Young Writers discussion

Hello!
I'm looking for some beta readers to read through the mauscript of my 21.5k novella, and let me know what obviously doesn't work, plot holes, characterization, etc.
Here's a one sentence synopsis : there's a few odd things about Nessa - one is that, even though she's only freshly sixteen, she already has an assassin after her.

If you're interested in betaing, message me!
Thanks!

I could do it! :)

Emily wrote: "Hello!
I'm looking for some beta readers to read through the mauscript of my 21.5k novella, and let me know what obviously doesn't work, plot holes, characterization, etc.
Here's a one sentence syn..."

If you post a link, I could do it.

I read it, and the story could use a little bit more on her family life and her everyday life, and it seemed like it was a little jumpy from place to place because y go into detail and as I was reading I forgot about what was happening, but, the imagery was great, and very descriptive.

3 out of 5 Stars.

I could try to do it if you want me to.