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John wrote: "Hi! I'd love for someone to have a read of a short novel I've written. Blurb:
Nobody expected the world to end the way that it did.
Everything started getting darker and darker. The dark became..."
Hi John
Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I have tried sending a message but it isn’t working. I have read the first chapter of your book and it seems very promising so yes I am interested in reading your manuscript. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks.
My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.
You can check the link below for my testimonials
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together
Blurb:
Nobody expected the world to end the way that it did.
Everything started getting darker and darker. The dark became real, and thick, and swallowed everything that it touched. It was a physical thing.
Trey heaved himself to his cabin, retching on the thickness of it, and shut himself inside. The darkness rose all around, lapping on the wood, but didn't get inside. He turned on all of the lights, and lit a fire, and hid from the dark.
Everything else was gone. Trey just hid.
Until then, about three months after the world ended, when nothing existed anymore in the whole universe except for that one cabin, there came a knock at the door.
If you're interested in viewing the first three chapters, you can read (and comment) here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11...
If you'd like to read more after that, please just send me a message or leave a comment on the Google Docs form!