Trigger warning: attempted rape of the heroine by the hero's cousin. Hero meets, kisses and traumatizes heroine on her 16th birthday
Helen Brooks's heroines are always annoying and this story is no exception.
Unfortunately, the hero wasn't enough to make up for the criminal obliviousness of the heroine since he displayed one unregulated emotion after another. Heroine was afraid of him - granted, she was afraid of everything - but he really threw one too many tantrums for me to feel sorry for his unrequited longing.
Since the orphaned twins displayed the most maturity of any of the characters, both the H/h were shown in a bad light.
What also didn't work in this story - the abrupt changes of scene - the H/h go from Cornwall to London to Spain and then back to London and ending in Cornwall. None of the location changes were integral to the plot, it felt like the author needed to expand the page count by describing new places.
Bottom line: there was no conflict. Hero was besotted. Heroine in love and curious. One conversation (on the phone no less) solved it. But the heroine had to risk her life to save a young girl from the incoming tide before the HEA. (What?)
Just a mess of a book.