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so..i heav e a plot....its a plan for 4 books:

air
Fire
water
earth or w/e order

its about theese kids with powers oover elements. first girl controls air. :D good sound to you ? also she falls in love with the boy with the power of fire

Sounds great!
So don't we first need to sort out the characters?

*sigh* sue, where are the characters:

wel from teh story, we can change the names

by the way wrote this idea when i was 13/14

Air: Aora (ugh, y hat name?), 13, grey eyes, pale skin, long, wavy blonde hair ('cauxse ofher power i think), big scar across her face (remember, wrote this last year(

Water: Alex, choppy black hair, blue eyes, 13, normal skin

Earth: Lil(l)y, shoulder lrngth brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin, 13

fire: short copper hair, gold eyes, olive skin, 13, luke


i wrote like 5 chapters but then i ;ost the workbook i wrote it in :'( all that hard work!!

Hmm...let's change the guy's name..Luke...to something more exotic.Whaddya say?
I like the girl's name..Aora-now that sounds exotic!
So yeah the plot's pretty good,all we have to do now is build a character for each one.
Let Aora be rude and arrogant to begin with.She can also be very compassionate when it comes down to the poeple whom she cares about.
.........

but... luke's my fav male name....oh ok

:P lol

waora: in my story her parents died by some unknown cause in my mind since i haven't figure that out yet. She lived with her grandparents 'till she was chased by these men who finally catch her and take her to this prision place. She is put on the electrocution type chair where all her energy and unfound power is sucked away from her. She is taken to another cells where the other 3 are. then these people come and rescue them but aora thinks they are bad people so she fights then (3 days atfter she lost her energy) and she uses her power :P and so deos luke...and she runs away and holds onto teh bottem of the ppl's truck adn they drive to this place where she gets off and runs to the nearest town... the leader dude has her power...aka they also have elemental powers and they were gonna teach them how to use them or something....


that was a s far as i had gottem

wait..does aora know about her powers in the very beginning of the story?

oh and I said to change Luke's name not because I don't like it but because I thought it was a very common name

1) nope, aora deosn't know anything
2) i know, i know, I KNOW!! CHill ^_^ on another site that wazs a name i used to use... CHil ^_^ he ehe h

i'm chillin all right!No tensions whatsoever :P

:P

but i don't think aora should be a mean/ beach

she should be a shy girl

i think chil should be...chill ^_^

I hate girls who are shy because they portray such a vulnerable character.And our female lead should be strong.
Oh and she isn't rude to everyone.Just the ones she don't know.maybe a little mysterious and introvert and then comes Luke and poof! she becomes and even better person than she used to be...

hmmm.......how about she is like...looks shy and weak but she reallyis strong-willed and a kick-ass beach at first then she meets luke and is like that to him really mena 'cause he is chilly and mesyrious and dark to her adn then she discovers more of his persionality and falls in love

works for me!

but I don't want her to be whiny and needy like some other *cough*bella*cough* characters.

yep bo worries....

HEY I GOT AN IDEA! this is what i did with my friend, instead of heaving a roleplay lets write one line at a time than it will become a full story1!!

cool!Let's just let it flow

.......wanna start? starts off with her being chased

(all right.i'm starting)

There was not a single star in the sky above.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.

As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.

(hey , add the comment with the otehr sso later on we can use it as a story)

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.

will reply tomorrow

...O_O i mean later on today

okie:)

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
Her vreathing got ragged from fear.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wsn't alone., another one grsbbed me from behind.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.

The kidnapping's over.Hey don't we need chapters or something?

....yeah thats teh proglgue..ui ahve the chpters all figured out.

....yeah thats teh proglgue..ui ahve the chpters all figured out.ll in dot point only different:

chpt 1: the kidnappe, my version has a chase in it.
cht2:she finds herswelf in clel with 1 window with moonlights and its too small to do anything other than give light. water gets thrown in.2 days past without them getting any food only water from the cell's bathroom. earth gets thrown in.on air;s 5th day a man comes and takes water away (person). the man comes back, takes earth awat. end chpt 2/1

Ok so your chance to write the next line now.

kk

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into teh darkness of unconsiousness

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.
When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.

When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.
I opened my heavy eyelids to see the moon bright in teh sky, its rays like lasers after bthat horrid darkness.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.

When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.
I opened my heavy eyelids to see the moon bright in teh sky, its rays like lasers after bthat horrid darkness.

Before I could start panicking I heard a screech somewhere.

There was not a single star in the sky above.
The moon was hidden behind grey couds.
As I made my way through the dark alley,I thought I heard footsteps behind me.
Was it a stalker? I shivered.
I willed myself to be brave as I walked on ahead
My heart beat faster as the foosteps got closer.
From the corner of my eye I saw a movement.
My breathing got ragged from fear.
The next thing I knew someone had leaped in front of me with a cloth in his hand.
I scream but no one is around.
I backed away frantically but didn't get too far.
The man wasn't alone, another one grabbed me from behind.
The first man had covered by nose with the cloth in his hand and before I passed out I realized that it was choroform.
I passed out into the darkness of unconsiousness.

When I woke up,I was blinded because of the sudden brightness.
I opened my heavy eyelids to see the moon bright in teh sky, its rays like lasers after bthat horrid darkness.

Before I could start panicking I heard a screech somewhere.
I tryed to get up to see what it was but found my wrists shakled.

(a screech?)