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Yeah, that sounds like a great idea! Shall I come up with a beginning sentence or two, or does someone else want to do it?
ok I guess I'll take the freedom to begin.Once upon a time there was a king in a kingdom called Lesuth. His name was Horìn Of The Great Southern Oceans and he ruled the most astonishing kingom one could ever imagine. Lesuth.
Lesuth was a beautiful, peaceful kingdom on the coast of the Continent. Though it had quickly been slipping into chaos, with corrupt officials in the government and thieves on the street, Horin had brought it to a new level of prosperity after his father, Dorin, passed.
People had enough to eat and were happy that Horin was so much different than his father. On High Days Of The Kingdom even the poorest were not only allowed but ordert do visit the Court for a feast. They were also ordered to take home as many leftovers as they could carry. His generocity was well known far beyond the borders of Lesuth.
One day he received a servant from another king who came to offer him an alliance.
Being the wise and generous ruler that he was, Horin said to the messenger, "I shall keep this servant for 30 days of work, to test both the servant's aptitude and the strength of the potential alliance."



I'd suggest you could write one sentence or part of it and leave it to someone else to finish it. or if you feel like it you might also add a whole paragraph to the plot. what ever you feel like.
I also suggest that turns of events should not be too drastic with every person. it should rather become a fluent story instead of a written down tug-of-war :)
other than that... be awesome and have fun!