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Vanessa
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Feb 22, 2020 07:12PM
Haiku World is a book of modern English haiku poems. The haiku is diverse in themes and subject. The haiku invoke the five senses to create vivid imagery and meaning. Available to read on kindle unlimited and paperback. Reviews welcome. https://www.amazon.com/HAIKU-WORLD-ku...
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A note to Vanessa, with respect. I am not commenting on the poems themselves. Your book is not well EDITED. There are errors of grammar and usage in the poems and in the flap copy. You should take it down, get editing help, and try again. If you are serious about your poetry enough to advocate for it here, you ought to polish it to perfection before you invest any further effort. Good luck.
If you pay attention to the meaning and not a few typos, you will not take the time to write this. I take my poetry writing seriously. The truth is most people enjoy Haiku World and my multiple poetry books. And if you are a language perfectionist good for you. And i invest my time by writing more poems. As you type this paragraph, i am almost finishing another poetry book. If it can only impact one person positively, my job is done. The book stays as it is.

