Writer's Myriad discussion

Please read and comment on my writing!!
I will love feedback!:D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Just Smile-a good story, but I think the characters need a bit more delevoping. It's a tree. Also, it would be "my mom and I" instead of "I and my mom". Also, it's I'm, not I' am.
Fix that and you've got a good start!
~Janeen

About the characters, I will go in to more futher detail about that, and about the grammar mistake I will fix that, thanks!!:D

You are welcome!! :D

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Has anyone read Dragoons? I need alot of help with that story...well..only the character pictures...I can't seem to find a perfect picture for Hannigan ANYWHERE!

I haven't. OH IS IT A NEW STORY YOU WRITE EMMMA??Grr..I will read it soon!

Here, it's called Dragoons.

www.fictionpress.com/~sccout

I have two stories on this account.

Scout (Emma) wrote: "Here, it's called Dragoons.

www.fictionpress.com/~sccout

I have two stories on this account."

Oh, but is it on your GR account too....I need to read the new chapters of Tree of Memories!!

Yeah it is.

Oh Ok!I'll read them soon!:]]

:D okay!

Scout (Emma) wrote: "Here, it's called Dragoons.

www.fictionpress.com/~sccout

I have two stories on this account."

Is fiction press like gr..?

No, it's a website JUST for your own writing, and you can read other peoples writing too.

oh ok!

Yep!

=)

Chapter 2 of Bloodshot!!:D

Just read both those stories Maryam, are you going to write more on Just Smile?
Bloodshot has a good beginning, but I want to find out more! You need to post more please!

I will right more of BOTH stories, I just havent gotten enough time lately to sit down and write peacefully, but yes but stories ARE going to be continued!!