The Father's Child

by Mark Adair

John Truman, a bright, introverted, college student belongs to the New Dawn...he just doesn't know it yet. The plans of the 300-year-old, Oxford-based, secret society revolve around him, the final piece in their puzzle. He struggles with almost everything - the girl he loves, the extroverted uber-social best friend, his estranged father, and the recurring visions that compromise his ability to interact with others. All John wants is to get through today; all they want is to rule the world.
 
Suspense, intrigue, mystery, and romance all woven together into one thrilling tapestry. Enter a world where nothing is what it seems and no one can be trusted. Are you ready?

Genres: Fiction

236 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 1, 2010

About the author

Mark Adair spent over twenty-five years in the Information Technology world designing and developing complex software systems for clients such as the US Navy, Disney, and Lockheed Martin. One evening, after the latest 14 hour workday in a string of many, he struggled to wind down. Looking for a place to escape, he grabbed his trusty laptop and began writing a suspense story about a guy named John Truman. Several months later he had completed the first draft of his first novel, and realized that he would never be the same.

Recently, he released his acclaimed suspense/thriller, "The Father's Child", on the Kindle, Nook, Smashwords platforms.

After living in Southern California, Texas, Oklahoma, Florida, and Colorado, he now makes his home in lovely Northern California. In addition to writing, he enjoys swimming, wine, Oklahoma football, the ocean, friends, and his family...not necessarily in that order.

Reviews

[Jaidis Shaw · Rating 3 out of 5]

The Father's Child by Mark Adair is a techno-thriller that is jam-packed with twists and turns. John Truman is just an average guy, or at least he seems to be. The book opens with your average college party and John is not the party type. After hiding out for as long as he can, he slowly tries making his way downstairs to blend in among friends. Only things take a wild turn and masked men decide to crash the party. Armed with serious weaponry, they demand that one of John's close friends, George, step forward or else. Deciding to give himself up rather than see anyone hurt, George agrees and is taken by the masked men, who then leave just as quickly as they came.

Years later, John and another good friend Paul have decided to move and start over. Deciding they should go ahead with the original plans, they want to open their own company. Only John starts having weird dreams and appears to be borderline psychotic. Being able to create complicated computer programs, John sets out on a search to track George's last steps before he was taken feeling as though he owes it to George to find the truth. Little does he know at the time, but John's whole life has been planned out for him and he is to become part of the New Dawn.

This book took me a little while to get into it. The beginning starts off great with a lot of action and then there are several chapters where Mr. Adair is laying the ground work, setting up the story and giving the readers details that will be needed later in the story, although there are a couple of spots where there is a little action. On more than one occasion I found myself pushing this book to the side and coming back to it. Once you get through the beginning, it does pick up if you stay with it.

The Father's Child is a book with two point of views. Each chapter alternates between John and Paul and I found this to be a little bit distracting. I would just be getting comfortable reading the story from one view only to have it abruptly switched to another. John and Paul may be best friends but they have very different personalities and therefore different ways of telling the story.

[Sue Palmer · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a fantastic read!
This book is listed under the Thriller genre but is much more than that! The story is intriguing, you just never know what is going to be around the next corner, it is full of twists and turns, with a bit of romance thrown in as a bonus.
I thoroughly enjoyed how the plot developed and halfway through i was just baffled at how it would end.
It didn't disappoint ....the conclusion was exciting, unexpected and very different!
I would highly recommend this book, it was well written with a very clever plot.

[Keryl Raist · Rating 2 out of 5]

I've wrapped up The Father's Child by Mark Adair, and even a few days later, I'm not sure what precisely I'm feeling about it. There were parts that were very, very good. There were parts where the writing got choppy and problematic. It hit one of my personal pet peeves, and not in a good way. It hit one of my best loves, in a very good way.

So, let's start at the very beginning. What is it about?

A lot of things. On one level it's a secret society thriller. Go a little deeper and it's a treatises on power and the use thereof. It's a study of love: romantic and platonic. It's a story of friendship.

I don't usually try to describe the plot of a book in a review. Usually, I try to avoid spoilers, but I'll have a hard time getting into what I really liked, and didn't, without going into the plot. So if you wish to avoid spoilers, now's the time to skip to the next review.

