Write and Discuss discussion

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Olivia wrote: "Hannah.
I have just finished your writing.
Please write more, It is really good.
I commented on each chapter.
Remember to Start a new line each time you directed speech.
Please keep writting more...."

thank you sooo much, I'll try to proof read soon and i'll keep adding on.

Hannah wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3..."

Thats an amazing start, very creative of you :)
Keep it up Hannah!

Valerie wrote: "Hannah wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3..."

Thats an amazing start, very creative of you :)
Keep it up Hannah!"

thank you :)