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message 1: by SteinFussel (new)

SteinFussel what do you think about writing a story together? that way no one has to write a whole lot and we can all go on a little adventure and see where the wind of combined creativity might take us?!
I'd suggest you could write one sentence or part of it and leave it to someone else to finish it. or if you feel like it you might also add a whole paragraph to the plot. what ever you feel like.
I also suggest that turns of events should not be too drastic with every person. it should rather become a fluent story instead of a written down tug-of-war :)

other than that... be awesome and have fun!


message 2: by Glinda the Gallifreyan, We're the Voice!! (new)

Glinda the Gallifreyan | 177 comments Mod
Yeah, that sounds like a great idea! Shall I come up with a beginning sentence or two, or does someone else want to do it?


message 3: by SteinFussel (last edited Nov 01, 2012 02:25AM) (new)

SteinFussel it'd be an honor :-)


message 4: by SteinFussel (new)

SteinFussel ok I guess I'll take the freedom to begin.

Once upon a time there was a king in a kingdom called Lesuth. His name was Horìn Of The Great Southern Oceans and he ruled the most astonishing kingom one could ever imagine. Lesuth.


message 5: by Glinda the Gallifreyan, We're the Voice!! (new)

Glinda the Gallifreyan | 177 comments Mod
Lesuth was a beautiful, peaceful kingdom on the coast of the Continent. Though it had quickly been slipping into chaos, with corrupt officials in the government and thieves on the street, Horin had brought it to a new level of prosperity after his father, Dorin, passed.


message 6: by SteinFussel (new)

SteinFussel People had enough to eat and were happy that Horin was so much different than his father.
On High Days Of The Kingdom even the poorest were not only allowed but ordert do visit the Court for a feast. They were also ordered to take home as many leftovers as they could carry. His generocity was well known far beyond the borders of Lesuth.

One day he received a servant from another king who came to offer him an alliance.


message 7: by Glinda the Gallifreyan, We're the Voice!! (new)

Glinda the Gallifreyan | 177 comments Mod
Being the wise and generous ruler that he was, Horin said to the messenger, "I shall keep this servant for 30 days of work, to test both the servant's aptitude and the strength of the potential alliance."


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