1st from hamilton for me. ice run, (alex mcknight, #6). paperback, 2004...dedicated to nonna and donna
story begins:
in a land of hard winters, the hardest of all is the winter that fills you with false hope. it's the kind of winter that starts out easy. you get the white christmas, but it's a light snow, six inches tops, the stuff that makes everything look like a postcard. the sun comes out during the day. you can take your coat off if you're working hard enough. the nights are quiet. the stars shine between the silver clouds. you celebrate new year's. you make resolutions.it snows again and you run the plow. you shovel. you chop wood. you sit inside at night by the fire. you say to yourself, this ain't so bad. a little cold weather is good for a man. it makes you feel alive.
okee dokee then, as the good doctor said (bullwinkle moose hockey team, 1969)...onward & upward.
time place scene setting
*story opens late in january and continues step-by-step to valentine's day
*paradise, michigan...the u.p. may it do ya fine, the upper peninsula of michigan, though hamilton has not, as yet (to page 46) used that phrase. on whitefish bay, lake superior
*the ojibway hotel, at the soo
*the first cabin...at paradise, where alex lives
*the glasgow inn, jackie, owner
*the dining room of the ojibway hotel
*room #601, top floor, where natalie stays, ojibway hotel
*the beer store across the bridge...paradise
*place where gas is purchased, no name provided, owner ruthie
*ashmun, portage streets...at the soo
*city county building, court street, sault st marie, michigan, called "the soo"...or "soo michigan" as there is a soo canada, where the locks are located that navigate the difference in lake levels, superior and huron/michigan
*custom motor shop, where leon works
*st mary's on portage avenue, sault st marie, where simon grant's funeral is held
*chinese buffet...the antlers for hamburgers....natalie's jeep...
*grant brothers auto glass shop on spruce, grant's auto glass
*batchawana bay, where natalie's mother lives canada
*a cessna...snowmobiles...chippewa hotel/grant hotel at the island
*blind river canada
characters<
*alex mcknight, eye-narrator, living alone, unmarried, in a cabin he helped his father build in paradise, michigan on whitefish bay of lake superior. alex played single-a ball in sarasota as a younger man...was a cop, detroit, for eight years, had a partner gunned down, he was wounded...his old man worked for ford motors...his mother died when he was eight years old
*jackie connery, owner proprietor of the glasgow inn, a 60-yr-old scot from glasgow
*vinnie leblanc, friend of alex, lives on the reservation in brimley
*vinnie's brother, past tense, deceased i think
*vinnie's mother
**natalie reynaud, alex's coming-along girlfriend...from canada, where she is a constable with the ontario provincial police in hearst
*claude demers, senior constable, her partner
*franklin, old partner, past, of alex
*man who was harassing people at the hospital/killed franklin
*step-father of natalie, albert demarco
*her parents, grandparents...father died, mother remarried, albert died
*jimmy natoli, an almost for natalie...he wanted her to quit being a cop...so no go
*ruthie...owns a place where alex gases up his truck
*six people in the place..jackie's
*young man out front, trying to shovel the snow, ojibway hotel...the reader learns later that he is chris woosley
*man sitting there in the lobby...old man, ojibway hotel...and later, we learn his name is simon grant, an 82-yr-old
*woman at the desk, ojibway hotel
*waitress at the ojibway hotel dining room
*100 people w/snow shovels
*leon prudell, works at the custom motor shop, although what he really would like to do is private investigative work, as he did do w/alex once upon a time
*eleanor, leon's wife
*chief maven, chief of police sault st marie, the soo...he has a wife
*a different woman behind the desk at the ojibway
*a young man opened the door w/money in his hand (chris's roommate)...and we learn later, his name is russ
*a friend of leon's at the sault evening news
*a priest...simon grant's funeral
**michael grant, son of simon grant
**marty grant, son of simon grant
*the two sons each have a wife, one couple has 2 teens childs and the other has one son
*mrs. woosley...sister of the grant brothers, mother of chris, married
*a doctor, doctor glenn...tends to alex
*the man who brought him to hispital
*a nurse
*buck, vinnie's cousin, in a plymouth fury
*vinnie's other cousin, henry
*a beagle mutt of natalie's...keon...after dave keon of the maple leafs
mrs. demarco...albert's mother
*flo...celia...nurses of mrs. demarco's
*luc reynaud...grandfather of natalie
*jean sylvain reynaud, biological father of natalie...killed at "the soo" on new year's eve, 1973
*mac henderson, lead detective on that case, yay ago
*natalie's mother, grace reynaud...and we never really see her save in natalie's telling of stories. curious, that.
*officer donovan
*sergeant moreland, natalie's superior officer from the hearst detachment
*people in a bar
*border agents
*a cessna pilot and other people who fly back and forth between mackinac island and the peninsula
*that's most of them...a handful of additional scene-characters...
there is a mrs larusso, chippewa hotel...a gail at the front desk...tony...who kept on eye on mr grant...harlow, leon's boss at the motor shop...a don who's in the bathroom (bar scene)
update, finished, 1 oct 13, tuesday evening, 8:38 p.m. e.s.t.
all done...i liked it, 3-stars. which means it is a good story. i liked it. i almost pret' near really liked it. stars. meh. read the darn thing if you like a good mystery/thriller/who-dunnit/budding-love-story. i'll read more from hamilton, given time.
what works? nice peppy narrative, never-a-dull moment. lots of dialogue, nothing wrong with that, some scene-settings, dialogue getting there, dialogue during, climax, on to the next event. a few sentences...a handful...a small basket-full...i didn't keep track...some sentences were too short, abrupt...it was dark, one that comes to mind. nicely ambiguous...until you, the gentle reader, realize that hamilton through the 3rd-person eyes of alex mcknight, is referring to the restaurant--that had been open earlier, an hour say. or is it the night? first thought. and with that, sheesh...it was a dark and dreary night. but yeah, okay, so the staccato-burst of structure is meant to relay something, nessay pas? action. lights. camera.
the story moves around...a lot...doesn't stay much in paradise, michigan, that cabin in the woods that alex helped his old man build. story goes to the soo...called "the soo" by michiganders...yoopers...others...place where the locks are located and the ore carriers move from one lake to another, huron to superior. story goes to "soo canada" and other points north. story moves back and forth...story heads out to mackinac island...place where no cars are, horses pulling carriages, except in the winter when snowmobiles are everywhere...pronounced "mackinaw island"...as in, i'd like some of that mackinack island fudge, please...tourists.
hamilton uses the word "chippewa" once...word i am told, is the french mispronunciation of ojibway...and there's another word for ojibway that i can't produce here, not correctly...(anishinaabe)...the point, chippewa is a word that is a mispronunciation of the original. blame george bush.
there's this one, a vehicle is buried in the snow. and...i live u.p. here...but even that was a bit hard to take...believe. tell someone we've gotten 400" of snow-fall some winters and they say yeah right. and...if i'm going to be "critical"...there are a few issues w/the storyline/motive...but the story moves fast enough that i didn't dwell on it. natalie's motives for what she does...perhaps some issues w/timing. like, the bad man would have already done the bad deed, my thinking...by the time things go down. but...things wait until all are on stage and i go with the flow...license and all.
good read. give it a go.