son in “Superman, My Son” and the decaying illness of a lonely old woman in “I Need a Man to Love Me.” In the latter, his ample and crisp descriptions show us suffering under a microscope. In this story, a woman has lived with illness and in solitude for the greater portion of her life. Jones delivers her state to us in chilling details about her brittle hands. And yet slips in humor and irony and perspective to offset the brutality once again, “The right hand was a little stronger. Not a lot, but it was her bread-and-butter hand. As the years passed it also got weaker. She wasn’t Stephen Hawking yet, or like that guy with the left foot, Christy Brown, but close.” Time and time again Thom Jones manages to take us right up to the edge of brutality and demand we see the beauty in it. He pulls this off by modulating between the intense and the funny.
I recommend to anyone thinking of writing short stories to study this man for his skills. Jones captures the essence of complexity and isn’t shy of the grotesque truths about life. He leads us towards a place where all life, whether it is traumatic or severe, enlightening or hopeless, bleak and isolated, is somehow still vibrant with meaning and purpose. I hope we can all learn a little about grace from this amazing author.