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This is my poem:

Susie Clues was not in the mood to be kind
She was rushing and fussing over all the things
And when she boohooed her peers her teacher told her to "be a dear".
She continued to be mean not wanting to be seen but when she got home her mother told her to be kind.
Susie Clues didn't listen even when her mother said to be glisten.
I don't need permission, she thought, I'm fine on my own.

This little girl was on a mission and no one was going to give her admonition.
someone asked her if she was fine she replied with no sense of mind
she was in a bind her friends said if only you'll be kind
She said she tried but how can I be kind when I'm in a bind?
Susie Clues tried to be free of stress eventually she understood what to do, what to say, and what to pursue.
so you see to look behind the act of kind
is to remind you can find a bright light in the midst of grind.

It’s about treating others the way you want to be treated but I know like nothing about poems so excuse me if I didn’t follow the 5,7,5 rule.

This is my very first poem ever!

First poem ever?! Woow good joob