modern things in the bk-platinum-blond hair.the last straw.made a big stink.made no bones about it.
i cant stand when there are modern expressions in historical bks.
-im very disappointed to find out that the guy is actually an english earl ¬ an arab as we've been led to believe.i thought this book would be taking place in the desert.&that the guy would be an arab.cause you never find books like that.
so he's seeing one of the servants.how lovely.
comments like these drive me up the wall.&raise my blood pressure to dangerous heights. -"this girl obviously belonged to derek sinclair,for the sensual look she gave him as she set the tray down was extremely intimate."
"we dont keep harems here,mores the pity," he answered. "but if we did,i suppose you cud say she would be a part of mine.however,shes not for my exclusive use,if you know what i mean." wow.&this is the main guy.johanna sure knows how2 write up some likeable love interests.
&the guy is ENGAGED.wth?!
"the trouble was,she was afraid he made every woman feel that way,&he had had so many women, so many woman at the same time.he used 2tell her about each and every conquest." this is his fiance,in case u were wondering.
"she knew he had given up his mistresses when he proposed to her,and that included half the maids in his grandfathers house." why in **** would we wanna read in the guys fiances perspective,who is not the main character?!
johanna makes dereks fiance have "doubts about the wedding" even though she professes to love him,just to "make it right." even though they wont end up married,that doesnt change the fact that he's engaged. &lettin go of one woman doesnt change his notorious past either.so,no,johanna, i am not appeased at all.
marshall enters the story &im like yes! maybe hes the main guy character.hes more likeable-cause he's nothin like derek.so im thinkin maybe he'll be the 1 who gets with chantelle,because theres been so many guy characters in the story so far that its impossible to tell who's going to be the love interest.but oh no! marshal is in love with derek's fiance.yes you heard correct.doesnt that just work out nicely? so now it'll be okay when derek breaks it off with caroline.because she doesnt rlly love him,and lord knows he doesnt love her.&then there is someone who loves carolina-marshall,so she can end up with him.works out too perfectly if u ask me.as in this plot is totally unrealistic.
how crappier can this pathetic excuse of a romance book possibly get?!
we'll ur about to find out very shortly.like i did.
dereks fiance caroline "knew he had given up his mistresses when he had proposed2 her,&that included half the maids in his grandfathers house.it wasnt that she didnt think he could be faithful to her." several pages later he's "crooking a finger" at a maid because it was his "last night on land before weeks @sea ¬hing but male companionship." awww, you poor baby. how will you ever manage on the ship?
"it didnt matter which maid she happened 2be.he knew them all intimately."
"she gigggled again as he led her toward his room.it was a sound he didnt mind,a sound he had grown up with,having been raised in a harem.that he loved woman in general was natural after such an upbringing.he had been afraid that his one regret in coming to england would be that he would nvr have his own harem.it hadnt exactly become a regret,not with a bevy of housemaids at his disposal, servants accustomed to pleasing a master.yet he did miss the sensuality of the east,where a man rarely devoted his affections to only one woman."
u seem to be doing the same thing in england,buddy.so idk wut ur talking about.hes what i like to call a bastard.plain &simple.
comments like these kill me.
hes unfaithful to his fiance &2 the girl hes gunna end up with.if the guy gets with any girl in the book before he meets the main character,its cheating in my book.
"the ladies of quality here demanded eternal devotion4themselves exclusively.it was unthinkable,&yet he accepted this western idiosyncrasy." apparently not,you lying jackass. you're cheating on caroline so you obviously dont "accept this western idiosyncrasy."
"he expected it in caroline.in fact,he knew she now thought him faithful to her.that he wasnt was not cause for guilt,however.not that he didnt adore her.he did. if they had been in the east,she would be known as his ikbal, his favorite.but she was more than that.she was also his dearest friend,an occurence that could nvr have come about in the east,where women were not thought of as companions.so he fully intended2 make himself a good husband 2her by english standards,2give her no cause4grief.he would just have2 practice discretion."
this guy is a walking contradiction.u say u accept western idiosyncrasy,which would mean ur only with 1 woman at 1 time,but u cheat on her so that isnt true.then u say u "fully intended2 make urself a good husband2 her by enlgish standards" but then say ur goin2 practice discretion,which wud mean ur gunna cheat.so ur not only a scumbag bastard.ur a lying scumbag bastard.
i fail to understand why FEMALE authors write about men like this.to write about 1 like this is like sayin u wanna end up w/a guy like this.who's gunna be unfaithful,who's been w/ a million girls. i just dont understand it.
so u adore her.then how the heck do u fall in love with chantelle?!
"but that was for l8r.he hadnt taken his one and only wife yet.right now he was facing the long journey to Barikah,and a long time coming b4 he found anyone as accomodating as clair."
i swear johanna writes some of the most unlikeable male characters ever2 be read about.
he ends up with chantelle,which means she'll be living in his grandfathers home.where hes slept with half the maids.where he "knows them all intimately." how awful.i mean cud u imagine?!
&how does he get over this kick where he cant be faithful 2 one woman alone?! cause he seems pretty adamant in his disgusting habits.
i feel sorry that the main character has to end up with a guy like that.
&i thought his identity would be a big secret.but how can it be when we know derek is the 1 who goes after chantelle.so we know hes the 1 she ends up with.thanks johanna.u ruined all my hopes for this book.
how is this scumbag ever supposed2 be faithful to chantelle when he isnt even faithful to his fiance right now? whom is supposedly his best friend.
i dont care to finish this story because hes a snake in the grass.not romance book material at all. idk why authors write about bastards like this,as if we like ppl like that.
screw this plot.screw the characters.screw the book.actually wanted2 read what happens to chantelle but not when shes ending up with derek.
after the last four books ive read by johanna-all crappy-i just need2 stay away from her books altogether.