clairene ⍥’s Comments (group member since Jun 09, 2020)

clairene ⍥’s comments from the The Celestial Institution | Semi-Advanced group.

Yeah, its been a busy semester ><

Ellipsis wrote: "OOh, could I make a teacher?"

You could! But there's not many roleplayers on right now, and the group is quite dead; but we could revive it when we have the time?

Z wrote: "Angel Vera
17
female
Siren"

Added!

i do think that there are some issues here and there, and like it's all right, it's a character yeah? but i trust that you'll roleplay her well, so she's approved!

sorry for the late response though :')

I'll be more active soon (despite my fantasies that I'll be free in August). I'm settling into school, but I'll be on more often after that!

Several things...

so could you edit the part on her name? i think you added "aspiring" by accident ><

her personality are just words, synonyms of each other. but i need sentences, elaboration on how her personality came to be. some questions that might help you would be - why is she rude? when is she kind, loyal, compassionate? what is considered a good day? and i think you should also lessen the number of personalities, because you would have to elaborate for each one :/

next, her history has to link to how she got her powers as a siren. how does her twin having epileptic seizure link to that, and is that an important information to have? overall, the history needs to be elaborated too. why did she get disowned? did her twin get disowned as well? how has her history affected her as an individual? is she now more vulnerable? how does the history also shape her personality?

her powers need to have a specific intention; i.e when she sings, does she heal someone? does she use it for persuasion? what does she use it for?

for her dislikes, if she is really as calm, as nice and compassionate (as stated in her personality), why would she feel jealous of other people? she should instead be happy that they are together right ö even on her regular day, she is stubborn, arrogant and a bit rude, which does not indicate why she dislike them.

please do try and refer to above characters made by others / myself to have a greater understanding of making a detailed character >< sorry for picking on so many things, but i do hope you improve as a role player too!

Overall, accepted! And I'm so sorry for the late response >< I like the idea of the sword :)

Sorry for the late reply, but yeah! :D

No problems!

Chryseis could dorm with Adalynn if you like!

But I'll be more active later on in August though

(( kylee, try to type at least three to four sentences per post! thanks! ))

I have Cayenne (20) M and Chryseis (20) F if anyone is interested in dorming! :D

All right! Verton is approved and going on the list!

Nice! I saw the edits in the history and it looks good. All you have to do now is to add the part on your explanation about his personality etc into the actual post itself!

thank you! :>

Hey! Please do fill up the "Name" section :)

I think he's not bad, but the personality needs some clarification-
What do you mean "when it comes to work, he will often just try to find a girl to flirt with"? And I think you mean to say that he is straight, instead of binary, which was probably why he only just flirts with guys as a tease (correct me if I'm wrong)? And what do you mean when you say that he is less friendly on the "inside", so to speak, is it because of his twin sister leaving?

For his history, could you please add a bit on how he managed to get the letter to the institution? And I think his likes needs to be more than just flirting :')

Nice powers and balance, and oddly specific shrimp, but I'm totally okay with that. Thank you for reading all of that, and sorry for the late reply ><

What is so important that you can't allegedly waste time though?

And yeah, thanks Layla I was actually doing some work outside of GR. But why do I need to delete the statement? I was genuine questions (even though the tone seemed like rude) because you seem to dislike red tape and bureaucracy so it was merely a suggestion to make your own group, and also questions that would help us get a clearer picture as to where you got your permission from.

Cyber bullying happened there. It's a completely different thing.

I never said you were doing something wrong, and in fact glad you have your own ideas and thank for that. I just wanted to have an impartial treatment for everyone. I deleted Kanomi's thread, but I made one for her today, and I will delete yours once you transfer it / I copy and paste it over.

That's all that I'm asking. Thank you.

I said I'd delete the thread, so it might come about as me wanting to delete the whole thing; so I'm sorry about that! but I
1. specifically asked you to transfer it and
2. again, i'm not heartless so i won't just delete all of it and leave you with nothing even if you didn't transfer.

My other moderator didn't disagree, but she didn't agree either. Please don't make it seem like I'm ignorant, and don't ask me to do things like conferring with my moderator when we have our own private messages. I know what I'm doing.

What's next is that
- you need to transfer your thread work into the one that i made

The one that says "Phase 1"

You didn't ask for permission before creating the extra thread. In the information, I stated that we will create the thread. And while it might seem like I want to delete your hard work, I'm not heartless. I can copy and paste it over, as mentioned.