In a nutshell John Eris Truman is a technological wunderkind. He's got brains oozing out his ears. He's also shy and not very good with people. His best friend, Paul Eastman, is the yang to his yin. He's outgoing, good with people, and not stupid, but not John's style of hyper-analytical either. The story opens with their third buddy, George, being kidnapped by a group of exceptionally competent professionals at their bi-annual mid-term bash. Fast forward two years, and the FBI still has no clue what happened to George. Paul and John wrap up college and head west, starting anew amid the sunshine and beaches of California.

Then things start to get a bit weird. John starts to remember details about what happened right before George was kidnapped. Those details get them noticed by a mysterious organization. John gets 'kidnapped' and then 'rescued' and spends a few months in the care of his new friend, Sam, his 'rescuer.' They spend hours talking about the fate of the world. We learn how John has always felt a deep need to make the world a better place, a deep responsibility to better humanity. And throughout this he's having some sort of religious/psychic visions (daymares he calls them).

Meanwhile, Paul is looking for his friend. He's aided in this endeavor by Julia; an ex-CIA member, hired by Susan's (more on her in a bit) father as head of his security, in charge with fighting the mysterious organization, called The New Dawn; and Susan, long time girlfriend/love of John. Julia explains to them the New Dawn is a super-secret cabal with tentacles in every echelon of power. They have a vision of the good that they will do whatever is necessary to achieve. Susan's dad has been fighting them, and in retaliation, they kidnap kids dear to him, like George, and now that he's found out about it, John, and as soon as they can get their hands on him, Paul.

Eventually, of course, Paul finds John, and it turns out the New Dawn is behind all of it. Julia's a member. (It's hinted Susan's Dad is, too.) And once a mystical/technological ceremony; involving not just implanting a computer chip into John's brain, but a necromancer, three-hundred-year-old-blood, and a computer system that can rule the world; takes place, John will find himself a shadow king of Earth with Paul, Julia, and Susan as his highest counsel.

Over the course of this, we learn that The New Dawn is not all puppies and sunshine. Once John takes over he really will have the power to make the world a better place. But some absolutely horrific things had to happen to get him that power. If you can, imagine a hybrid of the Bene Gesserit, The Illuminati (Wilson and Shea's version), and a smattering of Cthulu, you'll have something that sort of gives you an idea of The New Dawn.

So, with that set up, we run into my pet peeve: sloppy moral thinking. Adair tells us that John really will have the power to make the world a better place. We aren't talking Hope and Change here, where the words sound good, but very little actually happens. We're talking about eradicating poverty and disease. We're talking end of war. Adair also tells us that John and The New Dawn will become one organism. So, even if horrible things had to happen to get John the power to make the world a better place, they do not have to continue happening because John, by will alone, can wield this power, and there's no reason he has to continue in those plans.

Basically, this is the Spiderman moment: with great power comes... Nothing. With an immensely powerful organization capable of changing the world, John, Paul and Susan decide to destroy it. Sure, they could have saved the lives of billions of people, destroyed hunger, ended disease, stopped war, but The New Dawn was involved in some horrific things to get them that power, so they used John's access to kill it.

Basically Peter Parker, upon noticing the research facility that created the spider was also doing absolutely evil genetic research, decided to set fire to it, stay a college student, majoring in journalism, and eventually became an investigative reporter. The web slinger never sees the light of day.

And this is where I, as a reader, start banging my head against the wall. I get the point of where Adair was going. I understand his play on turning away from the corrupting influence of almost infinite power. The problem is, he didn't set up the New Dawn or John in such a way that the reader comes away impressed and relieved that John stepped back from the power. Yes, the New Dawn is immensely creepy. But John is an immensely good character. A character who, with almost limitless power and in an absolute frothing rage, gives the man who made him that angry a black eye, and then stalks off in a huff. John is basically a Paladin. And he has complete and utter control over The New Dawn. So instead of Darth Vader being seduced by the power of the dark side and turning away from it, all I was left with was a sense of the immense loss of opportunity. Basically, John needed to be a whole lot darker for this plot to work convincingly.

Since we're already on the negative side, let me talk a little about the writing as well. For the most part the story is well written. Then we get to the climax of the book.

