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I has very many songs but I won't post all of them. I also have a 5 book series which is currently in the editing stage so I'm probably gonna ask a bunch of questions to see which way of death is the most exciting, what's the best name for something/someone etc

I need a name for a poison that makes people forget their memories. Pls help. I've been trying to think of one 4 days

Wow um...

I’m bad at names

But I know someone who’s good at them

But rn she’s busy losing in her card game but I’ll ask her to help you later

Ok thanks. I used all my creative juices trying but figure out a good way to kill someone so now I can't figure out a name

Lol I read this writing tips thingy where they said: shoot someone, that always catches the readers attention

Yeah I shot him three times. He's definitely dead now. He was the bad guy tho

Well that’s good to hear, (I hope he’s dead he better be)

The identity of the bad guy was just passed on to the main character's dad so...maybe it was better when he was alive *shrugs*

Oh well he’s ded so I guess nothing we can do except...go back in time!

Time travels not brought in until book 4 :p

This is the chorus to one of my songs it's called Lead Me Through the Dark

Lead me through the dark when I cannot see
Lead me through the sun when it's blinding me
I need you here beside me
Please stay through the day and night
And through the darkness into light

Did you write that? That's awesome!

Yeah. Thanks. I have 40 something songs a lot of them are not good

Please, have you seen. mine?

I've read through some of them their good

Thanks. This chorus is too.

I applied for this performing arts school and I'm waiting to figure out if I got in. its torture

I hope you do!

Me too I've been waiting to apply for years now and I'm finally old enough. I should find out next week

Fingers crossed!

Yep

Ahh, I'm stuck on my new song. I can't think of a sound for the chorus.

That happens to me all the time so a lot of my songs the same or really similar tune. I've got three songs that are only choruses and I can't figure out the verses or bridge

I could help with the lyrics!

Ok the here's the chorus to one of them

I'm standing in the flames
Planes crash and burn
There's chaos around me and I cannot hear
The screaming and crying above all my fear

look around, feel nothing. Bones crush, everything stings, life doesn't seem like much. Not brave, not bold, can't trust, no promise to hold, disappearing into the fire.

Smoke spreads through the air
There's dust rubble everywhere
Only one thing in life is clear
I only know that know that no one else is here
I'm standing alone in the fire
There's chaos everywhere

I just want a peace
A moment of silence
is that too much too ask
Ashes fall into my eyes
blinding me to space and time
So you chose to attack now?

There's too much pain and too much noise
Will it ever stop?
Just for a moment
Just a moment where there'd be no fear and no more pain
The flames would be doused out by rain
The smoke would clear
The sun would shine
And I'll learn it was all in my mind
But just for a moment I can see the sun

Then a slower chorus, with the production minamilized?

Yeah

Sounds good!

Then Finale:

There'd be no crash and no more burn
I'd see a world no one deserves
Then it'll all fall down again
but just for a moment I'll be in the sun

Love it

Yep

Maybe I'll write some chords for it some time

Yay.

I can hear a drum part in my mind but I can't play percussion so I can't do anything about it

Yeah, me neither.

Maybe some day I'll figure it out but 4 now I'm stuck with ukulele and a pencil

Lol, same

I'm completely self taught on Ukulele so I'm not even that good at that

I was taught by someone eksw

I was taught by someone else

I just stated lessons a few weeks ago so hopefully I'll get better and remember the right chords because I read the chart wrong and I was playing like 3 different chords wrong

Oh no. Well, I hope it goes well!