❈Alarum❈ {Advanced Roleplay} discussion

Humans are rare in the fey world so a maximum number will be put up, this topic will be concluded by the "first in best dressed" motto. One human per user.
All characters must be approved by a MOD. Please follow the outline. Feel free to add anything but please have all the information. Use bold writing for the headings for example:
<.b> [context] <./b>
^^ without the period though {｡^◕‿◕^｡}
{First Name}

{Middle Name}
(optional)
{Last Name}

{Current age}
(remember that all fey are immortal)

{Gender}
(let's try to keep the boy/girl ratio even)

{Date of Birth}

{Hometown}

{Court}

{Reason for hiding in faery land}
(Please explain thoroughly why and how he/she is in Alarum)
{Appearance}
(You can have pictures but you must have at least three descriptive sentences)

{Personality}
(at least 5 sentences)

{History}
(at least five sentences)

{Crush/relationship}

{Family}

{Likes/Dislikes}

{Other}

{Name}
Hikki "Crow" Totyo
{Age} 26
{Gender}
Male
{Date of birth}
December 13
{Hometown}
None
{Court}
None (looking)

{Appearance}
Hikki has wavy obsidian black hair and matching cold black eyes with a short shaved beard. He has a light pale skin tone like snow, he's tall with a height of 6'2 and is a little on the slim side. He has a small scar on his right cheek, a piercing on his left ear and the word DEATH tattooed on his right hand one letter on each finger.

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{Reason for hiding in faery land}
In his world Hikki was a notorious member of a crime syndicate. One of the top lieutenants, widely known through the city by his alias name "Crow". He was living the good life, excitement, risk, money and women, until he was framed by his partner being branded a traitor to the syndicate. After his escape he went into hiding and started hunting down his old partner and his accomplices. After months of hunting and killing them all, he tried to clear his name, but ultimately failed. Now on the run from his old colleagues he stumbled upon a portal and fell through it, the portal closed behind him.

{Personality}
He's quiet, quick thinking, loyal, polite, loves to fight, take certain risks, shows off and is very flirtatious. When he's not working he's either reading a book, practicing his sword and hand to hand combat, or sleeping (usually with another). He's very sarcastic and may come off as rude to most people and others don’t really understand his humor either. He's completely loyal to those works for and with giving no less and no more than 100%. He's also not above theft, assassination or playing dirty like blackmail to get the job done.

{History}
He grew up in a rough city and neighborhood with no parents around hardly and friends. He joined the syndicate at age 16 as an underling dealing in small time crimes like theft. He quickly moved up the ranks and made lieutenant at age 23, being well known liked and trusted, the boss gave him the nickname "Crow". He took the name and made it his own making sure everyone knows the name, but not his face so he could move around and not be noticed. At age 25 he was one of the most known member’s throughout the city with his own district to control.

{Crush/Relationship}
None/open

{Family}
Mother and Father deceased.

{Likes}
Fighting, reading, practicing, sleeping, risk, snow, animals and sex.

{Dislike}
Disloyal people, weak people, being told what to do by a nobody and thinking their better than him.

Edited the appearance. It this one ok?

Typo's done.

Do still need to bold the headings?

Tyler wrote: "Do still need to bold the headings?"

yes please

✥Toria✥ wrote: "Tyler wrote: "Do still need to bold the headings?"

yes please"

I've been trying to bold the headings all day but it won't.

to bold you need to do < b > at the start of the sentence (no spaces in between) and < / b > at the end of the sentence.
get it :)

✥Toria✥ wrote: "to bold you need to do at the start of the sentence (no spaces in between) and at the end of the sentence.
get it :)"

Thank. Im finally done!!!!

Approved!

Allison Argent wrote: "[First Name:] Zora
[Meaning:] Dawn

[Middle Name:] Avalon
Meaning: In Authurian legend the meaning of the name Avalon is: Authur's Burial Place.

[Last Name:] Callan
Meaning: Strong In Battle

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Some of your pictures aren't working....
If you can't get them working thats fine, your approved!

{First Name} Max
{Middle Name} Landon
{Last Name} Gates

{Current age}
21

{Gender}
Male

{Date of Birth}
January 19

{Hometown}
Melbourne-Saintkilda (Australia)

{Court}
None (hasn't found one yet)

{Reason for hiding in faery land}
He lost his family in a so called accident and feels as though his life is empty now. HE came to Alarum because he wants to find what will bring meaning back into his life.

{Appearance}
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He has blue eyes the colour of the ocean and chocolate brown hair. He is 6'3 and weighs 95kg. he has a lean muscled body from working out nad is good at keeping his diet under control.

