ok, so i want to give it a five but i can't. which means i don't want to, i think.
anyhow, basically the story for some reason kept making me think of robert coover's baseball book, in that i didn't need to predict what would happen, because it was obvious, but in coover's book, which is an unfair comp as McSweeney and Coover are incredibly different, it didn't matter: i wanted to skip ahead to the obvious. Now that Flet didn't compel me in such a way doesn't take away from Flet, as much as it's like, well, Rakim would have worked the rhyme like this, but BIG did it that way, and I just prefer Rakim's style. Ok, anyhow, so McSweeney is a wizard with words. I love that she has one of the great mysteries of the symbolism of language figured out: that thought in text normally works linearly, which is not similar to the brain at all, even when people like DFW would use their "brain voice" in their prose, it was only hinting at the surface speak. McSweeney, on the other hand, gets to the root of association, whether it be by idea, nmeumonics, colors, or whatever: the words string together yet adhere to a structured opus of action/reaction. She really has found a foggy midground between the Poet and Novelist. That it took so long to happen is a shame on Literature. That it has happened should be a grand celebration. Sure, it's only 137 pages. But the word profiteering engages the reader far beyond that, and of course in a positive way. yeah.
just saying, but you might want to read some of her poetry before approaching her prose, just to acclimate oneself, because you haven't read anything else like this unless you are familiar with McSweeney. It's like knowing jazz before coming to A Tribe Called Quest. It's not necessary, but elevates the genius appreciation infinitely.