In the world of the Talent Chronicles, kids with supernatural abilities, Talents, are taken away to government-run research facilities from which they do not return. In this sequel to HUSH MONEY, all Joss wants is to be left alone with Dylan. But as more Talents are imprisoned by the government, everyone's looking for a leader. Some look to Joss, some to her worst enemy, Marco, whose new criminal plan threatens Joss's family and friends. Joss wants to stand up to Marco, but Dylan's protective instincts are putting him in harm's way. As the stakes get higher, can Joss find a way to embrace both the boy and her hero within?
Heroes 'Til Curfew contains strong language, violence, and some sensuality. Recommended for mature teens and up.
I’ve got a thing for love stories and superheroes. I’m working on something I call the Talent Chronicles. This series began with my desire for more superheroes! More romance! More Superhero!Romance.
Talents are people born with supernatural abilities, trying to find their way in a world that fears and wants to control them. I like to explore how the things that make us different from each other sometimes make life difficult, and sometimes are the making of us. These stories are for people who love Buffy, wanted more romance in Heroes, and thought Wonder Woman and Steve Trevor should have worked things out.
In this much anticipated sequel to Bischoff's Hush Money we finally get exactly what we've been waiting for--MOAR JOSS AND DYLAN! The whole he likes me, he likes me not finally comes to fruition against a backdrop of more evil plotting by Marco, which makes him a villain you more than love to hate--you want to destroy. If you thought he was awful in Hush Money, you ain't seen nothin' yet. Bischoff unwaveringly ups the stakes for all the Talents in Fairview who all want to mobilize--and want Joss to lead them. As I read this book I laughed, I cried, and I changed my mind about fifty times about what kind of Talent *I* want because she kept introducing new cool ones. This is a must read for fans of superhero romance.
After years, I picked up the first book again. I still feel the same way about the first book. I really liked it.
As for this, I feel like I was just reading a chapter of the book. There was not climax or anything. And everything seems to play out well. I love the plot, different Talents etc. It's like the anime Alice Academy. But I think it was rushed. Some parts of the book, I couldn't comprehend very well. A scene takes too much adjectives. A writer should show. Not tell.
As for Joss, she changed. Yet, she didn't grow. As for her friends, it's weird for them to seek her leadership. And actually pushing it like it was her destiny or something. She clearly isn't leader material. Sure. She knows things but she's not a people person. She was just bossing people around and people just like it.
As for the end of the book, it left me asking myself, WHAT THAT'S IT? Everything played itself out.
Wow. Susan Bischoff has somehow managed to surpass the awesomeness of Hush Money with book two, Heroes Til Curfew. Talk about gripping! The suspense in book two is off the charts and I found myself racing through the action (so much action, I was in action heaven!) to make sure my favourite characters were going to make it out all right. The sequel is a lot darker, with grim themes, which I LOVED, and plenty of plot twists. It was wonderful to be back inside Joss and Dylan's heads - they're such likeable and relatable characters and the chemistry between them is sizzling hot(fan myself). It was also fantastic to get a look inside villain, Marco's, head - he's truly, authentically, messed up and he makes an exceptionally disturbing villain. Love it! Ahhh I can't say enough how amazing this book is. Love the Talent Chronicles, can't wait for more!
What would you get if all the mutants from the X-Men (both hero's and villians) were teenagers, needed to keep their abilities on the DL or else be taken away by the government and placed in a special school, and did not have the guidance of a Professor Xavier or Magneto? Come on... you don't know the answer? You would get Susan Bischoff's "Talent Chronicles."
Being a huge fan of super hero's, I went into this series knowing that I would like it. However, I more than just like the series, I LOVE IT! Hush Money, which is the first book in the series, was completely awesome. But, Hero's 'Til Curfew surpassed "awesome" and is in a league all by itself. Joss and Dylan are probably the sweetest couple on the face of the earth... I'm talking better than Edward and Bella because Joss and Dylan seem so real, so believable, that it is hard to fathom that these characters are actually NOT living somewhere on the planet, hiding from the governmant and fighting the bad Talents (that is what people with abilities are referred to in this series). Honestly, I couldn't stop smiling at every Joss/Dylan scene.
I am not the best reviewer. Hell, I'm not a reviewer at all, but this series deserves praise! If you guys haven't read Hush Money, you need to! It is only .99 cents! Ms. Bischoff is being robbed because her books are worth SO much more! Also, you can get Impulse Control (Talent Chronicles 0.5) for FREE! It is a short story about Talents who have been caught by the government and placed in the state school. It gives you a special look at what can happen to Joss, Dylan, and the rest of the Talents should their abilities be brought to light.
P.S. Susan! Please tell me that you are writing more about Joss and Dylan. I noticed that "Hero's 'Til Curfew" ended without any loose ends... Well, maybe not, since I still want to know what is up with Joss's dad and WHO he use to be :)
Ok so I still can not get over this book! It was so well written and extremely enjoyable that I am most likely going to read it again!!! We definately get to see more of Joss and Dylan together, they finally put aside all their uncertainties and become the couple we all wanted them to be!! They even have a few steamy intimate scenes (definately PG-13) :) I like how in this one we also get to read Marco's point of view a few times because in the first one I found myself wondering why Marco became such an ass and wondered if there could be a possible change of heart from him, this book sets it straight!!! Must say that there is a pretty sick scene where he goes a little too far with Joss and I will not repeat the string of profanities that flew out of my mouth! We learn more about Joss' relationship with her father as their trust in each other is tested. We finally meet Dylan's mom and fortunately from Joss' point of view so let me tell you how hysterical that scene was!! We also find out that someone close to all of them is working for the NIAC, that was a nice little twist!! We find out that there are more Talents out there and you won't believe what they are capable of!!! This story shows each character grow into their Talent and embrace their destinies as they band together to defeat Marco and his crew for good! All in all this was a great read and I recommend it to anyone who is a fan of the movie Push and looking for something in YA other than vampires and fallen angels!!!
