The poems in Money Shot are forensic. Just as the money shot in porn is proof of the male orgasm, these poems explore questions of revelation and concealment. What is seen, what is hidden, and how do we know? Money Shot's investigation of these questions takes on a particular urgency because it occurs in the context of the suddenly revealed market manipulation and subsequent "great recession" of 2008–;2009. In these poems, Rae Armantrout searches for new ways to organize information. What can be made manifest? What constitutes proof? Do we "know it when we see it"? Looking at sex, botany, cosmology, and death through the dark lens of "disaster capitalism," Armantrout finds evidence of betrayal, grounds for rebellion, moments of possibility, and even pleasure, in a time of sudden scarcity and relentless greed. This stunning follow-up to Versed―winner of the Pulitzer Prize and the National Book Critics Circle Award, and a finalist for the National Book Award―is a wonderfully stringent exploration of how deeply our experience of everyday life is embedded in capitalism.
Rae Armantrout is an American poet generally associated with the Language poets. Armantrout was born in Vallejo, California but grew up in San Diego. She has published ten books of poetry and has also been featured in a number of major anthologies. Armantrout currently teaches at the University of California, San Diego, where she is Professor of Poetry and Poetics.
On March 11, 2010, Armantrout was awarded the 2009 National Book Critics Circle Award for her book of poetry Versed published by the Wesleyan University Press, which had also been nominated for the National Book Award. The book later earned the 2010 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry. Armantrout’s most recent collection, Money Shot, was published in February 2011. She is the recipient of numerous other awards for her poetry, including most recently an award in poetry from the Foundation for Contemporary Arts in 2007 and a Guggenheim Fellowship in 2008.
Money Shot's main virtue is its clarity. Armantrout has something to do with the LANGUAGE poets, but at least in this book there's no sign of that movements sillier theoretical tendencies. Consider the last few stanzas of 'Prayers':
The blue triangles on the rug repeating.
Coming up, a discussion on the uses of torture.
The fear that all *this* will end.
The fear that it won't.
I experienced most of the book in the light of this poem: an elegy for liberals who can't quite believe what "their" country has become. This is the kind of emotion that makes no sense to me; I'm not American, I've never believed that America was anything other than what it manifestly is, and the feeling of loss that American liberals feel post 9/11 strikes me as, at worst, naive, and, at best, odd.
This is the first of Armantrout's books that I've read, and I'm impressed at how well she expresses this cultural moment. I do wish the poems showed a bit more distance from the moment, though.
The cover blurb (not the poet's fault, I'm sure) suggests that "Armantrout searches for new ways to organize information. What can be made manifest? What constitutes proof? Looking at sex, botany, cosmology and death through the dark lens of 'disaster capitalism,' Armantrout finds evidence of betrayal, grounds for rebellion, moments of possibility, and even pleasure, in a time of sudden scarcity and relentleess greed."
You read right: *sudden* scarcity. For whom? Anyway, the good news is that that's obviously a sales pitch to university professors. This is just good bedtime reading, sometimes pretty, sometimes thoughtful, sometimes just a teeny bit complicated. It has nothing, in other words, to do with the "dark lens" of disaster capitalism.
Read Versed years ago and I think this is just as good. Armantrout is associated with the LANGUAGE poets, but she reminds me of the imagist or objectivist poets a little. I think its the short line lengths and the way the poems feel like objects in and of themselves rather than descriptions of something outside of themselves. These poems are wonderful.
They’re sexy because they’re needy, which degrades them. They’re sexy because they don’t need you. They’re sexy because they pretend not to need you, but they’re lying, which degrades them. They’re beneath you and it’s hot. They’re across the border, rhymes with dancer — they don’t need to understand. They’re content to be (not mean), which degrades them and is sweet. They want to be the thing-in-itself and the thing-for-you — Miss Thing — but can’t. They want to be you, but can’t, which is so hot."
"This is a five star trance. To have this vantage from the cliff’s edge, to get drunk on indifference, to stare at a bright succession of crests raised from nothing and flattened".
April 2023: Updated to 2 stars after reading some poetry that is far worse than anything in this collection.
