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(view spoiler)[The marionettes dance, they climb, and they fall
Their strings keep them up and help them stand tall

With paint on their faces, most smile and laugh
But frowns will appear on all but a half

loose joints and clear strings
wood limbs, the bell rings

the show will now start and time seems to speed
the stories are deep to all those that heed

Crowds laugh and they cry
shake hands, say goodbye

alone in a room with wood all around
the puppeteer falls on the ground

The street corner’s quiet, where, once, there was noise
people walk by and mourn the dead toys
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EEEKk! I LOVE this!!!!! I actually wanted to write marionette story, it was kind of a darker spin of (Disney's) Pinocchio.

My poems don't make any sense...

Thanks Emmeline! :)

Puppets are fun!

Rhystlynne wrote: "My poems don't make any sense..."

Nah, they make perfect sense. ;)

Do they? They just seem really out there, I guess. :)

I just added another line because when I transferred it over, the last line got cut off.

I think I actually kind of like the new ending. It just makes the other scene come to life a bit more.

Thanks I wrote it with this ending, but the sentence got lost in the transfer. :)

Love it Rhy

thanks :)

What a great poem! It has feeling and a great (but sad) story. Well done, Rhystlynne!

:) thank you