This second book in the Talent Chronicles series is significantly longer than the first book, and there is a reason. It is jam packed full of fight scenes -- over and over and over again. It seems like Joss and Dylan can't ever get a break. To be honest, all the fighting got a bit old to read again and again, but it really illustrated just how wacky the world of Talents really is. In a world where the government is actively working to find and eliminate Talents from the population it seems as if it would make the most sense for those who possess Talents to band together to save themselves. Instead, this entire book was one long example of how they are divided against themselves, and as the saying goes: A house divided against itself cannot stand. At the end of the book it may seem as if everything has finally resolved itself, but in reality, while Joss and Dylan and their gang of good Talents were fighting Marco and his gang of bad Talents the traitor in their midst was getting a load of intel about how they were organizing. They have now opened up their world to someone who will use that info to destroy them. There is a lot that still needs to be worked through in the next book of this series.
For now, let me comment on this particular book. First of all, I was glad that Joss and Dylan were finally going to be together, but it was sooo frustrating as a reader to know the inner thoughts of their heads and then see them so reluctant to open up to one another. I could really, really understand Heather's outburst in the final chapter of this book. She said everything I had been thinking as I read this book. Hopefully both Joss and Dylan will take her advice. Once the relationship has been established, I am ready to move on and see them work together to protect the lives of the Talents around them. It is annoying to continually have to re-read about the angst these two feel about opening up in this relationship, but to be fair, Joss and Dylan both are dealing with a lifetime of bizarre upbringings that give them the instinct to behave this way toward one another.
In this book Joss continues her evolution as a leader in this movement to protect the Talents of this school. The first book in the series saw her move out of the protective shell she had placed herself in, but she moved out very reluctantly. In this book her reluctance is evaporating by the minute, but she still struggles with her new role as friend, girlfriend, and leader. I especially liked her thoughts as she stood up to her father and refused to allow him to prevent her from having friends or a life outside her family. He was terrified for her safety and the safety of his family, but Joss realized that if she continued to do as he asked and withdraw from the world around her she would not have any sort of life to enjoy. Her life now definitely brought her more instability and danger, but in this dangerous life she found love and friendship that she could have never found otherwise. Joss finally stands up to her father and demands that she be allowed to have some sort of real life. Isn't that true for all of us? Sure, we could be safe if we isolated ourselves in our homes and refused to interact with the world around us, but would that be any sort of meaningful life?
The switch in narration between Joss and Dylan continues in this book, and I found it less jarring this time around. It was helpful to see both their viewpoints, and it made it abundantly clear just how good they could be for one another. However, in this book Marco got thrown into the mix a few times. I wasn't as happy to have his view thrown in. At first I thought that perhaps it was helpful to see what he was dealing with because it added some dimension to his character. He wasn't just pure evil. But by the end I had to amend that thought. Yes, he really was pure evil. Something obviously had happened to him to just put him over the edge, and I couldn't find any part of his personality to sympathize with. I think that I would have preferred not to have to read his view at all, but it was necessary for a couple of reasons -- We saw how the Syndicate was manipulating things, and we found out exactly who the NIAC plant was in the school. Oh wow! That is not going to end up well. There were times where the group was divulging their plans, and I wanted to scream at them to shut up because they were sharing everything with the enemy. But, like I said, all of the Talents had gotten involved in tearing each other apart, so they (and Joss in particular) were not thinking objectively like they needed to. Can't wait for Book Three to see where this leads.
There were a few times in the book where I got really confused about what I was reading. Was I reading reality or a dream? It never became clear where the dream ended and reality began. If this was Bischoff's intention, it was brilliant. If it wasn't, then it was poor writing. I am going to give her the benefit of a doubt for now and say that it was brilliant. Even the scene where Joss's dad falls apart seemed horribly confusing. What exactly was going on there? I'm still not completely sure what happened. I'm sure I'll figure more out about the past history of Joss's family in future books, and that will help me understand, but for now, it makes no sense who everyone is and how they relate to one another.
I thought that one theme of this book that was really interesting is how far people will go to protect bad people because of love or friendship. Joss's dad had made some horrible decisions in the past. He had been violent and overbearing, and yet his family stood beside him. Marco is a complete psycho, and yet Dylan has difficulty in killing him, even as Marco shows that he has no problem trying to kill Dylan. Even Dylan continues to return to his horrible mother although she demands that he steal for her and constantly berates him with hateful words. All of the characters do this because of the love they have for the others. It makes no logical sense as everyone who is an outsider can see. Dylan doesn't understand Joss's family. Joss can't understand Dylan, and I can't understand any of them. But it is true that we will stand beside those we love, even as they do bad things, simply because we love them. It just is what it is. There is no explaining it.
So, I did enjoy this second book in the Talent Chronicles, and I am excited to continue reading to see what happens. However, this is a pretty intense book in many spots. It seems to be geared to a young adult audience, but it needs to be a pretty mature audience. There is a lot of violence and hatred in this book. There is an attempted rape scene that is pretty intense to have to read. There is a lot of anxiety and despair in this world, but in the midst of all of this I can see the emergence of light and happiness as this group of Talents work together to protect one another from the greater powers that are attempting to destroy them. I'm hoping they figure out the mole in their midst soon and find a way to change the world in which they live for the better.
I'm a bit torn about this book. I enjoyed the first book enough to want to read the second, but I feel a little disappointed. While the story is still interesting, there were a few problems that arose for me as I read.
Problem #1: The internal angst. Don't get me wrong, I remember my teenage years. I REMEMBER the angst that comes with it. I just feel as though the angst between Joss and Dylan was overdone. It seemed as though every other interaction had them both doing the "loves me, loves me not" dance around each other. You would think that it would die down as the characters get to know each other better, but it was still going on on the second to last page of the book. I think that this kind of insecurity in a YA fiction is normal and definitely worth exploring, but not quite to the extent as it's done in this story.