I don’t like to be too negative in reviews, especially of work that is personal like memoirs or poetry but I really did struggle finding anything I liked about Money Shot. It’s clear that Armantrout is a talented writer, I’m absolutely not claiming that she can’t write, but her work is definitely not for me. In my opinion, when I read poetry it should make me feel something on some level. I did manage to find two poems that I liked: With and Service Record. These two are the only ones that made me feel something when reading this collection.
One of my main problems with this book is that it was entirely forgettable. I could finish a poem and not be able to say a single thing about it. Many of the poems I read multiple times but it still didn’t improve my experience with it, instead it made it feel like a slog getting through. Many of the poems reminded me of that meme that goes around sometimes where you tap the middle option on predictive text until it forms a sentence. As I say, I think this collection just flew straight over my head.
My one star rating is due to my enjoyment of the book and shouldn’t reflect on Armantrout’s ability as a writer or poet. Almost all the other reviews I’ve seen for Money Shot have spoken highly of it and the poet. I just didn’t like it myself, especially comparing it to some of the other books on this list.
Armantrout's latest collection reminds me of the Winchester Mystery House in California -- there are many hidden passageways and trap doors that go nowhere and many tricks of perspective that disorient and discombobulate as the reader pursues lead after lead down corridors that collapse around him as he progresses. More allusive than her previous collections, to both pop culture (economics, TV, war news) and poetry (Hopkins, Milton), and sometimes more elliptical, Armantrout constructs more layered texts, without losing the sometimes crystalline brilliance and insight that are so nakedly evident in poems like "Sway", my favorite in the collection. I have been waiting for this collection since I read Versed and am not disappointed. Armantrout is one of the most strange-making, playful and inimitable poets working today.
Always like to read poetry, but these pieces just didn't speak to me from the page. This could be just not having read Armantrout before and not being used to her voice/style. I was often confused by the titles and found that if i just read the pieces without that opener they had more meaning for me. I may try to find audio of these (and other Armantrout poems) as that can often infuse the poet's meaning better. But even with those challenges, I am glad I picked it up.
I especially liked “Prayers” and “Duration”, but I will admit there are several I didn’t understand — whether it’s because I didn’t get it or take enough time to. Still, there was a clear, strong poetic voice.
Unquestionably, Armantrout makes extraordinary demands on her reader. Words have an atomic weight, being freighted with symbolism, allegory and metaphor, and her usage deliberately questions the value of traditional connotations upon which many poetry readers rely. Likewise, Armantrout forces the reader to apprehend form and content in its various guises. Because she experiments with her poetry, the resulting resonance, irony, and revelation come as an after-effect, upon re-reading and thinking through her material. So a reader must trust the poet that the added effort will be worth the often grueling work getting there. She is not easily approached when you are accustomed to the music of Eliot, Stevens, Creeley and other lyrical poets. Often Armantrout’s prosody is as dry as the desert heat at the bottom of Death Valley. The lyrical features become evident only when you have spent a long time pruning the thorns among the cactus flowers. Yet, a poem like “Errands,” with its fairytale lightness covering the macabre and sexual underbelly, delivers that unique sense of gratification that few poems can rival.
The book's somewhat less about -- though not not about -- the great recession than the jacket quotes make it out to be. Poems are often structured as short sections, each an observation of sorts -- the sections then obliquely connected via the title. Not all such oblique connections work, IMHO. Favorite poem is "With":
"I write things down to show others later or to show myself that I am not alone with my experience."
Sparse, delightful, a vicious feeding left to images of the greater mind. I enjoyed the simplicity of Armantrout's style, a refreshing panoply of minimalism in an age of sheer verbosity. The poems are short and effective, the images within never over-wrought. There is great depth here. Read the poem "Sway" and you'll be hooked to Armantrout's juxtaposition of frigid, distant images with the turgid sublimity of emotional intimacy. Post-confessional poetry, you could call it.
A marvelous book of poems that will reward slow close reading (as is always the case with Armantrout). Think about money. Look at your retirement savings (if any). Are you too big to fail? Then read these poems. Seriously.
I liked Money Shot but I couldn't really understand it? Maybe I'll reread it sometime; the topics seemed to elude me and I think that a second reading might add some clarity for me.