“Judith” from 1982 is a difficult one to rate. I liked the heroine Judith. I liked the hero’s mother Lady Cresswell. The section that takes place in Portugal was interesting and I enjoyed the animal rescues. But as many Betty readers may agree, the hero is awkward and hard to like.
When I first read “Judith,” I was willing to give the hero Charles Cresswell a pass but on a re-read, I now feel like he’s going to be a very uncomfortable person to be married to. Underneath, he may be a seething volcano of love, but on the surface he is often quite unpleasant. He isn’t really a bad person, he’s someone that needs counseling to learn how to effectively communicate, and he’s not going to get that as a Betty Neels character. It’s sad for the heroine Judith. It’s sad for the reader. It’s sad for Charles too.
This book represents a departure from many of Betty’s go-to tropes in that Charles is a British historian, not a doctor or surgeon. Instead of a reticent coolness of character, he’s irritable, irritating and prone to anger. He finds it difficult to accept or express his own feelings and when he does make the effort, expressing them to Judith (our heroine) is awkward to say the least.
Judith is a nurse, and she is one of Betty’s Olivias or possibly an outlier, a beautiful, tall, splendidly-shaped, blue-eyed blonde. Having been ill with measles, she is sent to recuperate at her parents’ home, but is talked into traveling to Cumbria (English Lake District) to help her doctor uncle with his practice for a few weeks. While there, she meets Charles, who lives in the neighborhood, and each encounter with him showcases his considerable rudeness. What was Betty going for with Charles? The majority of RDDs are models of discreet courtesy and diplomacy. Was Betty deliberately trying to create a hero who is the polar opposite of the RDD?
Judith goes back to her hospital job thoroughly disliking Charles. Betty drops some hints that Charles is not disliking Judith at all. Then fate, less remarkable than simply very sad, steps in. Charles’ mother is diagnosed with terminal leukemia and Judith cares for her in the hospital. Lady Cresswell is adorable (unlike her son) and taking a shine to Judith and secretly sure her son is in love, talks Judith into giving up her job and traveling with her first to Charles’ estate in Cumbria and then to Portugal so Judith can provide private nursing services to her. Charles is often not around, busy working on a book, or just frankly avoiding Judith. I don’t think this is because he dislikes her. We get plenty of clues almost from the start that his mother is right and that he is in love. But he is so unpleasant that Judith dislikes him very much and he knows this.
So is it supposed to be a sort of screwball comedy where the principals are hiding deep feelings behind prickly repartee? Or is Charles just a toad? There is an argument for him being a good guy but it doesn’t change how he interacts with others. When Judith falls in love with him, it is really inexplicable. It might be a variation of the bad boy trope, the one where the heroine falls in love because she believes she alone can change him and make him a decent human being. But Judith is very clear-eyed about Charles from the start. She’s well aware of his shortcomings, but as she tells herself, she is in love and that’s that. Charles rarely shows her his good side or suggests he can or will change, so falling for a bad boy here (or a middle-aged historian in this case) is very hard to understand. His proposal is highly underwhelming and causes her a lot of heartache. She desperately wants to accept, but is feeling considerable disquiet because he never says he loves her and apart from a couple of apparently steamy kisses and saying calmly the future will be bleak without her, he hides his emotions behind a wall of near indifference that she is unable to penetrate. After a misunderstanding where he flies off the handle in a way totally disproportionate to the actual problem, he ends their engagement instead of communicating openly with the woman who is supposed to be his best beloved. It gets resolved a few days later but in a way that was again kind of underwhelming.
Being married to Charles is going to require an acceptance from Judith that he can’t share his feelings, that he is going to allow his volatile temperament to get the upper hand and take the nuclear option, that he won’t temper his speech to avoid insults and condescension, etc., etc. None of Betty’s characters ever go to therapy or marriage counseling, but Charles and Judith are going to need it.