Problem #2: Violence and maturity. While the teenage angst made the main characters seem a little too immature at times, the violence exhibited by the "bad guys" seemed a little too mature and extreme. I understand teenage villains engaging in bullying and vandalism, but Marco and his gang take it even further than most YA villains today. If attempted rape and murder are used purely for shock value, I think it was way overdone.
Problem #3: The Syndicate. I may be forgetting elements of the first novel, but I have no recollection of the Syndicate being mentioned in Hush Money. That said, I find it a little odd that everyone seems to know about this "Talent Mafia" when no one ever mentioned them before. Also, they didn't really seem to play all that vital a role in the story, anyway. They could have very easily been erased from the story without losing anything.
Problem #4: The language. I know, I know, teenagers swear. I just don't think it's necessary to put that much foul language into a novel. In my personal opinion, even a great story can be totally ruined for me if the characters swear a lot. That's not something I would approve of my own children reading someday, so I can't condone it.
Problem #5: Parents are bad. It's a fairly common thread among YA novels that the parents are fairly absent throughout the story. That being said, there are way too many dysfunctional families in this novel, including complete neglect and all-out psychosis. Is it too much to ask for at least ONE main character to have a decent family backstory?
Okay, enough with the bad. Now for some things I LIKED about the book.
#1: Joss is a very complex character. I loved seeing more about her character's development. Hearing about how her father trained her and contributed to her personality (as messed-up as it was), it went a long way toward making the reader understand a hard-to-understand character.
#2: Some very creative Talents. With so much exposure to different super powers (X-men, etc.), it's refreshing to see some new abilities that aren't quite as common. The guy who can manipulate gravity is the best example of this. I also appreciate the different aspects and limitations of Joss' ability.
#3: It kept me reading. As easy as it can be to point out all the flaws of a novel (and I could probably come up with a few more), the truth of the matter is that it kept my attention.
I really enjoyed Hush Money, the first installment in the Talent Chronicles series when I first read it last year. I enjoyed it so much that I re-read it a few days ago. That prompted me to see if a sequel had been released. Lo and Behold, Heroes 'Til Curfew was released August 31st! I can't even describe how excited I was. Ms. Bischoff didn't disappoint.
Think of this book as a sort of mix between The X-Men and Heroes. Children with special abilities (who are referred to as "Talents") are routinely snatched from their families and lives and placed in a government-run facility known only as State School. Everyone knows about State School and rumors abound regarding what goes on there, but no one who's been sent there has ever returned or been heard from since they were taken. It's natural that all the other Talents would keep their abilities to themselves. This becomes increasingly difficult, however, when they begin to realize just what they're able to DO with those talents. Some use their abilities for good, others take a decidedly different route.
This book was even better than the first, jam-packed with so much action, romance, and suspense that I literally could not put it down. The content matured a bit, as well, and some of the romantic scenes between our two main protagonists, Joce and Dylan, might be a bit too steamy for the younger lot, but any girl 16 and up will probably love it. Dylan, in this reader's opinion, is one of the best anti-hero-turned-hero love interests in the history of YA fiction. So many authors try to do the bad boy thing and fail miserably, but Bischoff has managed to blend a pretty effective amount of insecurity, bravado, and sweetness tempered by a little touch of attitude to make even a slightly jaded reader like myself swoon. Dylan's the kind of guy I would have had a crush on in high school, and I'm not into wimps or jerks. He's not perfect, but he's not all bad, either.
Joce is sometimes hard for the reader to connect with, however. While I generally like her, her insecurities sometimes border on the ridiculous. I know this is due to the fact that she was socially isolated for so long, but constantly listening to her inner-monologue regarding all her doubts about herself can get kind of tiring. She has warmed up a little since the first book, however, and is seeming much more human this time around. I think Bischoff is doing a good job taking Joce slowly from the suspicious, distrustful, socially inept loner into someone who's learning she doesn't have to be alone or ashamed of who she is.
These books aren't perfect, but they're not preachy or overly-moralistic, they're fun, engaging, romantic, and funny. I can't wait for the next installment.
After reading Susan Bischoff’s first book, Hush Money, I waited so long for the sequel to come out. When I first started reading Heroes ‘Til Curfew, I thought “Hmm, this is going to be as good as Hush Money”. Then I kept reading. As good as Hush Money was, Heroes ‘Til Curfew was so much better. The author made me feel like I was right there with the characters, through all the action, the emotional scenes, and the suspense. This book was absolutely fantastic! If you buy this book, I promise you will NOT be disappointed. It totally rocks!
Ok that was crazy good but it stinks that there isn’t a release date on the third book. I might actually spontaneously combust if I don’t get a real conclusion. Like what is up with Eric??
A fun, quick, YA short story. It deals with issues confronting teens on a daily basis, like trying to fit in and dealing with bullies, but it wraps it in a fun, superhero story. Well done.
My complete review available September 26, 2011 at Ramblings of an Amateur Writer: http://wp.me/pPz8s-1MO
Where as Hush Money was a suburban fantasy, Heroes’ til Curfew was more of a paranormal romance. An interesting change, which I didn’t expect, but at at the same time, didn’t surprise me, considering the ending of Hush Money.
Heroes ‘Til Curfew started off a bit slower than Hush Money. For a while, I was afraid it’d lack the fast paced action I loved in Hush Money. Reading Hush Money was like sprinting a marathon — all go, go, go! Heroes ‘Til Curfew, on the other hand, started off walking, then picked up to an easy jog with a couple of burst of energy which led to a wee bit of running. For the most part, the pacing was more typical of what I’d expect in a novel, so definitely not a bad thing.
So paranormal romance I say? The romance started off sweet… rather innocent. Cute, I’d say… then it turned intense and hot. At times, it was like being in an adult novel. Good thing? Bad thing? I don’t know. It’s easy to pretend that teenagers don’t have similar feelings as adults… simply because we want them to be sweet and innocent. However, if you’ve spent time in high schools, as I have, you’re likely to come across some hot make-out sessions. Excuse me, young lady, but I believe your need to pull your skirt down and get off his lap.
