Writing is my Passion discussion

I love to read and write, and I also love big-cats and want to do something with animals in the future, I also want to be a published author.
Currently I'm working on a novel called Shadows of Light, though come November I'll start to write my NaNoWriMo novel, which is called The Seventh Dimension. I have an expert posted on goodreads... Hers all the links I'd love constructive critism for. Please, please, please read and comment:
Shadows of Light: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

The Painted Meadow:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

And an expert from The Seventh Dimension:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

wow.

Hmm?

It's really good. Could you click these eggs:

I added a lot more to chapter twenty, I didnt like the way it flowed and I also changed the title, please read and leave a comment :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Wow. That was a lot.

What do you mean?

It was a lot to read, but it was really good!

Thank you :] Any thing I should do to make it better :]

I'm not a good editor. Really, I wouldn't change a thing!


CLICK PLEASE!

okay... I've clicked the floaty one and the little one but then my computure started acting up...

np. Any click is good.

Haha, I'am starting to think that we need a topic for theses eggs

YEAH! It's fine. I'll stop posting them cause I believe everyone in this group has heard and clicked them.

Hahaha, Thanks Tiffany!!

Chapter Twenty-One for Shadows of Light is finished, please, please, please read and leave me a comment :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4702...

Maryam_Music Lover wrote: "Hahaha, Thanks Tiffany!!"

np.

I just wrote the first chapter of a story thats been nagging at me for a while called Watch it Fade, please, please, please tell me if you think its worth writing still, leave a comment for me please if you read it :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4937...

I've finished chapter four for The Black Rose, please, read and leave a comment :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

I just finished the prologue for a new book idea I've gotten called Blood Moon, please, please read and leave a comment for me :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

I will read that soon!:D

Kriss wrote: "I just wrote the first chapter of a story thats been nagging at me for a while called Watch it Fade, please, please, please tell me if you think its worth writing still, leave a comment for me plea..."

It's a little confusing.

Yes! I finished chapter six for Fallen. Please read and leave a comment :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Very good... just very lengthy...

Thank you :) And usually, the chapters aren't so long and drawn out... Most of the time they have more things happening in them.... The purpose for Chapter Five was mostly to give hints about the characters, and also because then i needed a "place filler" in the book, before the chapters start picking up again.

I've finished chapter eight for Fallen, please, please, please read and leave a comment... I really would like to know if this chapter flows right with the rest of the story or if its weird... :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Nice!

Thanks :) Does that chapter make sense, of does it seem randomish?

Yes! I finished chapter 9 for fallen, please, please read and leave a comment :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

I have to read Shadow of Light......and Fallen!!

Maryam_Music Lover wrote: "I have to read Shadow of Light......and Fallen!!"

Lol, yes you do!

Anyways, Hehe... Sorry it took me so long to finish chapter 10 for Fallen, but it's finally finished. Yay! :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Good... I like it...