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Storm Lords #1

The Fire Within

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The Prince of Fire needs a woman hot enough to withstand his heat, and he finds one who’ll set his heart and body on fire, in more ways than one.

The land of Tanselm will fall to evil if four identical princes wielding elemental powers fail to find their intended brides. Thrust into the parallel realm of earth to escape death and insure a future for their world, they have one mission and one mission only—to find their destined affai.

Darius Storm, the Prince of Fire, is impatient and frustrated to be so far from his home. The foreign world into which he’s been thrust lacks magic. And the women lack the inner power and strength to truly connect with him. His work at a local nightclub only brings him into contact with more unsuitable prospects.

Until Samantha Brooks walks through the door. She’s a beauty with the fiery passion to meet Darius head-on, and a special magic all her own.

114 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 1, 2005

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Marie Harte

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Caffeine addict, boy referee, and romance aficionado, New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Marie Harte has over 100 books published with more constantly on the way. She’s a confessed bibliophile and devotee of action movies. Whether hiking in Central Oregon, biking around town, or hanging at the local tea shop, she’s constantly plotting to give everyone a happily ever after. Visit http://marieharte.com and fall in love.

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56 reviews1 follower
April 12, 2018
It's like somethings are missing in there.. I don't know, was a lot of sex, and almost nothing of substance...
I hope the next book will be more better, and can fill the white parts
159 reviews1 follower
January 9, 2018
Book one!

Four brothers...identical..gorgeous...woo hoo!
Four storm Lord's who all came to earth to find their soul mates and to save their world. A good beginning to this series and although rushed a bit...am enjoying the characters.
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470 reviews56 followers
March 31, 2018
la lectura ha sido bastante entretenida, aunq por lo corta se ha quedado bastante en el tintero, y la parte erotica toma demasiada importancia por sobre la trama pero en definitiva me ha picado la curiosidad, es probable q lea los otros solo por saber en q termina la cosa.
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3,543 reviews16 followers
July 3, 2025
Darius and Samantha's story kicks off this 5-story arc of darkness versus the light. Eldest of 4 identical (nearly) brothers with the power over fire, Darius fights to find his fated mate in a world not of his own and destroy those who murdered his father and uncles.
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28 reviews3 followers
September 11, 2017
Superficial

It was ok, but the characters and story line held no depth. I guess if that's what you're looking for then it works.
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13 reviews
November 5, 2018
Love the Elements

Characters that capture the imagination and stirs the soul!
I Challenge you to try and put it down at bed time.
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100 reviews
August 19, 2025
I actually read the updated version of this book, released in 2023. Great read, which I thoroughly enjoyed. love the characters and interesting storyline, continued over 5 books.
4.5 stars
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2,143 reviews
April 23, 2013
The Fire Within by Marie Harte

Darius Storm is the eldest of the Royal Four. Four identical quadruplet brother of royal blood who each have the own unique elemental power and are one day destined to rule and protect their home land of Tanselm.

Evil has set its sights on Tanselm and the death of the royal four to end their reign over the land. Thrust into the parallel realm of earth to escape death the Royal Four must find their Affai (their beloved) to strengthen them against the advancing enemy or Tanselm will fall to the 'Sin Garu.

Darius is not happy about being torn away from his home and not be able to protect his family or his home land and doubts any of the women in this realm will have the power to tame his fire that is until he finds himself in the basement of a club with Samantha Brooks.
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4,745 reviews41 followers
January 22, 2016
I'm a little underwhelmed by this story. Okay, not a little, a lot. I almost put it down entirely after the completely annoying info-dump that was the first chapter. (And perhaps, in all fairness to the author, who has written other books I've enjoyed, I am just coming off of reading the completely awesome "Tempting Danger" by Wilks.)

Four identical twin brothers must travel from their besieged realm to Earth to find their mates and save their four kingdoms. Each has an elemental power that is reflected in their eye color. Each seems to have an ego, a temper, a short fuse. And with the brevity of the story, everything just came out cheesy and bad. (And again, perhaps, in all fairness to the author, this book is a little dated for PNR, and expectations for storytelling has changed.)

Perhaps not. I do not think I will be continuing with this series any time soon.
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1,908 reviews518 followers
December 30, 2011
This was a really cute story. The characters were all great and the plot and romance was amazing. They were all evenly balanced out! I just love that about a story! Darius is one of four brothers and he is a fire prince....which means he controls the element of fire. He has to find his bride before his kingdom is taken over. He finds everything he hopes for in Samantha.

She is a strong and very funny woman. She takes Darius to incredible heights with her string will. I love their relationship. In the beginning, they had an instant connection and from there their love just bloomed!

I can't wait to read the other books, especially since they are about the other brothers! If you like hot guys and sexy romance, read this book you will love it! ;)
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2,779 reviews102 followers
November 1, 2014
'Ok' pretty much sums up how I rate this book. Nothing really stood out for me. BUT I have to note that this was written back in 2005 and likely this was new material back then... it just didn't translate for me now.

(I should also note that this has been waiting for me to read since Aug 2011, so I procrastinated for three+ years as well ;)
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125 reviews13 followers
July 2, 2012
This was a short well written paranormal romance. In this first book of the Storm Lord series there are four princes who each control an element (fire, earth, air & water) that are sent to earth to find their affai (wife). They are apparently much more powerful with the help of their wives and they will need the power to defend their home world from the evil trying to destroy it.
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3,543 reviews16 followers
July 25, 2024
Darius's fiery and tempestous nature is no match for when Samantha enters his life. He very quickly realizes just what she means to him, and possibly to his people, but will he be able to convince her to take a chance.
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252 reviews4 followers
November 22, 2012
Charming and funny. The story is well written and the characters believable. All round an enjoyable read.
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729 reviews24 followers
July 11, 2014
So short but intense. I wanted more from the story. 4 Storm lords and a world to explore. I hope till the end of the series I will get more.
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391 reviews6 followers
March 10, 2015
I really enjoyed this. Great characters, world building and story line.
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