In this sequel, sex seemed to play a huge role in the plot… not that the characters were having sex, but rather sexual issues weren’t skirted and sex seemed to influence many of the actions (heroes and villains alike). One thing I did notice was Ms. Bischoff truly tried to address the issues of rape in this work. I read quite a bit of criticism on the subject in Hush Money. This time around, I got the impression she wanted to clear up any misconceptions.
Overall, I think Ms. Bischoff made a bold move to go as heavy as she did with the sexual undertone in a young adult novel. Then again, we see it on TV all the time… adults (20-30) playing high school students to get around the rules dealing with minors and sex. Though parents might be a little leery to let their kids read it, I think the story would go over well with high schoolers.
Would I let my daughters read it? If I were a parent who didn’t talk to my kids about sex, I’d say no. But since I do talk to my kids, I don’t see a problem with this work. Quite a few kids start dating in high school. They’re going to experience sexual feelings (emotionally and physically). Beating around the bush isn’t going to change that. Heroes ‘Til Curfew addresses some of those feelings without getting too physical (heavy petting and kissing only). Of course, being the parent I am, I’d end up talking to my daughters once they finished reading it.
The characters: I have to say, this was the cast of thousands. I honestly couldn’t keep up with most of them or their talents. I think it’d be real cool if Ms. Bischoff had an index of the characters and what they could do on her website. That would have been highly helpful while reading. For now, I’ll stick with the big players.
Josh was quite different this time around. She’d grown into her role as leader and advocate. No more hiding in the shadows, waiting for others to get out of the mess they got themselves into. She was a true player. The cautious side was still there — don’t get caught — but she wasn’t afraid to step forward. In Heroes ‘Til Curfew, her flaw was the inability to trust. Would she learn to let others help her?
Dylan… hmmm. He had quite a bit more of a point of view in this work. However, it still seemed mostly Josh’s story. His presence (other than being Josh’s love interest) seemed more to prove his worth to Josh. To show he was more than breakable glass. In truth, that really wasn’t his problem, but rather Josh’s perception of him (her problem). Again, her inability to trust others interfered with her relationships.
And the villain! Marco returns. We actually got an opportunity to spend some time in his head, and I loved it. At one time, I actually thought I understood him, thought he had some redeemable qualities, and he was just misunderstood due to his circumstances. I really rooted for him to have a pivotal moment and come around. Well, I’m not going to ruin the ending… you can read the story to see if he turned good or not.
The only thing I really didn’t like and think slowed the story down was the characters spent way too much time thinking. I’m not sure if it was intentional. Sometimes I thought it was, as side characters would note the contemplative silences. Hey, are you listening to me? Or characters would mentally yell at themselves to stop thinking so much. Personally, I would have preferred a bit of brevity in the internal dialogue area.
All in all, Hereos ’til Curfew was an excellent sequel to Hush Money.
Joss’s life has changed a lot over the past few months. Instead of being alone and paranoid, she has friends and Dylan, an almost-boyfriend, to share her worries with. But that doesn’t mean the danger has gone away. Joss is still a Talent, and her powers threaten to expose her every day. Old enemy Marco is planning something sinister, but there seems to be something else strange and frightening going on as well. As more and more Talents are taken away, Joss begins to wonder if leaving her life of solitude was the right thing to do, knowing now that she could never bring herself to go back to that lonely existence. Suddenly protecting others has become just as important as protecting herself – and Joss is sick of running away and hiding.
Heroes ‘Til Curfew was an excellent new addition to the exciting Talent Chronicles series. It flowed well in a way that made it really easy to read, and I found that time had literally flown by as I was reading it. This book was quite a bit darker than its predecessor, and a lot of serious issues cropped up that really headed the book in a new direction. I really enjoyed diving back into the world of Talents and into the minds of Joss and Dylan. Joss was a character with quite a hard exterior that took a bit of getting used to in the first book, because of the way she’d been brought up. I found that I had a lot more sympathy for her in Heroes ‘Til Curfew, because we discovered a bit more about her past and her relationship with her father, and I could see why she had become the way she was – she never really had any other choice. Despite all of this though, I found she was still quite a likeable character, even though she perhaps treated people a little more harshly than they deserved. I think she was a pretty great heroine and I enjoyed the chapters from her POV because her way of thinking was so different to everyone else’s and it was fascinating to read about. And even though the tone of this book was a lot darker in comparison to the more comedic Hush Money, Joss could still be quite funny and made me laugh a few times (especially when she was thinking about Dylan).
Dylan’s chapters were great as well, and I really loved his character. He was so cute (for a reformed bad boy, anyway), and I loved the way he felt protective over Joss but then felt silly for doing so because he knew how strong she was and that she could probably get by without him. He still tried to help her out whenever he could and it was clear that he really cared about her. He still didn’t get along with Joss’s father and I could sort of understand why – he came from a completely different background and just couldn’t understand why Joss was made to live the way she did. It was sweet how much he worried about her, and I just adored Joss and Dylan when they were together! They had some pretty hot scenes which were awesome to read and some really emotional ones that were equally as good. Their relationship overall was just very well done, and I liked how they didn’t end up together immediately in the first book and that things developed gradually and came together in this one. It made things more realistic, because in life, relationships don’t go smoothly all of the time, and I think Susan Bischoff reflected this in her writing.
Heather, one of Joss’s friends (whose power was mind-reading) was another character I really liked. She was kind and could also be hilarious at times, especially when responding to people’s thoughts! Some of my favourite scenes included her, and I think she was a really good friend and someone Joss really needed in her life. Kat, who I liked in the first book, didn’t stand out for me as much in this one, but I still liked her and was glad Joss had people she could talk to.
One of the most interesting things about Heroes ‘Til Curfew was Marco’s POV. Even though I hated him, I really enjoyed his chapters, because they revealed a lot about him and what went on in his messed up mind. Marco was truly an awful character, and whenever I found myself feeling sorry for him, he just did something despicable to ruin it all. But then again, the series would definitely not be the same without him and his crazy, savage ideas. If you’re ever looking for a villain you’d just love to see completely defeated in some awesome battle, then Marco’s your guy.
