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(view spoiler)[I sit in the corner lost and alone
the voices of time, in my ears, they all drone

forgotten and injured with spears of dead wood
They‘ve all gone right past me, all those that could

The song in my head, with perpetual tunes
blowing and shifting like some old sand dunes

creatures of space, rulers of time
you’re dreams in my head, I see you all mime

in grayscale and black, with sun bursting vines
your words tumble over and all cross the lines

my dreams overruled by the great pantomime
With creatures of space and rulers of time.
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Wow, I love the descriptive and the rhythm on this one Rhy! Great job!

Thanks...I wrote this in the middle of my history class...I have no idea where it came from. :)

Well it's brilliant nonetheless!

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As a teacher - reading that you wrote this during your history class, I think "Great writing!" You create such wonderful images with your words.

Thanks, Travis. and as for writing during class, it didn't take long and we weren't doing much that day anyways. :)

I think this is my favorite poem so far

This is a fantastic poem! I love the rhythmic flow of the words. The imagery is amazing too. I'm picturing Time Lords and Daleks! Too much Doctor Who for me lately, sorry. :)

That's okay. Doctor Who is awesome...keep watching it. :)

I wish I was just productive when we weren't doing anything in class. Me, I'm just like freetime awesome, now I can daydream and do nothing for 10 minutes.

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