Warriors: The Second Beginning {A Semi-Advanced Roleplay} discussion

Write the Cat Warriors Club Member Oath here!

When someone is mean, I'll remember Moony,
Even when life seems pretty goony.
I'll remember tigerstar (Yeah, that's right, you don't even deserve to have your name capitalized, you worthless piece of dung!!!) when I see the evil in the world,
I know I'll think of Crookedstar when my life seems to unfurl.
I know I'll see Sandstorm when in life I have to take the leap,
And look down on missed chances with my dear Spottedleaf. (The best cat ever, who we all love).
And I promise not to be embarrassed, Thunder, if I have paws the size of gloves.
You will see me, Jagged Peak,
When I feel helpless, I feel weak.
I'll remember Brightheart,when I see a scar on someone's face.
I will think of Windclan, every time I win a race.
I'll remember Silverstream, when I see a young mother.
I'll remember Violet, when I worry about my brother.
I will remember Goosefeather,when no one believes me.
I will think of Scourge, when someone's teased for being tiny.
I'll remember Mothwing,when I find it hard to believe.
I'll be reminded of Princess, when I see someone who seems naive
I'll always think of Heathertail, when I see someone who wants to be "Just friends".
I will think of the many deaths, when I am near the end.
I will think of Tawnypelt, whenever I feel judged.
I will think of Darkstripe, when somebody holds a grudge.
I promise to remember Cinderheart, whenever I climb a tree.
I'll remember Midnight, whenever I'm at sea.
I'll remember Leafpool, when I must follow my heart.
I will think of Hollyleaf, if I ever fall apart.
I'll remember Brambleclaw, when I must prove myself.
I'll remember Spottedleaf, when I'm suffering from bad health.
I'll remember Lionblaze, when I am feeling strong.
I'll remember Tigerstar, if I choose the path that's wrong.
I'll remember Dovewing, when I hear somthing far away.
I'll remember Cloudtail, when a kitten catches their first prey.
I'll remember Bluestar, whenever I must choose.
I'll remember Crowfeather, when the one I love, I loose.
Feathertail will be in my mind, whenever I must be brave.
And I'll remember the tribe, whenever I'm in a cave.
I'll remember Ashfur, whenever somebody breaks my heart.
I'll remember Barley, when me and my siblings are far apart.
I'll remember Ivypool, when I try to be the best.
I'll remember Firestar, when my loyalty's put to the test.
I'll remember Crookedstar, when someone abandons me.
I'll remember Ravenpaw, if I ever have to flee.
I'll remember Jayfeather, when I have a strange dream.
I'll think of Cherrytail and Sparrowpelt, whenever I eat cream.
I'll always think of Cinderpelt,whenever my leg feels sore.
I'll remember Longtail, when I can see no more.
I'll remember the many battles, when I see conflict or strife.
I promise to remember all of these cats, for the rest of my life.

And I am terrible at this,
And stupid at rhymes!

*This being Warriors poem writing

When someone is mean, I'll remember Moony,
Even when life seems pretty goony.
I'll remember tigerstar (Yeah, that's right, you don't even deserve to have your name capitalized, you worthless piece of dung!!!) when I see the evil in the world,
I know I'll think of Crookedstar when my life seems to unfurl.
I know I'll see Sandstorm when in life I have to take the leap,
And look down on missed chances with my dear Spottedleaf. (The best cat ever, who we all love).
And I promise not to be embarrassed, Thunder, if I have paws the size of gloves.
You will see me, Jagged Peak,
When I feel helpless, I feel weak.

When someone is mean, I'll remember Moony,
Even when life seems pretty goony.
I'll remember tigerstar (Yeah, that's right, you don't even deserve to have your name capitalized, you worthless piece of dung!!!) when I see the evil in the world,
I know I'll think of Crookedstar when my life seems to unfurl.
I know I'll see Sandstorm when in life I have to take the leap,
And look down on missed chances with my dear Spottedleaf. (The best cat ever, who we all love).
And I promise not to be embarrassed, Thunder, if I have paws the size of gloves.
You will see me, Jagged Peak,
When I feel helpless, I feel weak.

If anyone has ideas for improving the poem, tell me!

I think it's fine.

:)

:)

I have a good one but I did not write a single word of this but i like reading it to myself so here's one

I'll remember Brightheart,when I see a scar on someone's face.
I will think of Windclan, every time I win a race.
I'll remember Silverstream, when I see a young mother.
I'll remember Violet, when I worry about my brother.
I will remember Goosefeather,when no one believes me.
I will think of Scourge, when someone's teased for being tiny.
I'll remember Mothwing,when I find it hard to believe.
I'll be reminded of Princess, when I see someone who seems naive
I'll always think of Heathertail, when I see someone who wants to be "Just friends".
I will think of the many deaths, when I am near the end.
I will think of Tawnypelt, whenever I feel judged.
I will think of Darkstripe, when somebody holds a grudge.
I promise to remember Cinderheart, whenever I climb a tree.
I'll remember Midnight, whenever I'm at sea.
I'll remember Leafpool, when I must follow my heart.
I will think of Hollyleaf, if I ever fall apart.
I'll remember Brambleclaw, when I must prove myself.
I'll remember Spottedleaf, when I'm suffering from bad health.
I'll remember Lionblaze, when I am feeling strong.
I'll remember Tigerstar, if I choose the path that's wrong.
I'll remember Dovewing, when I hear somthing far away.
I'll remember Cloudtail, when a kitten catches their first prey.
I'll remember Bluestar, whenever I must choose.
I'll remember Crowfeather, when the one I love, I loose.
Feathertail will be in my mind, whenever I must be brave.
And I'll remember the tribe, whenever I'm in a cave.
I'll remember Ashfur, whenever somebody breaks my heart.
I'll remember Barley, when me and my siblings are far apart.
I'll remember Ivypool, when I try to be the best.
I'll remember Firestar, when my loyalty's put to the test.
I'll remember Crookedstar, when someone abandons me.
I'll remember Ravenpaw, if I ever have to flee.
I'll remember Jayfeather, when I have a strange dream.
I'll think of Cherrytail and Sparrowtail, whenever I eat cream.
I'll always think of Cinderpelt,whenever my leg feels sore.
I'll remember Longtail, when I can see no more.
I'll remember the many battles, when I see conflict or strife.
I promise to remember all of these cats, for the rest of my life.

That's good, but it's used for a lot of groups. Yours is good, but not original.

That's all true :)

When someone is mean, I'll remember Moony,
Even when life seems pretty goony.
I'll remember tigerstar (Yeah, that's right, you don't even deserve to have your name capitalized, you worthless piece of dung!!!) when I see the evil in the world,
I know I'll think of Crookedstar when my life seems to unfurl.
I know I'll see Sandstorm when in life I have to take the leap,
And look down on missed chances with my dear Spottedleaf. (The best cat ever, who we all love).
And I promise not to be embarrassed, Thunder, if I have paws the size of gloves.
You will see me, Jagged Peak,
When I feel helpless, I feel weak.

Does everyone like the oath? I'm not so good at this but...

I like it. Did I say that already? I think I did. Hmm...Well, I boke it a lot.

@Amberclaw

That is a great one, but it is used for a lot of groups. I might think about using some of the oaths/poems that are used for other groups but for now I think we can stick with the current stuff. Sorry!