Overall, Heroes ‘Til Curfew was a fantastic sequel to Hush Money and I’m really excited to read the next book in this series! Definitely recommended to those who like teens with powers, or to anyone who enjoyed the first book.
I have to admit, I was not such a huge fan of this series. I just didn’t feel much of a connection with the characters and I was confused with the prequel book because it literally had nothing to do with any of the characters in the actual series. It was just related to the Talents and the NIAC program but that was it. I actually liked the characters in the prequel much better than in the actual series and it was disappointing to find out that none of them made it to book 1 or 2. Maybe they’ll appear in book 3 but I somewhat doubt it.
While I did appreciate Joss and her badass self especially with those fighting skills she had developed sparring with her father, her aloofness in the first book made her hard to approach. So when Kat approached her and Joss suddenly had a group of friends, it just made things more unbelievable. When I was in high school, we didn’t just approach a loner and then suddenly all become friends with that loner. That’s just not typical high school behavior. Granted, they’re supposed to have Talents and therefore be “special” but teenage behavior is still teenage behavior. That doesn’t change things.
Also, can I just mention how dumb I found Joss to be at times? Especially when she knew there was trouble there and yet she would go head first into it and then things were going downhill, she would look back and be like “wait, why did I even come here in the first place?” How is that not pure dumbness? It literally made no sense to me. And Dylan, because of his feelings towards her, would run in after her as well and then they both get fucked. They never call for backup, they never plan ahead and then when they find themselves in a really bad situation, well. I just don’t understand. I really don’t.
The relationship between Dylan and Joss was just weird and awkward as well. But…I guess teenagers are awkward and weird so I suppose that’s just normal behavior. However, I still thought their relationship felt a little forced at times and the reason why it even developed was because of their friends - mainly Kat and Heather with her mind reading skills. Otherwise, neither of them would’ve grown a pair and then they wouldn’t have gotten together at all.
The side characters – Kat, Heather, Eric, Rob and the “bad” kids – Marco, Jeff, Tony, etc. definitely helped develop the story but I’m not sure if the author did a good job introducing them. This was especially true for the “bad” kids because the ones in the first book changed in the second. I’m not even sure where Marco got the kids from the second book from. They just randomly appeared with random Talents that would help Marco out with his criminal acts. I just really want to know where they came from. And how did Fairview, a seemingly small town, just suddenly have tons of teenagers with Talents. They’re just popping out of nowhere.
Overall, I felt that there were a lot of unanswered questions in both books and perhaps the third book will tie everything together but since I wasn’t impressed with either books, I think I’m going to drop this series. There are way too many better books out there for me to spend time on this one. I really wanted to like these books but alas.
Jinx. And other assorted expletives. ~ Joss Marshall
I really grew fond of Joss in this sequel! In the first book she was sort of non-descript and uninteresting, but in Heroes 'Til Curfew she really comes to life! Joss is a normal girl with an extraordinary ability. She's extremely tough and I was a bit surprised over her lack of trauma at suffering through kidnapping, attempted rape, and a beating. The other talents in town want to start some kind of club and they look to Joss as the natural leader. Mainly because everyone is so idiotic Joss can't help but pipe up.
Then he told us, “I can control water!” Joss reached out and cuffed him on the side of the head, like she was swatting a fly. “What is wrong with you? You don’t go around telling people shit like that.”
I really admired Joss' ability to administrate and organise. Even though she never really gets round to leading a band of Talents, she has the right idea.
”I’m not going to take chances with kids’ lives just to make nice,”
She's definitely inherited the military gene from her father. I loved loved loved seeing shy little Joss taking command and really thriving. When she hits her stride, I was really impressed at how smart she is. She's not very good at relational issues though and I didn't like her falling out with Kat.
Kat Despite this great quote from Kat, Kat was pretty lame in this book.
“He’s [Dylan] not chicken-shit, baby...he’s just embracing the stalker lifestyle.”
Dylan Dylan is not the perfect hero by a long shot.
I should get points for not saying every dumb thing that pops in my head.
But for some reason, I find him really likeable. He tries to be a badass, and he's so protective of Joss. It's difficult for him because, of course, Joss is so incredibly powerful and can kick ass way more effectively than he can. Dylan also finds it hard to come to grips with Joss' relationship with her father. More of her training comes to light, and I was just as horrified as Dylan is at what Joss' life has been like.
This was hardly the first time I wondered what it was like to be Joss, to grow up with a father whose obsession with hiding his daughters from NIAC seemed to make up the bulk of their childhood experience.
I was glad to see that Dylan is not completely useless in a fight. Despite his non-lethal ability, his fists make up for his lack of killer Talent. Now that he and Joss aren't dancing around each other anymore, I really got to relax and enjoy their relationship. It's a good mix of sweet, sarcastic, and steamy.
Heather I usually dislike mindreaders, but Heather is so quirky and ethical, I just adored her.
Jill Even at the tender young age of 8 years old, Jill's talent is pretty kickass. She's also really cute.
“Yay! We get to have the sleepover even though we’re not going to jail!” Jill exclaimed, jumping on Dylan.
The Ending The bad guys are true assholes. It's horrible to see these teenage boys acting so depraved. They DEFINITELY got what was coming to them. At first the ending seems like an easy wrap up, but considering the blood, sweat, and tears that Dylan and Joss had to go through to come out on top? It's a hard-earned victory, baby.
There's going to be a third installment out! I can't wait!
So as soon as I finished "Hush Money" I queued this puppy up. Literally, I was standing in the middle of my kitchen when I finished the first and connected to that 3G and boom, hit BUY and here it was.
You know how sometimes in a YA series the first book is stuffed full of win and then second just sort of rehashes a bit of the first and adds a little more to get you ready for the 3rd? Well Heroes 'Til Curfew is better than the first. Amazingly better, which is a pretty awesome thing considering the first was pretty damn good.
