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Elisabeth aka Elsie(Taylor's version)
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Apr 12, 2021 07:11AM
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Ok, i PRETTY MUCH Don't like it, much, but I'd like some thoughts!
Chapter One: Olivia - I Can't Have Peace and QuietEVEN BEFORE MY BEACH HOUSE EXPLODED, I was having a very bad day. I woke up and couldn't find my wand anywhere, the kitchen was frozen since I forgot to close the air conditioning which was at -0, and I overslept by 3 hours.
Which were not necessarily the worst parts.
3 hours of unfreezing the kitchen when I finally realized I could've done it in 5 minutes if I had used my speed or my wand. I was starving though when I heard a knock on her door, I was wondering who it was since I specifically told everyone I knew not to disturb me.
Seriously, Olivia thought can't anyone listen to what I told them. I heard the knock again and this time I went to open the door. I was surprised to see Matt with flowers who I realized I had not told to not come see me.
How can I be so dumb to not tell him we were kind of dating so it was kind of obvious he was gonna come see me I thought.
"Ugh li Hi."
That was embarrassing. I thought I can't even say Hi properly, he's gonna run out like I am some creepy person, seriously he's gonna hate me after what I just said ugh li Hi. I think I just offended him, oh no.
Matt put the flowers on the table and sat down. "Olivia, you okay?"
He wore new blue jeans, black converse, and a blue hoodie. His hair was wet and not brushed.
"Sooo..." Matt started to say.
What do I say um... maybe I could say what's up, no to casual, what about hi, no I already said that creepily.
"Earth to Olivia" Matt called out.
Oh no, Olivia I thought DON'T EMBARRASS YOURSELF you got this.
"Hey, Matt what brings you here" I said surprised I didn't embarrass myself by saying something stupid.
"Oh, nothing really..." Matt started to say.
I didn't really hear anything he said next because I started to get dreamy. He's so cute and I'm so not, how does he like me? I'm the opposite of him. It makes no sense but I can try to make him last as long as I can because he will break up with me eventually so make the best of it Olivia I thought.
I heard another knock on my door this time. I was annoyed since I was pretty sure I had told everyone but Matt not to disturb me or I guess did not or nobody ever listened to me.
I opened the door and saw Via.
Seriously, I thought VIA what's she doing here I did tell her didn't I please tell me I did.
Oh, who am I kidding I'm pretty sure I haven't told anyone which now I realize is a bad thing.
"Hey, Olivia... and Matt" Via mumbled the last part.
"What brings you here?" I said a louder than I expected to say.
"I wanted to talk about something with you... but I guess you have company" she said, giving Matt a dirty and skeptical look which he didn't seem to notice, which meant I was still on the hook.
Then after 2 minutes of me trying to make small talk I heard chattering outside my door, now I was sure I hadn't told anybody not to come visit me.
The Chattering lasted for about another 30 seconds but by 25 seconds I just yelled at them to come inside.
Turns out I really hadn't told anybody because the people chattering outside were Nora and Jack. (P.S if you're wondering Nora West-Allen and Jack Rogers in case you thought it was some other Nora and Jack).
So anyways yata, yata, yata everyone needed me to help them with something except Matt who was incredibly patient.
Eventually I mostly helped everyone with what they wanted I said mostly because I didn't exactly help Nora since the thing she wanted me to do for her went against my rules but now that I think about it the only reason she really came to me was because I am the only person that might do it also I'm pretty sure after Nora met me she lost her sense of reality like everyone else I met did.
So anyways again, I helped Via with a potion, fixed Jack's shield and did not help Nora.
I would say it is an accomplishment but it took me 45 minutes to do just those 2 things and a lot of debating.
It's not an accomplishment at all.
After 45 minutes I could finally have a break but turns outs everyone wanted to chill, IN MY HOUSE!
Then I heard a beep and I was pretty sure I was going to throw something in somebody's face if I saw another person come into this house, right now.
Too late, 2 seconds later Via asked me what the beeping was when I realized that was BOMB ALERT! We had to get out now!
"Guy's we have to get out now or we'll be blasted into pieces" I yelled.
BOOM! I was too late, I was going to die in a bomb explosion not the way I expected to at all.
I like this! It starts off with an interesting character with a normal life and then her life, quite literally, blows up.
Blob Fest! wrote: "does anyone want to hear chapter 2?"YES
Yes I want to read chapter two!!!!!!!
Chapter 2: Olivia - We Are Not DeadSeconds, minutes, hours passed I don't really know when I felt a warm hand shaking me only then did I realize I was not dead. It was a miracle.
I also realized all of us had passed out for a while.
I was still a little dazed but ok Matt was the first to wake up and he woke me up next.
I was still trying to process the part that I was not dead. It really was a miracle.
Me and Matt started shaking the other while they woke up they all seemed to be alive too.
Everyone was dazed when they woke up, but I was pretty sure Nora hit her head very hard because she kept saying we were in heaven and that we were ghosts even though everyone told her we were alive and we are not in heaven.
"How'd we survive this, this is crazy!" Jack exclaimed, still a little dazed.
"However we did, be happy we're not dead like Nora keeps saying" Via said not making eye contact with anyone.
"Uh guys..." Nora exclaimed she said something else after Uh guys but I didn't hear what she said since everyone was arguing plus I wasn't even paying attention.
After 2 minutes of Nora trying to be patient she yelled "LOOK ABOVE YOU!"
Which totally got my attention and everybody elses especially Via who looked like she had just forgotten the rules of life. (her expression was kind of funny).
"The thing Nora asked us to look at was a machine, a humongous machine bigger than an airplane though I've never exactly been an airplane before, a helicopter yes but an airplane no because Daughter of Poseidon god of Sea, horses, earthquakes, etc. I do not do good when in the air.
So anyways after staring at the thing for like 10 minutes it seemed to be a giant blue robotic lion.
Jack was the first to point it out but, I was pretty sure everyone was thinking the same thing that this giant blue robotic lion had saved our lives.
In my opinion that wasn't the craziest thing that had happened to me.
A few more minutes of staring at it when the giant blue robotic lion opened its mouth on the ground it seemed like it wanted us to go inside it.
Which is what we eventually did after a lot arguing, turning backs and threats.
We weren't exactly going to really go inside but Nora was one step ahead of us, she already went inside before we could decide to go in or not and we were not very comfortable with Nora going in it alone (I was kind of fine of letting Nora stay in there alone it was Jack's concern that made us go in).
I enjoy this! I am kind of getting the characters mixed up haha but it's super good!
By the way, there are gonna be chapters on other characters points of view
Ahhh I just saw the chapters, I’ll make sure to read them soon, after I finish school
Elisabeth wrote: "Ahhh I just saw the chapters, I’ll make sure to read them soon, after I finish school"Oki!!
Ah those are so cool! It starts with the action in the very first sentence and I like the humor inside it, it makes me smile. Good job!
Elisabeth wrote: "Ah those are so cool! It starts with the action in the very first sentence and I like the humor inside it, it makes me smile. Good job!"tHNX!!
Blobbie! wrote: "Does anybody want chapter 3?"yes!
