There's a trick to writing suspense - it's much more about what the writer leaves out than what she puts in. German writer Kristina Dunker, author of more than twenty books for teen readers, is clearly a pro at suspense. Dunker's THE BIRDCATCHER is a decidedly creepy, nerve-wracking story that manages to get insidiously under your skin without ever devolving into the gore expected in horror novels.
The story is narrated by sixteen-year-old Nell Pestowsky, who has become the local pariah after leaving her drunken boyfriend on the side of the road following a bicycle accident. Nell insists she didn't think Toby had been hurt, but his family has involved the press, and even her teachers are commenting on the selfishness of teenage girls who care only about themselves. So when new friend Ida von Ramp (whose father is a famous TV chef) suggests they take a two-week camping trip together in the woods, Nell is all for it. Two weeks away from the mess her life has become sounds absolutely perfect. Unfortunately, there are a lot of things Nell doesn't know about Ida. And there's someone in the woods who seems to have plans of his own for the two girls.
Dunker's prose is crisp and believable, and Nell is an interesting and multidimensional narrator. She's a bit of a rebel at times, and has a reputation for outrageous behavior, but she's a very real teenager with conflicting emotions. She still has feelings for her boyfriend Toby (who broke up with her after his bicycle accident), but at the same time she is drawn to the boys she meets on her camping trip. Part of her just wants to have fun, swim in the river, and drink champagne. But as much as she wants to be close friends with Ida, there's something about this girl that makes her wonder if there's more going on than Ida is willing to share. Is the mysterious someone who seems to be stalking them Ida's ex-boyfriend? Has he really been sneaking in and out of the campsite and causing more accidents to befall them? Dunker keeps us guessing for most of the novel, and when the truth is finally revealed, it's not at all what I was expecting.
There are a few problems with THE BIRDCATCHER. Foremost among them is the characterization of Nell's parents, who seem disturbingly unconcerned about a potential lunatic stalking their daughter at a remote campsite. I can't imagine any sane parents ignoring a call for help from a sixteen-year-old girl. As it turns out, Nell's parents' reaction becomes a necessary plot device, but it is not believable. There's also an odd, detached tone to the novel that may or may not be the result of the translation (the novel was originally written in German, and has been translated into English by Katja Bell). I found it to be very readable, and Bell has made an effort to "Americanize" the story (there are mentions of "CSI" and other such colloquialisms), but Nell and Ida don't feel much like American kids. Nor should they! I would have enjoyed the novel a bit more had the German setting been better developed. As it is, there's little in the story to connect the reader with its location.
Overall, THE BIRDCATCHER is a scary novel with suspense that builds excruciatingly slowly, luring the reader in to a dénouement that works. I will warn readers that Dunker leaves things a bit unresolved at the end (and there is a central ethical dilemma that is frustratingly left hanging), but I liked Nell enough to overlook that. Parents, be advised that there are references to teen sex and teen smoking and alcohol use, but there is little profanity and no explicit content. This is a literate and well-paced story that is gripping from the start. I do recommend it.
[Please note: I was provided a copy of this novel for review; the opinions expressed her are my own.]