Joss as a character is just flat out amazing. Conflicted, intelligent, fallable. She's becoming attached to her friends, and even more so to her boyfriend Dylan. Something her father has always warned her against. But Joss is growing up and learning to think of others, not just herself. And she just doesn't want to be alone anymore. Does she screw up? Yeah. She says and does the wrong thing a lot. But you always get that she means well, and she's got a rock solid integrity that you just have to admire. And her growing circle of friends are all simply fuller than full of win. My personal favorite is Heather, and I'm hoping we get more on her later. I love Heather.
And the villains? Holy Jeebus, Marcos is scary awful mean and bad. The depths this guy will go to is the stuff heebie jeebies are made of.
And, because you know I love me the romance. The relationship between Joss and Dylan is absolutely pitch perfect and powerful. I love you Susan Bischoff for giving us a YA couple we can really root for without a squicky feeling in our stomachs. I love love love that you recognized that just because it's YA and it may be "first love" they don't have to be foolish or weak (and god I love that you gave them/us Heather, who cuts through all that b.s.) AND...(happy dance) No love triangle!
And finally I feel I would be remiss if I didn't mention how many heart pounding adrenaline inducing moments there are in this book. I won't spoiler, but I was actually white knuckling my Kindle at one point (or three) saying "Oh no, no no no, this cannot be happening, it just CAN NOT!"
As close to perfect as a book can be, with twists and turns, heroes you cheer for and villains you will LOATHE, heartbreak and redemption, friendship and love, breath taking moments of bravery and stomach churning moments of betrayal. This book has it all. It will draw you in, drag you along and wrap you up in it's awesomeness. WIN x 10
Hush Money was the first self-published book I read on my Kindle, and it was awesome. The Talent Chronicles are about people who have Talents - telekinesis, super strength, invisibility, etc. The NIAC (National Institutes for Ability Control) is a big threat in this world, as they pick up kids who have Talents and ship them to State School. The story follows a certain group of high school students. In the middle are Joss, a girl who is just getting used to having friends; Dylan, the kid who is leaving behind his life of crime; and Marco, the bully who makes both of their lives miserable. Joss and Dylan have it bad for each other, but both are too afraid to mess their friendship up.
This book is equal parts adventure and romance. Joss and Dylan slowly grow into their relationship, skirting around miscommunication, difficult families, and life threatening situations with jerks from their school. The author weaves together the fear of the NIAC with high school drama flawlessly.
I spent all day Friday reading this book. It was great. Her writing is so addicting; I literally didn't want to put my Kindle down. I love that she takes on a different angle of the "boy needs to save damsel in distress." Dylan struggles with this, wondering how he could protect Joss when she seems physically stronger than him and more accomplished in her ability. I thought it was very refreshing. Joss, who's been a loner most of her life due to her dad's controlling nature, has a hard time getting used to friends and a boyfriend she's head over heels for. Their dynamics were very realistic, and I found myself absolutely loving these characters. The action scenes were great, too. Does this need to be a movie? YES.
This book is more than twice as long as the first, which I LOVED. I liked finding out more about Dylan's family. I liked seeing a bit more about how the world worked: Syndicate, the NIAC mole, etc. I honestly can't wait for more, and I'm hoping we see even more of the NIAC and the State Schools. Bischoff works well with relationships, but I'm eager to see more world building. As last time, it took me a while to get used to the point of view, but I think her writing has improved. It wasn't as stream-of-consciousness, and it was easier to tell who was talking when.
Okay, let's start off by saying: I lo-o-oooooved this book.
Susan, hats off to you, you know how to write!
The reason I loved this book so much was because, like it's predecessor Hush Money, it was a work of science fiction set in a very real environment. You can imagine that the scenes in this book would actually happen if teenagers suddenly started developing powers (or Talents).
Carrying on with that note, I believe that Bischoff has done an excellent portrayal of her characters. The way they react to the situations that crop up is believable. The characters are believable. The powers are even believable, in that these teenagers aren't super powered superheroes, they have their limitations and their strengths, and I found this so satisfying to read. I love the backstory that's introduced into this book too, something that wasn't so prominent in Hush Money, it makes the characters relatable, and that's a trait of a really good author.
The lead, Joss Marshall, is great. She's complicated, deep, wary, untrusting, and more, all because of her father. But her father has also made her strong, thoughtful, analytical, and these skills prove vital to Joss throughout this novel. I love the way Bischoff made the relationship between Joss and her Father so complex, it just adds another dimension to the characters.
Dylan, the other main character is a changed man since Hush Money. Like Joss, he has a hard time at home too. Although only slightly touched upon, you get the full image of what his homelike must be like. Crap. And it's understandable that Dylan was the way he was because of this.
There's a scene in this book that I really felt. It was so vivid and could easily have gotten too graphic or too nasty, but Bischoff handles it maturely and doesn't go too far. I would explain more but I don't want to spoil it for you!
My only qualm with this book is that it's over. I want the next one now. If there is a next one. I hope there's a next one.
Wow, that's a lot of praise, but this novel deserves it. Go out and get a copy! It's only available on Kindle at the moment, and I think paperback is coming soon. Hush Money, book number one is currently out in both formats. You won't regret it.
In the sequel to Hush Money, Joss now has a group of friends, a complicated almost-relationship with Dylan, a truce with Marco - though how long that will last, weighs heavily on her, and the knowledge that one of their own might be the governments undercover agent. But there is no turning back to the quiet girl that keeps to herself now, not with so many looking to Joss as their leader in the fight an against the government.
Bischoff hs done a wonderful job with this sequel, keeping me on the edge of my seat the entire book. This is one of those novels that, even though it has paranormal aspects, feels real. Take Joss's and Dylan's relationship for example. Even though they both care greatly for one another, they fight, feel insecure within the relationship, keep secrets for one another, and think they're not good enough for the other. These are all things that every teenager feels or does at one point or another, and I love that Bischoff adds these in rather than making their relationship all shinney and perfect.
