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Harlequin Books (harlequinbooks) | 2401 comments Mod
We'll start and everyone can add a sentence. Let's see what kind of Romance we can create!
Please keep it clean. No swearing or graphic sexual references, please. Any questions, ask!
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Harlequin Books (harlequinbooks) | 2401 comments Mod
Let the romance begin! I'll start you off with the first sentence and everyone can add one more, each post to build our story. Here we go.

The air was crisp and refreshing, just what Marcy needed to focus on instead of not falling on her face and not thinking about strangling her friend Sally for recommending outdoor yoga.


message 3: by Tara (new)

Tara Quinn | 6 comments Or maybe she should just get to the point she was trying most to avoid, and think about strangling Alfonso - metaphorically of course.


message 4: by Christine (last edited Feb 08, 2016 07:39AM) (new)

Christine Rimmer | 8 comments The awful things he'd said last night echoed in her mind as the rain poured down and she struggled through an endless series of cat pose crunches.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Must focus on breath--not what he said as that rain poured down like tears she didn't shed--with her eyes closed, she faced the sun when her pose allowed.


message 6: by Julie (new)

Julie Miller (juliemiller) | 17 comments "Earth to Marcy--" a voice beside her teased, "just what are you trying to prove?"


message 7: by Anna (new)

Anna Patterson (romancenovelistannapatterson) | 4 comments So much for trying to forget. That voice was enough to scatter her thoughts into the deep pain in her heart.


message 8: by Elisabeth (new)

Elisabeth Hobbes (elisabethhobbes) | 23 comments "Now, I don't believe you're really concentrating on what I've been showing you, Marcy, is it?" came the deep, drawling voice of the instructor from somewhere up above her head.


message 9: by Missy (new)

Missy Tippens (missytippens) | 7 comments "Um, sorry," she grunted as she leaned back and looked into his twinkling brown eyes, the most gorgeous eyes she'd ever seen.


message 10: by Michele (new)

Michele Dunaway (micheledunaway) | 1 comments If she didn't start paying attention, she was going to be in big trouble, and not the kind you got out of easily.


message 11: by Elisabeth (new)

Elisabeth Hobbes (elisabethhobbes) | 23 comments "Place your hands a little further apart," the instructor said, kneeling beside her to demonstrate and bringing his face level with hers.


message 12: by Kat (new)

Kat Cantrell | 2 comments Fairly certain she'd regret it, she did exactly as he said because Marcy followed instructions, which might be her biggest flaw.


message 13: by Terri (new)

Terri Reed (terrireed) | 5 comments "Wonderful. You're doing great as I knew you would," Ken, the yoga master, murmured in her ear with approval that wrapped around her like a warm, cozy blanket.


message 14: by Christine (new)

Christine Rimmer | 8 comments Until she glanced up and saw Alphonso, dark eyes piercing her like daggers, standing under an oak not twenty feet away.


message 15: by Julie (new)

Julie Miller (juliemiller) | 17 comments A sudden chill filled the air around her, and the warmth of Ken's words quickly dissipated.


message 16: by Missy (new)

Missy Tippens (missytippens) | 7 comments Should she go talk to Alfonso, give him another chance?


message 17: by Kay Dee (what is your storygraph name? (last edited Feb 11, 2016 10:33AM) (new)

Kay Dee (what is your storygraph name? mine is in my bio. join me!) Meadows (kdf_333) Then she thought how did Alfonso know she'd be in the park doing yoga with Marcy?


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But the clarity of yoga and Ken's soft tone reminded her that Alfonso was like that, showing up at the worst possible moments.


message 19: by Julie (new)

Julie Miller (juliemiller) | 17 comments Ken straightened beside her, his voice hardening to a dark pitch as he asked, "Who's the Italian stallion over there, and what does he want with you?"


message 20: by Josh (new)

Josh (joshlanyon) | 17 comments "Don't ask," she muttered.


message 21: by Yvonne (last edited Feb 11, 2016 03:23PM) (new)

Yvonne Havelange Rediger | 1 comments Ken cocked one eyebrow at Marcy. "If you need help all you have to do is ask. No strings," he handed Marcy her water bottle.


message 22: by Julie (new)

Julie Miller (juliemiller) | 17 comments Marcy tilted her gaze up to Ken's to discover eyes that were a deep, rich blue, focused solely on her--and they were dead serious.


message 23: by Josh (new)

Josh (joshlanyon) | 17 comments "Hey!" Alfonso called out. "Marcy! Don't pretend you don't see me. Coz I sure see you."


message 24: by Erin (new)

Erin "Ignore him," Sally said without even pausing in her yoga flow. "You know he's intentionally trying to rile you up."


message 25: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca | 1 comments Although she knew that her best friend was right she just couldn't help herself, the words pouring from her mouth before she could stop them.


message 26: by Elisabeth (new)

Elisabeth Hobbes (elisabethhobbes) | 23 comments "Ken, will you do me a favour? When he looks over next, will you kiss me?"


message 27: by Reema (new)

Reema Banerjee (reethebee) She immediately regrets having said that when a stench dunked in onions and garlic peel travels across the distance to reach her nose.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

And as almost as suddenly, Ken obliges her in the most delicious kiss she's had in years.


message 29: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (givemeonereason) | 1 comments She thought that time might very well had stopped at that moment, but it was shortly out lived by a loud thump, a loud Alfonso.


message 30: by Gerd (new)

Gerd "Getting kissed as if it was the last time," she replied dreamily, still too cought up in the sensation to realize what just happened.


message 31: by Reema (new)

Reema Banerjee (reethebee) Reality came crashing down on Marcy when Alfonso's thick voice boomed, 'Think you need reminding about the money you owe me for sushi at Urasawa last night!'


message 32: by Reema (new)

Reema Banerjee (reethebee) Reality came crashing down on Marcy when Alfonso's thick voice boomed, 'Think you need reminding about the money you owe me for sushi at Urasawa last night!'


message 33: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 13, 2016 02:02PM) (new)

Ken's grey mysterious eyes focused on Marcy's eyes as if he was hypnotizing her to fall into his forbidden love ready to answer her


message 34: by Erma (new)

Erma Talamante (eitalamante) | 1 comments But he took her just as quickly by surprise as he stated, "I'm sorry, but I can't... Not tonight, anyway," he quickly amended.


message 35: by Rosemary (last edited Feb 21, 2016 01:46PM) (new)

Rosemary Bointon He looked back at Alfonso's threatening face: "How about we go out for a coffee after the yoga class is finished instead - no, better make that a juice, to keep up the good work?"


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