The Writing Corner discussion

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that was good regan!

your welcome!

kool!

goodreads.com/story/show/50351-trappe...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

BLOOD OF ANGELS: *ongoing*
Young Adult Horror
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

TAKEN: *completed*
Teenage Thriller
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...

read the description first!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... (PROLOGUE)

and for Chapter One, I need help with a title

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... (CHAPTER ONE)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

I just started writing this... plz read it and tell me if it's good so far or not.

Kristin wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

I just started writing this... plz read it and tell me if it's good so far or not."

It is good. I think that you jump too much from character to character (unless that is your style and you feel comfortable with it). If you do all Meridyth's point of view and then do all of Zak's-or vise versa- then it wouldn't be so choppy.

Please don't take this too harshly. I am 12 years old and you might not think I know what I am talking about. I was just trying to give some advise and tell you my honest opinion. We are all just doing freindly critiques here. :)

I'm 12 too!!!

Ya... so like I should do one chapter in Meridyth's POV and then one in Zak's?

Or, you could do one half in Meridyth's POV, then the other half in Zak's. Split it up so it isn't so skippy maybe. But that is just my opinion. (I hate feeling like i am telling you what to do like a control freak)

I am trying to decide if I should put up this new story or wait until I get further along....

I'll post soon!!! I have a couple retellings.

Cool!!