{Personality}
Max is a fun person to be around who lives for adventure. He doesn't like to stay in the same place and will explore till he finds the answer to something. Max likes to crack a few jokes in the moment and will enjoy a good song around the camp fire. H doesn't hold grudges against people as long as they apologise sincerely against their wrong doings.

{History}
He grew up in a nice loving family who treated him with as much respect as there was love. He loved his family from the bottom of his heart and couldn't picture his life without them/. That was until they died in a tragic boat accident. The police put it down as a boat malfunction but Max believed it was his jealous ex girlfriend. (which it was.) Max can never forgive himself for what happened.

{Crush/relationship}
No since his ex girlfriend

{Family}
His family died but here they are anyway
Mother-Lindsey Gates
Father-Andrew Gates
Older brother-Jason Gates
Younger sister-Elliot Gates

{Likes/Dislikes}
likes:
-Pizza
-Beach
-Nature
-Exploring
-Running
-Sleeping in
Dislikes:
-Cold weather
-Pumpkin
-Britney Spears
-Arrogant people
-Waking up early

Mariah :P wrote: "{First Name} Max
{Middle Name} Landon
{Last Name} Gates

{Current age}
21

{Gender}
Male

{Date of Birth}
January 19

{Hometown}
Melbourne-Saintkilda (Australia)

{Court}
None (hasn't found one ..."

Could you please making the sub-headings bold.

Allison your girl is approved ^.^

"I'm going to laugh like everything fine and pretend life is great and that I couldn't be better."

Full Name:Lilyan Jane Johnson
Nickname:Lily, Lj, Lily-Pad, Lil.
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Age:18

Gender:Female
Sexuality:Straight
Relationship/Soulmate:Single (Just ask!)
Court:Summer!
Reason for being in fae land:To forget about what happened to her mom and hopefully get over her depression.
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Appearance:

Hair:Dark chocolate brown that runs halfway down her back. Her hair is silky soft and smooth and very thick.
Eyes:She had light crystal blue eyes that sparkle in the sun or when she's in a good mood.
Weight:110lbs.
Height:5'3
Face Details:Lily has a very heart shaped face. She has a button nose and she has defended cheek bones.
Body type:Lily's legs seem rather tall despite the fact that she's not very tall herself. She has a very slim but curvy figure. She has muscles in all the right places.
Blood type:O+
Distinguished Marks:Scars on her wrist. A birth mark by her left eye and the right side of her neck that both just look like darker tan spots.

Tattoos: (view spoiler)[
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Personality:
Stubborn
Stubborn people get themselves in a lot of trouble, but they also get things done.
Lily has always been an extremely stubborn person. She won't just sit back and be told something she doesn't believe in and quietly except it. She'll stubbornly tell you why your wrong and proceed to prove it to you. She's also stubborn when it comes to being told what to do. She won't do something if she doesn't believe its right. No that doesn't mean she's a goody two shoes but she tries to do what's right she may not succeed but she tries. She'll fight for what she wants when she wants of course she's smart enough not to be too stubborn where it gets her killed.

Sarcastic/Witty
Wit is a dangerous weapon, even to the possessor, if he knows not how to use it discreetly.
Wit is a dangerous weapon if you don't know how to use it. Its a good thing Lily knows exactly how to wield it or she'd be in a heap of trouble. She knows when to use it and when not to. She knows how be obvious with it and discreet with it. Lily doesn't use her wit that often because of how dangerous of a weapon it can be. She uses it when necessary.

Adventurous
I feel very adventurous. There are so many doors to be opened, and I'm not afraid to look behind them.
Lily is generally a very adventurous girl. She loves to try and discover news things that some people would be to afraid to do. Things people might not even think of trying. She also loves to go and find new places and things whenever. Some would say she was to curious, but the saying is curiosity killed the cat it says nothing about the werewolf so she figures she's good. Of course she's not stupid she know how to be careful and how far she can and can't go in her adventures.

Honest
Its better to be brutally honest than to live a lie.
Lily is a generally honest person. She is brutally truthful weather you want to hear it or not. Not to say that she doesn't lie every once in a while. If it keeps her alive she'll lie to save her life. She just finds that being truthful especially around vampire's keeps you alive longer. See vampires don't usually like when you lie to them so she doesn't. Sure she keeps things from them but she doesn't outright lie. Sometimes what she says has a double meaning. She'll say what you want to hear and still be truthful about it.

Loyal
A person who deserves my loyalty receives it.
Lily is if anything loyal. No not loyal as an she'll let you boss her around but loyal as in she'll fight to the death for those she cares about. She won't just abandon someone because its more convenient for her. Of course if she's loyal to you and cares about you she expects the same out of you. You have to earn her loyalty she won't just give it to you because you ask for. They say blood is thicker than water but blood doesn't always ensure loyalty. Yeah blood is important but loyalty is more important than blood. Of course the vampires have a different opinion on that.

