“𝑭𝒐𝒖𝒓𝒕𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒚𝒆𝒂𝒓𝒔, 𝒕𝒉𝒓𝒆𝒆 𝒎𝒐𝒏𝒕𝒉𝒔, 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒓𝒕𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒅𝒂𝒚𝒔, 𝑴𝒂𝒓𝒏𝒊𝒆. 𝑻𝒉𝒂𝒕'𝒔 𝒉𝒐𝒘 𝒎𝒂𝒏𝒚 𝒅𝒂𝒚𝒔 𝑰'𝒗𝒆 𝒍𝒐𝒗𝒆𝒅 𝒚𝒐𝒖, 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒗𝒆 𝒃𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒎𝒚 𝒇𝒊𝒓𝒔𝒕 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒍𝒂𝒔𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒈𝒉𝒕 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚 𝒔𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒍𝒆 𝒐𝒏𝒆."
Rating: ⭐️⭐️
Spice: 🔥🔥
Relationship dynamic: MW
Tropes/content: Sports romance (baseball), second chance, jock hero/nerdy heroine, virgin main character, flashbacks, "It's always been you", high school sweethearts, forced proximity, workplace romance
Series: New York Lions #1
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Marnie Matthews is starting a new job as the Director of Baseball Science for the New York Lions after spending years working for NASA. She's in for a surprise when she runs into Jupiter Reeves, the star third baseman on the team, and her high school sweetheart who broke her heart. Marnie and Jupiter haven't seen each other since the day Jupiter broke her heart fourteen years ago. She wants nothing to do with him, but he makes it known he wants her back and she's the love of his life. Jupiter works to rebuild their relationship, but his refusal to talk about why he broke up with her might be the reason they never get back together.
Baseball has played an important role in my life and it's a sport I truly enjoy watching. I was excited to read this story, and while I liked the baseball elements, but the rest fell flat for me. This story is told in the past and present. I enjoyed the past chapters because the reader gets to see Marnie and Jupiter fall in love. They were sweet and you could how much they loved each other. I loved the tattoos that they both had as adults to honor their love.
The present day chapters were okay, but I didn't care for how they reconnected. Jupiter truly takes no accountability for the break up and refuses to talk about it. He said some awful things to her when he broke up with her. I understand why he said those things, to a degree (I won't share why because that's a spoiler), but he should've understood how that impacted Marnie. Yes, I get his heart was broken, too, but he made that choice. She didn't know for fourteen years why he ended it, so of course she has questions. It truly baffled me that he thought he could buy her a few things, make some proclamations, and start saying, "I love you" again and she'd just go with it. I wish he had groveled more and truly showed that he wasn't going to break her heart.
Speaking of groveling, I really hated that Marnie had to be the one to fix things after their fight. I felt like Jupiter gaslit her a bit when he explained why he broke up with her. Yes, she wasn't fully truthful about changes she wanted to make when they were teens (keeping it vague since it's a spoiler), but he should've talked to her about it. Instead, he broke her heart, broke his own heart, then held onto her "lies" and expected her to get over it. I hated that she had to do the public display for him. I was honestly embarrassed for her. He's the one that should've been doing any and everything for her forgiveness. I wish Marnie had stood her ground more and made him work hard for her trust.
Outside of the story, my other issues were with the writing style. I'm not an expert by any means, but there were several misspelled words and grammatical errors. Additionally, the overuse of exclamation points was exhausting. They were used at odd times that would throw off scenes or make the characters, who are in their 30s, come off really immature. There's a way to show characters arguing without exclamation points and I wish that had been used here.
While this wasn't a total hit for me, I would try more books by Lulu. I'd be interested to see what else comes from this series.