As an author there are two parts of the book you want to absolutely nail. The beginning because that's where you attract your reader, and the climax because, well, it's the climax. Adair did a fine job with the first 90ish percent of the story, then we get to the climax and the writing begins to feel rushed. He starts bounding over details that would have been nice to see, though he does have John remember some of them later in a flashback. Which is remarkably unsatisfying. He begins switching point of view rapidly, which isn't necessarily a deal breaker for me. It's a good technique for building tension and giving us both story lines, but both of his POV characters are in first person. Now, most of the time this isn't an issue. Adair has done a good job of giving both characters very distinct voices, so figuring out who is who takes maybe a sentence or two tops. But when you're flipping back and forth every few paragraphs, and it takes a line or two to figure out whose head you're in, it's more distracting than entrancing.

Then, right as the climax is drawing near, he tosses in a twist that I was expecting, but hoping he'd restrain himself from doing. He didn't set it up properly to have the sort of punch it needed, so it fizzled. Like with the decision to destroy New Dawn, I could see what he was trying to do, but it needed a few extra pages of background and tension building to really pull off.

Okay, enough of the stuff I didn't like, let's talk about the good stuff.

Character voice: Adair absolutely nailed it. John and Paul have distinct voices, both of which flow naturally, use words convincingly, and make me like the characters. I'd be happy to have both Paul and John as friends. They are fully rounded, vibrant characters.

Humor: once again Adair does a great job with this element of the story. The Father's Child could have been soul-suckingly grim, but it wasn't because of how well Paul is written. He's funny, occasionally goofy, but not so much that you want to slap him. He's a bit of a light-weight as a thinker, but it's an element this story badly needed. If you've ever seen NCIS, he'll put you in mind of DiNozzo.

The relationship between John and Paul. This is something I love to see in a book: a well-written, convincing, deep male friendship. Usually in thrillers men relate to each other in terms of killing one another or partnering up for the duration of the mission. Sometimes there's a sidekick as well, whose main purpose is to provide comic relief. Now, while it is true that Paul is there for comic relief, he's way past the 'sidekick' role. He's a fully defined protagonist in his own right. And between them is a relationship worth exploring. A friendship that feels real, intimate, yet fully masculine as well.

Lastly, Adair is handy with his visual imagery. While in Paul's head he's funny and witty, in John's he's intensely visual, seeing and describing things in detailed shades of beautiful language.

All of which is why, five days after finishing the book, I'm still not sure if I liked it or disliked it. I know I'm frustrated. I know Adair can write. I saw him do it. I read it. But then the climax hits and the prose goes wonky, and the penultimate scene of the book doesn't happen until a flashback at the end. Which made me a very unhappy reader. But it's got a great friendship, and some wonderful characters, and I really liked the use of visual imagery. Which made me a very happy reader.

On Goodreads.com, two stars equals it's okay. And I think that's where I'm going to leave The Father's Child. I have high hopes that Mark Adair's further adventures with the written word will be excellent.

[Lex Write · Rating 3 out of 5]

I am sort of a sucker for secret society books. I like the creepy and mysterious aspect that they provide and this book did not disappoint. New Dawn had all of the makings of a Kool-Aid drinking cult.(Paul the comic relief character makes a joke about it)
The Father’s Child starts at a party thrown by a group of friends known collectively as The Beatles because their names are John, Paul, and George (very cute) and we get to see a pretty good picture of the main characters personalities. John is shy, naive, and anxious and he has some sort of condition that causes him to have creepy visions. He is also super smart: he has a photographic memory and speaks Latin all the time. Paul is very social and obsessed with women his thoughts are like ticker-tape of dirty thoughts, which was very amusing most of the time but sometimes it slowed the flow of the story. . Susan makes an appearance at the party but we only know that John is in love with her and Paul thinks she is weird. George is the adventurous one and we only see him briefly as he is describing a spy adventure he had at a local pub. During the party, George gets kidnapped starting John Paul and Susan (with the later addition of Sam an FBI agent and Julia a former CIA agent and Paul’s love interest) on a wild adventure.
The only things I did not like about The Father’s Child was that at first it started out kind of slow, it was sort of hard for me to figure out whether Paul or John were narrating (until I realized that they switched off pretty much every other chapter), and the timing of everything felt off at some parts. In John’s chapter it would say “after a few weeks” when in the previous chapter Paul is doing something that does not finish until the chapter after John’s and the events were only supposed to take place in an evening. But, I totally got sucked into the story after the rocky start, and I had to read it straight through to the end. There was a lot of action and I especially liked the fact that I did not know what the “right” side was. There were a lot of twists and turns and I totally did not expect the conclusion. All in all, I really liked the story and the unique way that technology and religion combined to make such a creepy cult.
I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who likes science fiction, thrillers, or mysteries because it had a good amount of each.