Loving
I was born with an enormous need for affection, and a terrible need to give it.
This quote is so true for Lily. She may not trust easily but she does love easily. Maybe a little too easily. You'd think because you loved someone you'd trust them but that doesn't hold true for Lily. She often loves those who she doesn't trust. Those she shouldn't trust. She want to trust them but doesn't. She falls easily and once she had it takes a lot for that love to go away. Along with giving away love too easily she has always had a need to be loved in return. She longs to be cared for and loved as she does others. Of course she finds it more times than not that that doesn't happen. Not surprising since she's surrounded by vampires. Before that she was content with just her parents love and understanding but now she secretly longs for it even more so now.

Cynical
Love all, trust a few, do wrong to none.
Lily doesn't really trust. She only trusts a few people and that trust is earned. Its not easy to earn her trust and you have to work hard to gain her trust. She's not stupid enough to just hand of her trust to anyone who asks for her. She's trusted in the past and regretted it greatly so now gaining her trust in nearly impossible. Not trusting many people can be a good thing. Trusting the wrong person can get a person killed. She learned that the hard way.


"I'm just gonna dance and drink my problems away even if only for a little while."

History:Lily was born September 24th about three years after her parents had married. She had a older brother named Vincent who was older than her by a year. Life was great for the family of four until someone killed her mom Jenny when she was 5. After her mom had been killed she'd closed up and hardly ever talked. The only person she actually talked to was her brother and even that was rare. Of course it didn't help that with her dad's depression he also became abusive to her and her brother. Every time he'd gotten angry he'd take out on the closest one of them to him. It was usually her brother because he did what he could to protect her from it but sometimes that didn't work just made it worse. 10 years after her mother had past and she was 15 and her brother was 16 she snapped. She was sick of being the quiet girl who never talked and had to people at school as much as possible so they didn't find out about her father. She remembered yelling at him how she hated him and that if he'd been a good husband that her mom would still be here today. That caused her father to almost kill her with a knife. Luckily her brother had gotten home just in time to stop him. After her brother had managed to stop him they're father ran off and a week later that got news that he had killed himself. Lily and her brother have tried to live a normal or as normal life as they possibly could since then. Lily wasn't that quiet girl anymore who never talked. Now she talked all the time. Most people would say she talked to much but she decided to speak her mind because being quiet didn't help you in life at all. After her father had killed himself her and her brother had been put in the adoption system. Luckily two months later they where both adopted to the same parents Joe Carter and Della Carter who had a daughter Jamie who's two years younger than her. Since they where adopted they lived a nice normal life with the Carters who they now considered their parents even though they'd never replace the parents they had when they where 5 and 6 years old. Lily stayed with her adopted parents until the age of 13 and when she was 13 she discovered the fae land and went there to try and forget her problems. Of course her brother followed her.

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Fatal Flaws:Lily's biggest fatal flaw in her opinion is her depression. She believes it makes her seem weak and unable to handle anything even remotely sad. Due to her depression she had a habit of being suicidal and she often cuts herself to get rid of the pain. A few of her other flaws are that when she's not dancing or playing sports she is really rather a klutz, she is way to stubborn for her own good sometimes and she's willing to do anything for those she cares about most no matter how dangerous and stupid and its usually without thinking things through.

Likes/Dislikes
Likes:
✔Chocolate
✔Singing
✔Dancing
✔Summer
✔Animals
Dislikes:
✘Bugs
✘Spiders
✘Liars
✘The cold
✘Snakes

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Other:Has server depression that she was diagnosed with when she was 15.She also has PTSD (Post Traumatic Stress Disorder)which causes her to get angry easily.

Ok Done!

✥Toяia✥ wrote: "Mariah :P wrote: "{First Name} Max
{Middle Name} Landon
{Last Name} Gates

{Current age}
21

{Gender}
Male

{Date of Birth}
January 19

{Hometown}
Melbourne-Saintkilda (Australia)

{Court}
None ..."

So now that I fixed my character profile up, is mine aprroved?

@Mariah:

Please add some descriptive sentences to the appearance and then your approved :D
BTW

~To all members who are creating characters:
Please look at the outline provided above, I did make it for a reason.... So if you could just follow the rules without us having to remind you every post, it would be lovely. 
Happy Roleplaying :D

(view spoiler)[Also Mariah this isn't addressed intentionally towards you ;) I like Max, keep going with him. (hide spoiler)]