The character that I found most interesting and complex is Marco. He's been betrayed by is best friend, had is advances shot down by Joss and then got schooled by her in a fight - repeatedly. Things never seem to go well for him, from his mum in a mental hospital, a father that doesn't seem to care, and all his plans to gain power and furtune never going according to plan. Don't get me wrong, he is a horrible human being. It's just that Bischoff gives a really good insight as to why he is the way he is. And as far as bad guys go, he is a good bad guy ... If you know what I mean. xD
Heroes 'Til Curfew takes the Talent Chronicles world to bigger and better places. Bischoff took a massive step forward with this novel, doubling the length and jamming it packed with high action, heart pounding moments that make you hold your breath, and throws in an incredibly sweet and meaningful relationship that leaves you envious of their love.
When I readHush Money mid-August, and posted my review, I did not expect the sequel to be out within the very same month. In fact, I did not even find out about it until a few days into September, and at that point I had to find and purchase the e-book right away. Smashwords had what I was looking for, and at a reasonable price of $2.99. Hush Money was $1.00 when I picked it up, and the slight increase in cost for this book is worth it, in every sense.
Heroes 'Til Curfew takes a slightly more adult turn from Hush Money, as the relationship between Dylan and Joss becomes more serious. It does not come across as unexpected or crude, and it seems more part of the plot rather than scenes scattered throughout a meager plot line. Romance is definitely a part of the story, but it makes sense and doesn't come across forced. (And, given my issues with certain other books, I do feel the need to mention this.) There is also a very delicate topic that comes up in the story and, while the subject disturbs me, it was dealt with seriously and carefully. I also did not get the impression that is was brought up carelessly.
Another difference in this volume, from the first, is that Marco is added in as a Point-of-View. Thankfully, he's only the focus a few times, as Susan Bischoff did an excellent job of making Marco absolutely deplorable. I could not relate to him in any way and found it difficult to follow his POV for any extended amount of time.
Again, as with Hush Money, the story and characters are both interesting and realistic. All it took was two books from Susan Bischoff to get me hooked on her work - I will definitely be picking up other books in this series and by this author. (Which I did, actually.. )
Heroes ‘Til Curfew (Talent Chronicles 2) is just as good as its predecessor. I don’t remember and strong language. If the child has watched an action film in the last decade then they can handle the violence in this novel. The perfect example is that it’s no more violent than Hunger Games and everyone has either read or watched that movie.
This time the stakes are raised. Marco is continuing his path to darkness and villainy. New players enter the field of play called The Syndicate. NIAC steps up their investigation of Fairview. The constant shifting of perspective helps this novel. You’re never with one character for too long.
Marco is the catalyst of the drama and madness that breaks out in this novel. Most of the drama surrounds him like a tornado. His vengeance and quest for power is constantly at odds and hindered by our heroes. I think the best part of this entire novel is that there is a NIAC mole. I’m not sure if Susan Bischoff meant to leave the mole identity as ambiguous as she did.
For the most part, these are typical teenagers facing extraordinarily adult problems with teenage naiveté. Which is enjoy and frustrating at the same time; you want them to grow up. I want to shake some sense into them. “With great power comes great responsibility.” these characters will be ready, to face NIAC and the government, when they figure that out.
I really enjoyed Hush Money (Talent Chronicles #1) so I jumped at the chance to review Heroes 'Til Curfew. And while I did like the book, I liked Hush Money better.
I love the premise of the Talents. I think the varying Superman-like abilities add such a good twist to the story. I liked how the Talents teamed up to fight the bad guys together. I liked the twist about the mole and Mr. Dobbs, which was surprising. I couldn't believe how evil Marco and his cronies truly were. I liked the sense of justice Bischoff imbues in her writing: everyone usually gets what's coming to them. I love that! I really liked Joss and Dylan in the first book and thought their mutual crushes on each other were sweet. I liked seeing their relationship develop into something more. I also really liked that Bischoff's characters did not automatically rebound from adversity. They had some trouble dealing with things, which was totally believable and realistic.
I felt like Heroes 'Til Curfew was a little too adult to be classified as a YA read. There were some pretty graphic (and long) fight scenes, and a lot of bad language. The bad language got old for me, and it had me wondering if teens really talk/think like that? I know I sure didn't talk like that when I was a teen---or now---and that kind of language cheapens a book for me. Yes, I am an established prude: see my post about my prudishness here.
Overall, I liked Heroes 'Til Curfew, although not as much as its predecessor, Hush Money. I will definitely keep reading the series, and look forward to seeing how Joss and Dylan's stories end.
I found "Hush, Hush" exciting but a bit short. "Heroes 'Til Curfew "is incredibly intense, stressful and the perfect right length to let the reader enjoy the company of all the characters. Moreover, in this volume, the reader has no time to be bored or to catch his breath before he is taken on a new adventure. So, I really want a third installment to find out what will happen ... A thrilling and engaging serie !
I was very touched and surprised by the darkness of the atrocities portrays by the author in a book for teenagers or young adults. Quite difficult scenes that we do not expect to find in supernatural stories either.
Affected in a good way. I almost stopped reading beacause I was screaming inside my head "No, no, it can not happen!" With butterflies in my stomach, tripe taken by the intensity of the scenes described in the shop of Joss's father.
But it's also the fact that I physically react when reading that interested me. I lived through the events as if I were with the characters and that's the sign, for me, of some wonderful writen skills. Congrats to Susan Bischoff ! Both her stories are amazingly pleasant and disturbing at the same time. If I was excited by "Hush, Hush", I was swift off my feet by "Heroes' Til Curfew". I really liked the whole series. Pending the further adventures of Joss and Dylan, I'll throw myself on "Impulse Control.". "Talent Chronicles," a wonderful series ... I'm a huge fan!
This book was flipping excellent. I loved the tension and the action, as well as the romance. It honestly got a bit creepier, and the ending was just, sweet and awesome and all I could think at times was holy sh()t!!!! Everything was stepped up in this book.