[Sue Owen · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was billed as a thriller but it is so much more than that. It’s riddled with philosophical ideas about the character’s, life, hope and what is true happiness. I say riddled because it’s definitely not dripping or over done in any way. This book is well written and kept me guessing as to where it would all end. It is definitely not a casual read. If you want a run of the mill thriller with no thought put into it, this is not the book for you. The author has gone inside the minds of the main characters and along the way taught the reader about feelings and life in general.

I thought I saw the end coming but at the last it took a surprising turn. I didn’t see part of it coming, I do want to know what exactly happened to the first friend and by golly I’m ecstatic the way the rest of it worked out. Go team!

The author, I believe, took a good, hard look at the way things are put together and carried the story through all that meant. It wasn’t over done and it certainly isn’t just another thriller. It is one of those kinds of books that you can read over and over and still find something new that you may have missed. I almost read right past the big revelation because I just wasn’t looking for it. That’ll teach me to read well into the night!

Generally, this is a well thought out book and definitely a do-over. Excellent job, Mark!

(reprint from pinkphoenixrr.blogspot.com)

[Murphy's Library · Rating 3 out of 5]

from Murphy's Library — http://www.murphyslibrary.com/

John Truman is an ordinary guy, he has a good job, good friends and a relatively good life. Well, maybe he’s not that ordinary, because he speaks Latin as much as he speaks English—something that sometimes bothers his friends, who have to keep asking him what does he mean with those old words.

When one of his closest friends is kidnapped, he has no idea how much his life is about to change. Two years later, the Police still has no clue about what happened to George, so John and Paul set off to California to get a fresh start. John suddenly remembers something that can be important on the investigation about George, but before he can do anything, he’s captured too. With his life in such risk, John start to rethink about his entire life. This beginning is kinda slow, but after that, the book is a roller coaster.

Mark Aidar’s main characters are well built, with flaws and qualities, and the POV alternates between John and Paul, although John’s always the focus. You’re going to laugh with Paul’s thoughts about women, he’s hilarious, and I’m sure there are a bunch of Pauls out there. I find myself a little bit annoyed by the fact that John is so naive, sometimes he can’t see what’s clearly in front of him. The secret society behind George’s disappearance, called New Dawn, makes you think about what the power and the desire to dominate the world can do to people.

[Mark Adair · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Mark Adair's 'The Father's Child' is a roller coaster, bungee jump, and treasure hunt all rolled into one! The story quickly develops a team of main characters, each of them uniquely talented with very intriguing personalities. You quickly get inside their heads; understand their motivations, desires, quirks and their synergistic dependencies...and BAM! There's an unexpected event that propels the college companions on a thrilling journey filled with suspense, mystery and high-tech adrenaline.

The story's main characters, John Truman and Paul Eastman, first meet in the 9th Grade. Coincidence or destiny? They quickly become great friends and end up going to college together. In addition to their academic and nightly pub activities, John and Paul, along with two other close friends, are well known for their wild parties. It's during one of their `soon to be famous' mid-western college parties, where something happens that changes all four of their lives forever.

Adair is a master at witty dialogs, artful descriptions and teasing the reader with seeds of fore-shadowing. The story is filled with twists and turns, and fun surprises from beginning to end; a masterful plot that continues to develop all the way to an exciting and unexpected conclusion.

Buckle up, fire up your Kindle, and enjoy the ride!"

(Amazon review)

[Charles Markee · Rating 4 out of 5]

Generally a good read, especially the first 3/4 of the book. Part of the last section included the protagonist in a state of confusion, which left me in a state of confusion. It became a difficult read during that short segment. Otherwise the book was quite creative, well written and filled with authentic scenes.

[Jeanne · Rating 3 out of 5]

I just cant decide if I liked this book or not, it was well written fast paced at times. But there just something I guess I just did not get out of the story line. When I was done I did not think I compleatly understood the story and felt I was missing someting deeper that want I was processing..?

[Jack · Rating 3 out of 5]

Interesting plot for this book, but I thought the telling of it lacked definition, especially towards the end and the characters were portrayed as somewhat juvenile

[Sally Boyington · Rating 3 out of 5]

Review pending at Red Adept Reviews