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168 pages, Nook
First published April 13, 2010
It means you’d better learn how to tell a story. And you need to be a hack. I say “hack” with all due reverence, and I believe it is the highest literary ambition possible. The popular image of a hack is someone who grinds out cheap paperbacks every three months, writes in multiple genres, and borrows and steals from every clichéd plot possible. To me, a hack is someone who is writing so freely and unselfconsciously that the material is flowing from some deep inner fountain, a place where true beliefs and feelings dwell. (Kindle Locations 277-281).
Finally, I love beginnings. Not the actual moment of work, which can be hard as I try to figure out how to approach the project, but grooming the idea and preparing it for the actual writing. That bright and shiny part of writing is appealing to me, and I always have more than one project going just to keep that bright and shiny part of my brain occupied.
The one characteristic shared by all successful novels (other than those written by known authors) is that they are books that people tell their friends about. The rub, of course, is that no one knows what exactly causes someone to be filled with the urge to tell another person about a book. (Kindle Locations 695-697).
A funny thing happened to me in those three months. I went from dreading and hating the "no's" to understanding something about them. They represented hard work and determination on my part. I was proud of those "no's." Plus, in order to find the right partner for my business the "no's" were important. They weeded out the people I really didn't want to work with anyway. Only someone who truly loved my idea and saw its potential, only the person who said "yes" was the right person.
The best way to learn how to write a good premise is to practice. Make a list of ten books and films that are in the same genre as your book or script— preferably successful— or that you wish you had written! Now for each story, write a one-sentence premise that contains all these story elements: protagonist, antagonist, conflict, stakes, setting, atmosphere and genre. (Kindle Locations 991-993).
In third-person limited viewpoint, make sure the character doesn’t “know” things happening outside her range of perception. Make sure the character isn’t experiencing the thoughts of another character unless one of them has ESP. (Kindle Locations 1258-1260)
Bottom line: In Morrell's judgment, most first-person novels could be improved by a shift to the third person. First person is very hard to do— harder than third person limited— and should only be done with great care by the writer, and only when the story demands it. Otherwise, especially for new writers, they're probably better off going with third person. (Kindle Locations 1328-1331).
One of the most common mistakes is making your character name sound too “namey.” In other words, the name sounds like that of a fictional character instead of a real person. (Kindle Locations 1355-1356).
Death Star. So, that’s the short and long of the Three Act Structure. You may not be able to watch Wizard of Oz the same way again; and if you’re a true writer, you’ll be forever plagued with trying to identify the act breaks in every book, TV show or movie you ever watch. Don’t blame me… blame the Greeks. (Kindle Locations 1495-1498).
After 10 books, 12 years, and 460 rejections, my dream had finally come true.
My informal polling on ad-supported ebooks yields statements like: “I'll quit reading before I put up with that.” I also remember saying I'd never carry a cell phone, or be on Facebook, or give up my vinyl albums, or start thinking that maybe nuclear energy is the best short-range answer to our energy addiction. Or that I’d ever read an entire book on a screen. I don’t know the answer, but I am deeply invested in the question. (Kindle Locations 2355-2359)
The myth simply is: “All self promotion for a writer is good.” Nope. Completely false.
If your books are not selling, learn how to write better books and learn how to write better proposals, and then mail it all to editors. It really is that simple. (Kindle Locations 2390-2391).