Hi Guys, can you guys help me and read over the first chapter of my book please. The story has not been released yet (I'm still in the process of writing it).
The title is Wearing My Invisible Crown.
It is from the perspective of a teenage girl being bullied after she moves to a new town. She is the older sibling and so she feels as though she needs to be perfect (almost like Elsa from Frozen). It is inspired by my own experiences.
I am a young author so any feedback you have would be deeply appreciated. Thank you so much in advance!
The title is Wearing My Invisible Crown.
It is from the perspective of a teenage girl being bullied after she moves to a new town. She is the older sibling and so she feels as though she needs to be perfect (almost like Elsa from Frozen). It is inspired by my own experiences.
I am a young author so any feedback you have would be deeply appreciated. Thank you so much in advance!
p.s It is completely free, with zero downloads xx
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/PywpQlN