Reader's Paradise discussion

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Hi, I ‘am Sreehari P.V. I ‘am a final year B.Tech student in Kerala (India). Right from a young age I had enjoyed reading books. I read books of all kinds. I knew I could write, but still I didn’t give much attention to that interest until I reached third year of my college. Just as I began my third year of engineering (July 2014) certain things that happened in my life during the previous months made me think about writing a novel. I wanted it to be quite different from all the other novels that I had read. Hence the idea of twenty four days came to me. After writing the first two chapters and reading it, I got the confidence needed to pursue my writing. This was my first attempt at writing a novel. I have to admit that before this, I had not published short stories or other such works in any magazines and had not received any prizes in writing competitions.I’ am now residing along with my parents in Kannur in Kerala.I know I have to improve a lot, but right now I really hope that you like my work. If not, I still greatly wish to know your opinions.
( My novel is available for free today. I need your help to write better. Kindly share your views after reading.)TWENTY FOUR DAYS is available as an e-book on Amazon. Here I'am attaching the link.http://www.amazon.in/Twenty-Four-Days...