Joss had some great development. She opens up more to her friends and her boyfriend, even rebelling a bit against her Dad. She really grew as a character in this book, yet remained the kick-ass girl with great sarcasm. Dylan reminded me a lot of the typical "I Have to Protect my Girlfriend at All Costs" Boyfriend, even though he knew Joss could take care of herself, which is good. I'm glad he was still sweet and caring, yet a bit confused. Heather really took a front leading role in this book, and I love it. She is just pure awesomeness. She uses her mind reading to her advantage, to help her friends, etc. Plus she has awesome mental fights with Joss. She's also caring, kick-ass and smart. Marco, I swear, he just keeps getting more and more evil. He scares the living hell out of me. Same with some other characters..... *shivers* All of the other characters got great development as well, from Joss' Dad to Kat.
Wow Ms. Bischoff, you outdid yourself! You built your world even more, added some great characters, and really shocked me! I hope that wasn't the end of the series, and that you have another book in the works.
2.5 stars So I'm kind of rating this as if it were a stand alone, but at the same time I am kind of biased because I loved the first one so much. Unfortunately, because of that, I was a little disappointed with this.
So let me just say, that I read a lot of romance, and I like when a book has a romantic element. Key word being 'element'. This story was completely preoccupied with Joss and Dylan. While I was very interested in them as well, it seemed like there wasn't really a plot, only things that happened to create tension or development in their relationship.
Also, when did Joss get TSTL? In the first book she was strong and smart and careful... in this book, she ran head-on into every stupid altercation unarmed and outnumbered, and then acted surprised when people actually got hurt. I know Marco and them are just teenagers, but seriously, what the F did you expect them to do?!?! Their criminals, they're escalating, get the F out of their way or get more help! Don't just keep showing up, getting your ass beat, and repeating the exact same scene over and over again!
And the drama, OH the drama. As I said this was heavily relationship driven. And I know they need drama for that, but the back and forth and 'does he like me?' 'did I do something wrong?' 'do I need to do something differently?' got a little annoying.
I started reading this book immediately after downloading it to my Kindle. I'm a fan of Hush Money and so I was excited to see this sequel. I'm a comic book reader and so I'm up there with Susan wanting that 'superhero with a bit of romance' kinda book. However I do have to admit, I didn't like Heroes Til Curfew as much as Hush Money. The characters are great and having those bits where they teamed up were my favorites. I just didn't care too much for those parts that were too heavy on the adult side (it's too spoiler-ly to be specific). Yeah, there was a lot of cussing and that's not a real deal breaker for me but I can see that could turn some people off. Also, the storyline about Joss's Dad was a bit out there for me. I guess it could relate to Joss's background...it just seemed a bit unnecessary.
I didn't hate the book but I didn't love it. It was a bit in the middle for me because I liked certain aspects like the super powers and teaming up X-men style. I just didn't like the semi-adult violent parts. Don't get me wrong...I totally love the comic book series Morning Glories which also deals with teenagers with super powers but has that violent gory side. This book has so much potential to not rely on that shock side to carry me thru the book.
So will I read more books in the series? Most definitely yes. I can't wait to find out what happens!
I loved the first book in this series. It had humour, action, romance and a novel idea. I've raved about it all over the net, but I'm going to be very quiet about this one because I was really disappointed in it. The humour had pretty much disappeared, the idea was stretched beyond belief (no one can manipulate gravity. No way.) and the violence in the book was excessive. It felt like one big fight. After a while, I got really sick of Joss and Dylan fighting Marcos and his cronies again. There were too many seriously cruel and twisted people in the cast and I really do not want to read a graphic desciption of an attempted rape. This book is so totally not young adult and should not be marketed as such. I didn't enjoy it at all.
To its credit, I did finish it, probably because the relationship between Joss and Dylan was extremely well done, but despite the 'happy' ending, it left me with disturbing images that I had to work hard to get out of my head. I would not want my teenage daughter to read it - she wouldn't want to read it anyway, but apparently, other people don't have the sensitivity to violence and cruelty that we do. Even so if the author insists on calling this Young Adult then it should have a warning on it, for example - this book has a high level of violence and a graphic attempted rape.
Action, love, danger, suspense, violence and trust..yes, this book is one hell of a ride. Joss is back and better than ever in this action-packed sequel to Hush Money.
The government is finding and shipping more Talents off to state school. Everyone with a Talent aka Power is at risk and Joss is one of the most powerful of all. Scared, the Talents look for a leader and turn to Joss for help. All she wants to do is stay under the radar, except when it comes to Dylan. Dylan is another talent and soon they must both admit to their feelings and succumb to the love that they ave for each other. Problem it, this isn't the time for love, it's time for war. Together they attempt the impossible...they are going to stand up to the government should the time come. If that wasn't enough, Marco and his band of heathens are back and meaner than ever. Worst yet, his target is set on Joss and Dylan. Will they be able to put love aside and save not only themselves, but the ones they love from both State School and Marco, or will their lives come crumbling down around them?
This book is filled with twists, turns, love and non-stop action. You'll be holding your breath until the very end!
OMG, lost for words right now.... I absolutely loved this book, I did not expect that at all. So first thing is first Joss and Dylan....absolutely AMAZING!!! Their chemistry omg I could feel it sizzling again! You would have thought now they are together they will be less electrifying, but...nope even more so...gosh sooooo hot! But I found it terrible what happend to Joss, I could have killed Marco, Jeff, And that gang myself, those bastards!!! But luckily they are all dead at the end....honestly why do people not stick together in such situation, why do some people have to be so stupid and go on an ego trip aka Marco, if he and his game would have been good Joss had a much bigger and stronger team, but nope....well suits yourselves asshols! But I must say by the end of the book, Joss has already got a massive army behind her, so cool those kids with all those talents! I love Tim and Raine and Heather has to be with Rob, so cute! But I am in tears, why Eric why???!!! I sooooo not expected that, cry........I hope he turns good again please for the sake of love and friendship, do it for Kat do it for Dylan! I suspect that Joss' dad used to work for the government where they sent these special kids to school and is therefor so messed up... I am sooo sad that there isn't a book three out....yet....and I don't know f there ever will be
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.