Writer's Myriad discussion

I've written two stories. The second one is a sequel of the first and I'm in the middle of writing a third one that is concluding the first two! Please read and review!

First Story: Liv Book 1 (finished)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Second Story: Liv Book 2 (finished)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Third Story: Liv Book 3 (unfinished)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

you can be harsh, just not too harsh! i want to know your honest opinions!!!

WAIT A MINUTE..........I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING....I HAVE READ LIV BOOK 1 AND 2!!
IT WAS ONE OF MY FAVE STORIES ON GR!!!I EVEN COMMENTED..but that was from my old account!!
I never knew you had written a third story!!
YAYY!!
I'AM GOING TO READ IT SOON!!

OMG! thats cool! thanks! yeah, i'm in the middle of writing Liv 3!

I love your name Music lover,daughter of Aphrodite, HP rox!!!!!!!

thanks! wait do you mean my name, Emily? or my profile name?

your profile name!!

thanks!

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thanks!

I read the first book and I liked it!! Good job!! :)

thankyou!

Ok, started reading the first book and got about halfway through. Romance isn't really my genre, but I think Liv seems more than a little desperate, and unsure of herself.

I read two chapters, and I have a question: Why is she in love with him? What is the reason?

very good question....

she's been friend's with him her whole life and over time, she's fallen in love with him.....
at first, it's kind've infatuation, but it turns into true love......

sorry, i'm not too good at explaining!

DragonEyedMovingCastle Maniac wrote: "Ok, started reading the first book and got about halfway through. Romance isn't really my genre, but I think Liv seems more than a little desperate, and unsure of herself. "

yes, she's not really sure of herself at all....
all she really knows is that she's in love with Brody
she doesn't really even think about anything else... at first