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Luke run through the dark, creepy woods running from....

He heard hoots and howls deep into the woods..

It was midnight and every shadow seemed like an enemy

Where was he supposed to hide from that...monster now?

His knees were week from fatigue, all he had wanted to do was save the one he loved

He knelt on the ground,struggling to catch his breath.

(INVITE!!)

He herd a ear splitting howl of pain

(Gotcha!)
He looked around the forest.

(-_ you better :?p lol jks)

Whispers came from all around, from the trees, the ground

He felt the ground move beneath his feet.

He stumbled, grabing onto a tree

He righted himself and heard a growl come from behind him.

(off will reply here tomorrw)

bye:(

He gasped and run as fast as he could

He had to save her from that beast.

And he had only one choice.

(brr...mind blacnk)

"Karmen!" He called as he continued running.

(((i liv the name Karmen)))

(lol, i love the names luke, winter, Julia, alex, jace....jason)

He was out of breathe, why did this ahve to happen to his LOVE?!

He couldn't take this anymore.

(lol, its funny how everyone is tryeing to give the job of writting waht things are to otehrs...()


He crumpled to the ground, unconshious...

(I do that all the time.Just so you know,I'm just helping you out to showcase your inner potential as a writer.You should be glad)
When he woke up in what felt like hours he experienced a searing pain in his head.

(lol)


He was in a grey room, alone, shaclked

(oooh.....lets go with one of my story's plot then >:) )

(awesome.let's make this a one on one then)
He looked up when he heard footsteps coming from the far end of a corridor.

(......................................................this public, one on one will magically apeare when you get back)

A man came in and grabbed him roughly and took him to this other room where he was strapped to a chair, *breathe* and the machine was turned on sending pain and agony through his body, he felt all his energy drain out of him,\.

He cried out but it only intensified the pain

(lol ..is it me or am i trollling?)

Gaurds came and took him into a new room, this one pitch black...hey didn't bother shackiling him since they knew he was too weak to fight

He heard nothing else except the fading footsteps of his captors

Luke smelled sweat and heard ragged braething that were not hs own

And then he heard a vicious howl from the far corner of the room.

The howl faded off. Scuffling sounded and two yellow eyes appeared. There was a snarl.

He heard a scream, he wasn't alone

There,opposite him,stood a figure trembling,crawling it's way towards him.

(O_O mind blank)

For a minute he was paralyzed,contemplating his next move.

He screamed out when the thing lept at him

The thing tore his arm open and feasted on his blood, keeping Luke alive and afraid.

The beast turned away from him, suddenly, as a voice cried out, "No, Luke!"

Luke groaned. He could have sworn he had just heard his sister call his name, but it could have been blood loss.

"Luke, no!" the little girl leaned over and shook him, "Luke! Wake up!"

The beast returned, fully visible for the first time. It was like a wolf and bear, black and covered in scars...

She whimpered and looked down at Luke, "Please wake up."

The yellow eyes fastened onto the girl. It licked its lips, still caked in blood. Was it like the bad men? It wondered.

She whimpered again and tried to cover Luke's body with her own, "Please, don't hurt him anymore!"

Luke stirred. "What's going on?" he asked.

She whimpered and looked at the creature.

It growled, smelling fear.