Poetry For All discussion

Beautiful, and I love the rhyme scheme. It kinda creates a feeling of the loneliness becoming nothing more than a cycle, like it will never end. :)

I'd love to read them, if of course you're comfortable sharing them

No pressure!

This one is painful in the best way :)

YES
are these based on real life?

YESSSSSSSSS
DO IT

YES!!!!!

And hey, no worries, I'm pretty busy to so i may not even see them tomorrow

Is this one related to your rant in the other group?

It's excellent

Superb!
If I may add on

Qamar قمر wrote: "Btw saw a few of your poems, @Sophia. They were really good :)"

Thanks!

Qamar قمر wrote: "They had a softer tone than mine which I like :)"

It's kinda just how I was feeling ;-;

Oh Splended! That's so wonderfulll!!

It has so much more passion when it's real, and personally that's what i love about poetry, showing your hatred and all the ugly bits in a beautiful art form

and drag it out, and give it some claws, in a sense :)

Yes!! Second person poems *chef's kiss*

Exactly!!

Qamar قمر wrote: "*SUICIDE WARNING*
We were perfect, I knew
And I had nobody doubting our love wasn't true
And I didn't doubt myself
Cause you were the best
You put my love-longing heart to rest

Cause I met you a ..."

This one is very Romeo and Juliet in the best way

Poems Amazing!!!!