Ancient Egypt: The Age of Magic discussion

First Name: Zeyda

Last Name: Molokya

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: Egyptian

Class: Magician of the Per Ankh

Preferred Deity: Nepthys

Age: 12

Social Status: Middle Class


Personality:
Trait 1: Curious: She has a natural curiosity to know as much as possible in her life time. She hopes to eventually know how the gods and immortals where created and a lot of other knowledgeable stuff.
Trait 2: Shy: She is a total and complete introvert. She only starts a conversation when absolutely necessary. Though she wont ignore you when you talk to her, she is a little timid.
Trait 3: Selfless: She has a very nasty habit of thinking of other first. She always tried to help the best she can, and be a friend to others, even if they did nothing for her.
Trait 4: Passive: Can easily ignore self emotional problems. One minute she could be crying, the next minute looking like she never had.
Trait 5: Indecisive: When she is faced with a difficult situation, she will most likely stall for time. She thinks things through deeply before deciding, sometimes making people impatient.

Appearance: http://beneaththetangles.files.wordpr... (images not working o-o blame my computer)
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 75lbs
Hair colour: Brown
Skin colour: Dark tan
Eyes: Brown
Body type: Skinny
Pitch of voice: A little deep, but mostly neutral. Only a trained ear would be sure it was female.

Weakness(es):
*Introverted
*Smart mouthed
*Not a lot of connections
*Back of her knee is her Achilles heel

Strength(s):
*smart
*quick witted
*fast reflexes

Brief Biography/History: When Zeyda was first born, she learned to crawl and walk quickly. She also learned things like 'fire is hot', without having to scar herself. When she was 3 her parents died and she was on her own, by this time she was able to pretend to be a boy and get an education. She keeps a collapsible tent in her backpack for the night. Sometimes she offers help to the farmers and works for them for a portion of the harvest, sometimes getting money to buy clothes.

Relationship Status: Single

Family: All deceased

Biggest Fear: She has Mnemophobia (fear of memories)

Weapon(s): A dagger, kept in her robe pocket.

Fighting Skill(s): Fist fighting and spell casting are relatively well.

Other:

Why you post under completed when it isn't completed?

because im totally screwed o.o and it said completed not approved :/

Sorry about the misunderstanding, please delete her from there. I will go over her and give you things to edit. Once she is approve you may move her back :)

ok

Princess of The Underworld {Percabeth} wrote: "Egyptians didnt use last names so it took FOREVER to find a random last name"

Haha, I know how you feel. I was the same, so I just decided to stray from the path and look at Arabic names. :P

O_o
you are brilliant, but i worked to hard to find a random last name.

Haha, not really. I just googled it. :P And he didn't say you have to delete it here. Zac just meant under the completed characters topic. Here you can edit it all you want and ask for help if need be.

*facepalm* well I did, and i copied it so its not lost. But where do I put it for approval? i didnt see any topics for that.

Just put it here :) I'll add a rule for that! Sorry about all the confusion, this is my first group.

Its ok, i dont blame you. But you ARE ABSOLUTLY BRILLIANT by putting pitch of voice =) ill just edit the top comment for the billionth time (i mess up a lot) =)

Ok nevermind I just lost it O_O

It's okay :) my first group like this I joined, I had no idea what I was doing, you get the hang of it. And thank you ^_^ the credit really goes to the Great Sarah Mcallister who's templates this is based off of though.

Oh dear :(

ill take another...
...bloddy hell how long did that take?...
...gods i cant even remember XD

Well the blessing of Thoth be upon you for a good character!

XD YAY THOTH!!! =D

Images still not working... -_____________________________-

Make sure it's a .jpg file

o.o ok!

I shall now dissapear into the land of Green day and Goodreads characters

*poof*

Zac wrote: "It's okay :) my first group like this I joined, I had no idea what I was doing, you get the hang of it. And thank you ^_^ the credit really goes to the Great Sarah Mcallister who's templates this i..."

LOL. :P

Done!

-Remove Alias if she has none
-Change "Nyphtys" to Nephthys
-Remove Occupation
-Please bold all Personality Traits
-Change 5'2 to 5'2"
-Don't forget her pitch of voice
-Change Family to deceased

More after, tell me when these are done :)

Done

I just lost my ability to use lower Case C H and V

That's not good! How did that happen? And I'll look over her now!

I don't know...BUT NO I GOT IT BACK!!! =D

-Nepthys is still spelled wrong

-Delete the space between 75 and lbs

-Un-capitalize all traits

-Add a pitch of voice

did it

-capitalise her personality traits

-Un capitalise her physical ones

-delete distinguishable markings if she has none

-put a space between Strengths and History

-Almost done :) she looks great!

DONE!