Imagination discussion

Hi im karla! (Sorry emma for making this but i wanted a separate topic for this)
My story is called A Tigers Stripes
Please comment!

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Prolouge

Flick woke up, her two cubs were nestled in her belly- she looked down at there little paws that were batting each other in there sleep. Sighing she went to sleep again. In her dream she was in a forest-not part of her territory, there was he mother, "run flick, run away with out your cubs," the mum said, and suddenly she burst into flames and ran. Flick gasped and ran into her den, who cares what her mum said. There were the cubs Pebble and Leaf sound asleep, Flick picked them up but they grew bigger and bigger so Flick had to put them down, "save us mum, we cant walk yet if we die its your fault you will loose your stripes, loose your stripes, loose your stripes," they chanted. "N-no your big now you can walk come, follow," Flick said, "Loose your stripes, your dignity, your life, loose your stripes, loose them," the now huge but still young cubs chanted. With a gasp flick woke up, wide awake now, she looked at her now awake cubs that were mewling for milk, she sighed and got comfy as her cubs suckled.

Lovely

Chapter 1-Flick

Flick woke up her cubs were now weened and could hunt small birds-not a meal but fine if your hungry. She got outside looking for her cubs, looking deeply for some stripes,she jolted remembering her dream that haunted her still. Walking towards her cub, "wheres Pebble?" She asked looking around. Leaf pawed the ground hiding something, "what?" asked Flick, "umm... She went out of the territory to find a spotted-one. For fighting and... Erm... Killing so you were proud of her." Leaf said flicking her tail back and fourth. Flick knew why but pretended not to," why?" She asked trying to sound convincible. "Well... You... Um... Never thought much about us... Because... I mean since you told us about your cub that died young. Flick tensed, it was NOT her fault that Prowl found his way to the mouth of the cave but the tiger spirit wasnt sure, so she just lost her tail stripes and the tail went a bit of a sandy colour and not spotted. Flick saw Leafs un-certianty, " th-thats not true, i love you all now lets find P-pebble before she gets eaten," Flick lied and ran, Leaf following her to the spotted-ones camp. On the way Leaf asked ," whats the difference between a spotted-one and a leopard?"
"A leopard was born one but a spotted-one broke a big-cat law, every animal has a soul brother like an snake-if they break there law they become a scaled-one which is like a lizard but bigger, like all soulless- and a soulless is, of course a spotted-one, a scaled-one, umm, a swimming-one and ones like this." Flick explained, "so do all animals have there own sould brother?" Leaf asked "no, each souless could of been lots of different animals- they just need to be all-really like the soulless one, the selected soulless ones were chosen because they packed and tries to take over the world forest." Flick replies, then added "i think you should explain this to your sister-you need to be a good story teller if you want to be a mother Flick said.

'Those who cause a death must loose there stripes and become a spotted-one its their choice to be a spotted-souless-no rules but must have no contact with the big-cat world or a spotted-one who follows the rule of a leopard but must stay with the pack of spotted-ones.
-The Tigers Law"

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