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Mar 14, 2021 05:19AM

1107032 Andres wrote: "Awesome, you got your own topic going. Just keep posting your chapters here. Don't feel bad if you don't see reviews posting up right away, everyone is working on their stuff and getting stuck in t..."

Dilara and I have been working together and it's been great. Her story is super cool and she's been giving me precious insights. All thanks to this group.
Introductions (154 new)
Mar 14, 2021 05:17AM

1107032 Andres wrote: "Hi Aura, welcome!

Fantasy author, alright! Don't worry about the reviews for now your with the GODS. You can always go back and help out people that reviewed for you. Just keep writing. Try to wri..."


Thank you for the warm welcoming, Andres! I'll update my thread when I reach chapter 10, for sure. I will check out your material as soon as I have the time. I'm a mother of two, the schools are closed, I'm working from home, so being able to write a chapter per week is already a feat! But I'm working with other writers who are doing the Coursera course as well so I'm reading about 5 works in progress as well.

Best,
Aura
Mar 06, 2021 01:18PM

1107032 The Protectors: A teenage girl discovers she has superpowers after entering a new school and learning that she had been living a life sheltered from a dangerous secret about what she is capable of.

I'm currently writing chapter 4 and due to helpful discussions and reviews, chapters 1 and 2 are already different from what is uploaded to COURSERA, but I think it's readable still. Looking forward to some reviews!

Chapter 1: http://shorturl.at/jsDGV

Chapter 2: http://shorturl.at/psGM5

Chapter 3: http://shorturl.at/enuDI
Coursera Links (38 new)
Mar 06, 2021 01:10PM

1107032 Hi guys, I'm new and would like you to review my story.
It's fantasy/superpowers/YA

The Protectors: A teenage girl discovers she has superpowers after entering a new school and learning that she had been living a life sheltered from a dangerous secret about what she is capable of.

I'm currently writing chapter 4 and due to helpful discussions and reviews, chapters 1 and 2 are already different from what is uploaded to COURSERA, but I think it's readable still.

Chapter 1: http://shorturl.at/jsDGV

Chapter 2: http://shorturl.at/psGM5

Chapter 3: http://shorturl.at/enuDI

Looking forward to meeting some writers!
Introductions (154 new)
Mar 06, 2021 01:02PM

1107032 Hi, everyone, my name is Aura and I started on COURSERA in February.
Thank you so much, Andres for creating this group and for updating the invitation on Coursera, otherwise I wouldn't have found it. I have a peer group but only 4 of us are actively writing and I'm the only one writing a fantasy/superpowers story. Plus, it's difficult to achieve the necessary 5 reviews per after week two.

So, I hope to read awesome novels and meet awesome people.
Best,
Aura.