Carrlene Ray’s Comments (group member since Sep 30, 2020)

Carrlene Ray’s comments from the Aspiring Authors Club! - Prompts, Advice, & More! group.

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Today’s prompt is based around Ken’s book, Lady Rose. If you haven’t already started reading it, I’d recommend you do in order to complete this prompt. You can read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/2433846...

Alright, the prompt is to write a short story about Ember’s snow leopard familiar, Lyra. Have fun!

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UPDATED CLAIM LIST

October 4- October 11 ~ Assassin’s Coven 1 (Christiana)

October 12- October 19 ~ Lady Rose (Ken)

October 20- October 27 Living Storm (Ryan)

October 28- November 5 ~ My Enemy’s Best Friend (Paige)

November 6- November 13

November 14- November 21

November 22- November 29 ~ To be Broken by Carrlene Ray

Here is the story info that Ken made


Name of Story: 𝑳𝒂𝒅𝒚 𝑹𝒐𝒔𝒆

Authors Name: Ⓚⓔⓝⓐⓓⓘⓔ  ( Ⓚⓔⓝ  ) Ⓢⓤⓣⓣⓞⓝ

Date of Week: 𝑶𝒄𝒕𝒐𝒃𝒆𝒓 12- 𝑶𝒄𝒕𝒐𝒃𝒆𝒓 19

Link to Story: ( https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/... )

Teaser (What would you want to be on the back of your book?):
𝘐𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘒𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘥𝘰𝘮 𝘰𝘧 𝘈𝘭𝘶𝘳𝘪𝘢, 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘴 𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘣𝘪𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘺. 𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘺 4 𝘵𝘺𝘱𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘱𝘦𝘰𝘱𝘭𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘪𝘴𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥. 𝘍𝘪𝘳𝘦 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘴, 𝘌𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘩 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘴, 𝘞𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘴, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘈𝘪𝘳 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘴. 𝘌𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘰𝘸𝘯 𝘴𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘪𝘴𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘥. 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘙𝘰𝘺𝘢𝘭 𝘧𝘢𝘮𝘪𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘈𝘪𝘳 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘴𝘰𝘯 𝘩𝘢𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘢 𝘸𝘪𝘧𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢 𝘯𝘦𝘸 𝘘𝘶𝘦𝘦𝘯.

𝘌𝘮𝘣𝘦𝘳 𝘙𝘰𝘴𝘦~𝘕𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘢𝘭𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘯 𝘌𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘩 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘣𝘪𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘧𝘦𝘸 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦. 𝘌𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘩 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘶𝘴𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘬 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘪𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘴 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘌𝘮𝘣𝘦𝘳 𝘪𝘴 𝘥𝘪𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘵. 𝘚𝘩𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘢𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘴𝘵 𝘴𝘬𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘵. 𝘚𝘩𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘴 𝘢 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘵𝘩 𝘵𝘰𝘶𝘤𝘩. 𝘌𝘮𝘣𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘰 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘱𝘦𝘵𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘘𝘶𝘦𝘦𝘯𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘪𝘢𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘒𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘘𝘶𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥𝘯’𝘵.

Guiding Questions/Suggestions for the Reviewers (What specifically do you want feedback on?):
~ 𝘞𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘧𝘢𝘷𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘦 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵 𝘴𝘰 𝘧𝘢𝘳?
~ 𝘞𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘐 𝘢𝘥𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘺?
~ 𝘐𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘐 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘥𝘰 𝘵𝘰 𝘧𝘪𝘹 𝘪𝘵?
𝘗𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘦 𝘣𝘦 𝘩𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘵, 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘴𝘰 𝘐 𝘤𝘢𝘯 𝘮𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳.

Additional Information on your Book:
𝘛𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘢𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘢𝘯 𝘙𝘱 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐 𝘩𝘢𝘥 𝘥𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘺 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘯. 𝘐𝘵 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘢 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘨𝘰𝘰𝘥 𝘙𝘱 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘺 𝘐’𝘮 𝘮𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘵 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘢 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬.

About the author (What the inside of the book would say about you) *optional*:
𝘏𝘮𝘮, 𝘐 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘺𝘦𝘵.

Cover design/What would you like the cover of your book to look like (Can be a link, photo or description) *optional*:
Burning Rose wallpaper by SweetLanaz - 5f - Free on ZEDGE™
𝘖𝘳 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵.

The theme of story/Moral Lesson(no spoilers :) ) *optional*:
𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮𝘦 𝘪𝘴 𝘨𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦, 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘦, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦.

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(Sure! Whenever you’re ready you may fill out a template for your story and post it in your topic)

We are very excited to announce that this week we will be reading Lady Rose by Ken for our Story Spotlight! You may still read and review Christina’s Assassin’s Coven #1 for points if you’d like, but right now we’re focusing on Lady Rose. I’m trying out some new things and we may transition the group entirely to Story Spotlight. There will be many polls, activities, and questions this week about Ken’s book to keep everyone excited and help Ken out. Can’t wait to read it with you all! (Side note: Christina, you may get a free Story Spotlight claim since we are now adding more to the program that you weren’t a part of)

VERY SERIOUS AND IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT

Okay, guys, I have a very serious announcement for you all. I put out a poll about Christina’s story, and someone thought it would be funny to add “IT SUCKS” as an answer. I know it was a joke, but that is not funny. Christina’s story was fantastic, and even if it’s a joke, bashing someone’s hard work is not okay. The poll has been taken down because of this. Please do not do this again or there will be no more polls in this group. This is supposed to be a safe place for aspiring authors, and I don’t want to ruin that, Thank you :)

No way! Where did you get the picture?

Omgoodness how did you get the cover???

((Thank you))

Today’s prompt is a poem about self-worth. These can be very powerful, I am looking forward to seeing your poetry!

Awesome

((Thank you! I’m not sure how to mod someone... newbie here haha))

((Thank you, Christiana! I have been oober busy. Would you like it if I mod you and you do Tuesdays, and Thursdays?))

Also I guess cloud

Yes!

Awesome, would you mind filling out the template and pasting it here? Thanks

Well what? Are you upset? This is where you fill out the template and paste your information